I can't believe this. Fiction it may be, but this stuff is REALLY hard to swallow.
For this fic:
JJ, why are you such a freaking ? And you even get away with it! Urgh!
YC, you horrible son-of-a-. And here you said you loved him!
JS. I wish you didn't die, it's too sad without you
I like your story but it has a very sad ending indeed. I hope you don't mind me saying this but you need to edit your story. There are some spelling and grammar errors. No big deal but it would be nice to double check on those errors. Thanks for sharing.
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