Hospital

You look exactly like him

Minho's POV

     I woke up with my head hurting all my hyung's were asleep, but Taesun was glaring at me."Where am I?" I said."At the hospital"he said. My hyung's woke up."Minho are you ok?Dont tell me you caught Onew Condition?" Key hyung asked."No Taesun pused me and not on purpose!" I explained,"Hyung, you got it all wrong I tripped and accidently bumped into you. Im sorry I feel really bad" he said and I admit he's a good actor." Yea, Minho it was just accident dont blame him" Onew hyung said."Yea hyung I feel really bad" Taesun he said with fake tears."Its ok" I said without looking at him."Well Minho we have to go, we'll come see you tomorrow " Key hyung said.

      A few hours I fell asleep." Minho hyung? Flaming Charsima?" I heard someone whisper in my ear and felt something in my nose." Taemin? Why is your finger in contact with my nose?" I asked."Sorry hyung. So... whats up?" he asked."Oh nothing sitting in a hospital bed ,because your twin brother I never had" I said sarcasticly."Well I told you to accept him""Why does he want to kill me?" I asked."He's not right in the head, but you can change everything if you befriend him. I have to go. Minho hyung Fighting!"

        

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FlamingMe
#1
Chapter 9: why did you leave the final with a cliffhanger??? *frustrated* please make a sequel!! thanks for the story though! it's short but i still like it. :)
LittleArmy #2
Chapter 9: Do the sequel please!!!
dreamteamace
#3
You made my heart beat fast due to the suspense chapters.. other than that, ur chapters were really interesting n short. i actually like to read short fanfics.. saves my time. XD
Shiny_sushi
#4
I don't care if your chapters are short!!It's a super story!!<br />
Except some mistakes I had a good time when I read it!
hello-nan-nie #5
this story's great and it took me like 2 hour? to finish it! :{ lol... :}
olenkiss
#6
your story made me cry... I really can't stand the idea of Taemin dying. I'll read the sequel, though. I want to know what happens with Taesun!
ukiss7
#7
yes minho tried to be nice to him. but when he was nice, he ga ask a question like that....what!!?? somethings rong with him...minho's not like that...<br />
when minho got the txt from key and ran home, and he saw his hyungs tied and gagged, and taesun was loading the gun... and then pointed it to onew's head...i quickly covered my mouth and eyes.... <br />
it actually took me a while to read on.. my heart went to racing.....<br />
omo just like taemin said u have to make a decision, and if u make the rong one...he wont like the results....<br />
was that the wrong choice he made..??? was that wat taemin ment...???<br />
but....whoo called the police????? <br />
wait...wat he's goin BACK!!!! woah....im just as shocked as all of you...<br />
omg omg he shot him.....i cant believe this...<br />
YES YES YYYYYYYEEEEESSSSSS U SHOULD REALLY DO A SEQUEL.....<br />
but all together...i really loved ur story...it was really unbelievable as u can see, i said that alot lol but i mean woah...and i was shocked.... fantastic....great story....<br />
but no really do a SEQUEL... ^-^hwaiting<3<3...
ukiss7
#8
omo they gave him a nickname....u no i thought they wanned sunny from SNSD to go walking with minho when his hyungs mentioned it... i didnt get it until they were in the hospital and minho said "yes sunnie im ok" im like oooohhhhh.....their talking bout taesun...<br />
i dont know how or y but i just did...lol<br />
i really did just catch on very slowly that time....oh wow...<br />
ok i got carried away..<br />
countinuing on....
ukiss7
#9
aniyo key.....he did not catch onew's sangtae...<br />
oooo yea he's good...<br />
neh. i see that now taeminnie.....that ur brother is messed up in the head...<br />
but if u said befriend him..i think ur best option minho is to become friends with him.... neh minho-ah fighting...<br />
ewww tae's finger is in his nose....
ukiss7
#10
komawo key, u didnt know, but from pouring the drinks down the drain...<br />
BWOH!!!!! omfg no he did not just say that....better yet he did not just do that...<br />
just because u came in 2nd, u decided to take the money so you could be on top....what.....?????????<br />
what kind of a damn brother are you....<br />
minho i wish u would have never said that u were gona tell the others and just went to them and told....<br />
MINHO-AH......plz b ok....ooo i hope someone saw him get pushed...taesun,,u are goin down.....<br />
waaaa i dont want to go to the next chapter.....pouts