Straightforward

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Police officer Jiho wants nothing more than to work alone, successfully ridding himself of 7 different partners in 2 years, yet once again the crazy bastard who calls himself chief decides to pair Jiho up with yet another person. Jiho doesn't think this grinning fool of a new partner is going to even last a month, right?

Mystex
4th chapter is in progress guys, finally!!!

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Mayh1250 #1
Chapter 3: It's reallyy cuteeeee! Please update soon!!
shunpeis
#2
This is really cute.
Lunaflew
#3
Chapter 3: Awwww cute little kiss there~ yay can't wait to read more ^^
FantasticBB25
#4
Chapter 3: I like it ! Update soon it's really good :)
tummyfulloftaro #5
Chapter 3: Really~~~ GOOOD! UPDATE♥
jjsuperelflover
#6
You have to update!
One of the best zikyung fics (yes I've easily decided) plz continue *puppy dog eyes*
Your writing is great and Zikyung is hott like always kekeke
Meindariini #7
Chapter 3: you're going to update soon, right? ;A;
CuteKwon #8
Chapter 3: Update soon please ;;
Sunny_Afternoon #9
Chapter 3: I really love this so far! I hope you'll update soon 'cause I'm dying to see what'll happen next XD
CrissCrossApplesauce #10
Nice! A cop fanfic...I don't think I've ever read a Zikyung fanfic before so this is exciting :D I really like the way you have Jiho and Kyung interacting...and I don't mind the slow build up. It's more realistic that way, and I'm looking forward to see how the story plays out! I'm excited that you're so excited about your idea :D

also lol @ Jiho's kiss and cutesy behavior at the end of chapter 3. It was a little unexpected, but funny xD

One suggestion though:maybe you can skip a line after someone speaks? It makes it a little easier to read and the dialogue wont be all clumped together. Jut a suggestion tho! Keep on writing!