Chapter 10

For Better Or Worse

 



Chapter 10


I sank back against the wall, holding the back of my hand over my mouth, trying to make sense of it all.

"W-what? No, that can’t be right. She said she wasn’t going to die. She said…"

 

The young nurse shook her head, exhaustion stamped into every line of her face.

"Believe me, I'd give anything to tell you otherwise. I... I can't… She wasn't..."

The nurse covered her face with her hands and started crying, tears rolling down her cheeks.

Sunggyu, being the gentleman he was, embraced her and let her vent.

 

Her sobs, muffled though they were against Sunggyu's chest, were still loud enough to alert the others that something was very wrong.

Sungyeol buried his face in his knees, and Dongwoo patted his back sympathetically, dashing tears out of his eyes.

I could see Woohyun and Hoya clenching and unclenching their fists, faces turned towards the ceiling.

A well-meant attempt to keep from crying.

A failed attempt... tears rolled down their cheeks.

Sungjong, thank God, didn't wake up, although he frowned in his sleep and murmured something about "_______ -noona..."

 

Sungkyu was busy trying to console the poor nurse, who was sobbing uncontrollably.

I couldn't believe it. This had to be one massive prank.

Despite your initial shyness, you'd gotten a taste for pranks.

The flour bombs with Sungjong, the spiked drinks with Sungyeol.

The icing smudged on cheeks.

The sudden disappearances and reappearances.

All accompanied by barely stifled giggles or outright laughter.

Time to unmask your latest trick.

I pushed off the wall and walked into the OR.

 

I don't know how I did it, but I managed to get halfway to you before someone shouted.

"Hey, you're not supposed to be in here!"

Oh, I beg to differ.

 

A male nurse attempted to get in my way, but I just shoved him out of the way to get to you.

Pandemonium broke out then, centering around me.

Nurses and doctors tried to restrain me, but I shook loose of them.

I got close enough to touch your hand one last time before I was dragged away.

It was cool... lifeless.

You didn't sit up and start laughing... Got you, L-oppa!

This wasn't a prank...

 

As my legs betrayed me and sent my knees crashing to the ground, I heard heart-wrenching sobs in the distance.

"_______, no! You can't leave me like this! You promised!"

I was still wondering who was crying out like that when I felt a stinging sensation in my arm...

And my world went black.




 

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cherLynmyung #1
Chapter 12: Love this so much!! It's Si different from others ♡
KaiOlly
#2
Chapter 12: Well, author-nim I'm here to give you the review that I made for this story. Ok, here goes! :)

1. Fore word - 90/100

The foreword is good. It has pics and a good synopsis. The poster is nice to. The infos are good to. Noting much to comment really

2. Pictures - 90/100

The pics you put on the foreword is still not enough. I could only say that the poster suits well with the story. It give u the vibe :) Better you added in more pics.

3. Story plot - 95/100

I'm in love with your story plot! The story plot us well written and it's really interesting. The genre angst really works well with tis story. I say good one! :D

4. English - 96/100

It was a pleasant use of English that u used to describe it all. The English is not bad and the vocal is good too! I think that anyone that reads it would most likely find it pleasing :)

5. Writing style - 96/100

I sort of liked your writing style in this story! The way you write it, is easy for me to get the atmosphere, the feelings and to understand the whole story :) Although, there are a few parts that I find quite hard to catch, still it's something that you shouldn't worry bout.

6. Total markings : 93%

Some marks you got there! Overall, I think that this story is really amazing! I enjoyed reading this! It makes me want to read this non-stop, but unfortunately, I must stop and good thing must come to an end. The story has its perfect ending, even though it's a sad one. I liked it how you relate the domestic violence in this story and gave out advice for the readers, it's nice of you to do that. I shall say, thank you for writing this kind of story and madew me enjoyed reading it ^^~

Lastly, thank you s much for choosing 'Butter Review Shop' to review your marvellous fic! Hope that you are not offended/pissed/angry at me. So, we are still cool, yea...? :D See you next time! (^_^)V *sorry for the typos*
KaiOlly
#3
Chapter 12: Yes you are correct! 100% correct!
KaiOlly
#4
Chapter 11: Oh my gawd.... Seriously, this chap is really sad T.T I can't believe that she died. Serve Seunghyun rights for treating her that way. I wish that Myungsoo would just beat the hell out of him.
KaiOlly
#5
Chapter 2: OMOG! Myungsoo and a marred woman?! How bad can he get? ^^
KaiOlly
#6
Chapter 1: Nice 1st chap! It's really....short and simple :)
JungChaeWon #7
Chapter 2: Omg i love your poster!!! Nice fic!!
-2Mirae-
14 streak #8
Chapter 12: This story is so sad!!! I hate how there are those type of people in this world T.T i feel sad for her and her children and L.....
Anyways..... I cried in almost every chapter ;A; ♥
cuteheartbreaker13
#9
Chapter 12: I luv the story but its sooo sad TT^TT
inSHININGspirit
#10
Chapter 12: OMG this is the first story which i read which made me cry. :') I agree that domestic violence is not a joke. i really love your style of writing btw. ^^