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A DREAM IN PROGRESS

- Title 3/5: The title is kinda simple, but I love it. It totally suits your story style. However, it somehow doesn't make me feel curious about your fiction.

- Appearance 8/15: I have to say that excepting for the wonderful poster, you fiction isn't eye-catching at all. It looks too simple. You should change the font, change the colors (in your foreword), add the title above your chapter,... Just decorate it. That's really important to get a higher views.

- Characterization 5/10: The characters in your story are too common. I mean, they're not unique. I can easily find those types of roles in many other stories. But that doesn't mean that they're not good. They have their simple attitudes, but you can make them more interesting! :)

- Foreword 18/20: I love the foreword which doesn't contain too many things. In short, I like your foreword.

- Storyline/Plot 18/25: The general plot is not interesting ( to me). I like something more different from the other fics, but your storyline is a bit similiar. The flow doesn't catch my interest, either. In my opinion, the first chapter is a little boring, but good that that you didn't let it flow too fast. Please keep writing. I'll continue to follow your story. ^,^

- Writing Skill/Technique 20/25: You didn't make many grammar or vocab mistakes *claps claps* Your writing was really safe :)) But it didn't attract me or give me any special feelings. It didn't impress me, either. You should try to make a unique writing style for yourself. Good luck and thanks for trusting our shop.

>> Total Score: 72/100

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- Reviewer: Karen

3rd of Sep, 2012 -