Chapter 1: Goshgoshgosh I just freaking grinned the wholle timeeeee adorableness overload with little onewww TTwTT

Oh and ually frustrated onew. XD



Okay I'm done

Ohmygosh onew with chicken plushie capturing barbie and Minho crying, losing his frog plushie and jjong giving him his dino plushie is the cutest thing ever seriously. Chibied SHINee all over my head TwT

Chapter 4: The Ontae POVs are so cute!
Glad Ontae got to kiss, lol!

Chapter 4: Omo, that, that was adorable!! Soo unbelievably cute!! I'm melting here ^^

OMO WHAT NO, NO, NO, NOOOOOOOOOOO, I WANTED MORE, *SOBS* please, *oh cruel world* keke, I know I'm being dramatic but I really love this and I wanted more, I wanted to know what happened and where it went and everything, *starts whining* I really really love the OnTae part though so if it has to end now I'm glad that it ended like that, but still; *pouts cutely* I'll keep my fingers crossed for a sequel maybe yeah? keke; ;-P love it. <3 <3

Omonaaaa wae you no make an official proposal? (wtf proposal xD)
But anyways, it's a good story~
Thank you for sharing! :D

What!? End already? UGH! I really want to know what's next. But, if that would be it~Then It's fine~ X) I love the ontae anyway~ <3

Oh well xD
Cute story anyway!

OMO, THEIR JUST TOO ADORABLE, I'M GONNA DIE; keke, yes yes yes please, the more chapters the better, and Taemin's pov, and Minho's pov; and then back to JongKey's and then to Onew's, keke, and just keep going, ;-P and Jinki's so cute, he's loved Taemin for so long, can't wait for more, update really really soon, with a HUGE chapter, keke, pleeeeeeeease. ;-D <3 <3