Out of My Head

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This is for those moments when I have an idea, but it's distracting me from what I wish to focus on. When that happens, I'll type it up and post it here. I just plan on removing the stray thoughts from my head- hence the title; Out of My Head. These won't be in any particular order or focused on any particular group. But there will be . There may be some rated- some not. I can't give you much more than that at the moment.

Why?

Because my mind is a scary place. ;P

Foreword

Chapter 1- I Told You... featuring Exo

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mangasanji12 #1
Chapter 1: Liked the jongho andthe taoris alot¡!¡
paradisease #2
Chapter 7: Why do I feel like Jaeseop (AJ) is the other male? xD HAHAHA :))
SleepingSwallow #3
Chapter 7: My personal favorites were

"I Told You" and "Punishments and Rewards". I liked "I Told You" enough that I have decided on writing a story in which it has to deal with a dead character who committed suicide. OTL
my personal reviews:

I Told You: It was well-written in my opinion. Good description and the showing of how Sehun feels (in his crazed mind). I kinda didn't like the fact that you started with a first-person POV then switched to a third-person POV, but of course you couldn't continue first-person cause the main character was, well, dead. Otherwise, I did like the text message Sehun sent Kai, but I didn't think mentioning that Sehun was clearly dead was worth mentioning, it's assumed already by the text (and Kai's inference) and once they get to the room they go for Luhan. I'm contradicting myself completely because I know it was a good addition to just make it "abundantly clear" that Sehun was dead. asfghjkl I like it enough that I don't know what I think. LOL

Punishments and Rewards: well OH EM GEE. I LAAAAAAAAIKEEEEEEEE. It's so horrifying to think about just waking up like that and being reduced to a ___ toy like that oh my god. I personally didn't imagine one captor. I imagined Kevin was off his ____ and so it like, data-hazing (like that white glitchy screen but in black) between Hoon and Kiseop. I could imagine like a ily-creepy/cold/lustful voice coming out of them, and because I sometimes have trouble telling their voices apart, it works better for me. I personally think it's Hoon, but I like my double-haze thing XDDDD
I LAIKEEEEE
~Vivi
P.S. yes I know it's spelled "like" XDD
~Vivi
Telissa #4
Chapter 1: I Told You : I LOOKED LIKE SOME KIND OF RETARDED GOLDFISH WITH MY MOUTH HANGING OPEN AND MY EYES WIDE OPEN IT WAS JUST DAYUMMM <3 Poor Sehunnie though ;;

Can't Feel My Pain : Is it weird that I want to punch Key in the face, like, right now?! HE HURT THE DINO PUPPY! Key, you are my bias but YOU DO NOT HURT A PUPPY! *rages* ....what did I just say..

Punishments and Rewards : assdsalkhfha KEVINNNNNN! My inner (_______ed) fangirl is telling me Kiseop, even though that's HIGHLY unlikely.

Idiot : LOL OMG. This one made me go "What just happened?" I just don't really get the point of this one, I'm guessing it's just random? xD

Que Sera, Sera : OH DEAR GOD I'VE ALWAYS HATED THAT SONG. I WAS LIKE " KRIS SHUT THE EFF UP. JUST STAPHHH, NOWWWW" EXO, their all idiots, a bunch of idiots who become all hot and ugh when they perform. AND XIUCHEN DAYUMMMMM <3 AND THE MOAN MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD LOL. I imagined Luhan being all diva-like and reprimanding Kris and LMAO XD
sweet_dreams #5
Chapter 5: screaming.
I think my favorite part was Xiumin at the end and Luhan all "that was hard to play up"
LOLing.
butXiuminattheendthough. e u e
sweet_dreams #6
Chapter 3: HOON.
HOON.
OH GO LET IT BE HIM.
...Hoon.
sweet_dreams #7
Chapter 1: are you nuts. Omg write a sequel OuO
xONEWorldx #8
Chapter 2: Chapter 2: AWWW poor Jonghyun!! Minho is so nice...gosh that as so sweet and so sad. poor guy...
Vannyy #9
Wow o__O this is sad..
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