Taesunnie

You look exactly like him

Key's POV

      I don't like him He shouldn't be her. Is he trying to replace Taemin? Right now im walking to our dance studio to let some stress out and dance to my girl group songs like I usually do. I need to stay on top of the newest songs I am the Almighty Key.

       Walking towards the door i hear SNSD's new song Visual Dreams and see Taesun dancing it perfectly. Come on I don't even know the dance yet! He saw me looking at him and he stopped "Oh. Hi I didn't see you there" he said shyly." Yea hi so you know the dance to Visual Dreams?"."Yea maybe i can teach you." He grabbed my hand and pulled me infront of the mirror, turned the music on and started dancing while i followed.

Onew's POV

         I was sitting on the couch when I heard the front door open with a laughing Taesun and Key. "SNSD"s Hoot is the best song" Taesun said."What no way Miss a's Bad Girl Good Girl is" Key debated."Hey. Did you guys have fun? I asked."OMG yes Key umma is such a great dancer"."Aww. Come on Taesunnie im gonna go make dinner". After they left I was shocked. Did Key call him Taesunnie? Did Taesun call him umma?

Jonghyun's POV

         After dinner I went to our shared room to write a new song for our Lucifer album. When the door opend I saw Taesun."Hi" he said innocently."Hey.Do you wanna help me write a new song?"

                                                          -2 HOURS LATER-

            "I love it. What should we call it?"Taesun asked."How about WOWOWOW?""Perfect" he said then yawned."Come on take a nap" I said and pushed him on his bed."Ok.Bye jjongie".

              

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FlamingMe #1
Chapter 9: why did you leave the final with a cliffhanger??? *frustrated* please make a sequel!! thanks for the story though! it's short but i still like it. :)
LittleArmy #2
Chapter 9: Do the sequel please!!!
dreamteamace #3
You made my heart beat fast due to the suspense chapters.. other than that, ur chapters were really interesting n short. i actually like to read short fanfics.. saves my time. XD
Shiny_sushi #4
I don't care if your chapters are short!!It's a super story!!<br />
Except some mistakes I had a good time when I read it!
hello-nan-nie #5
this story's great and it took me like 2 hour? to finish it! :{ lol... :}
olenkiss #6
your story made me cry... I really can't stand the idea of Taemin dying. I'll read the sequel, though. I want to know what happens with Taesun!
ukiss7 #7
yes minho tried to be nice to him. but when he was nice, he ga ask a question like that....what!!?? somethings rong with him...minho's not like that...<br />
when minho got the txt from key and ran home, and he saw his hyungs tied and gagged, and taesun was loading the gun... and then pointed it to onew's head...i quickly covered my mouth and eyes.... <br />
it actually took me a while to read on.. my heart went to racing.....<br />
omo just like taemin said u have to make a decision, and if u make the rong one...he wont like the results....<br />
was that the wrong choice he made..??? was that wat taemin ment...???<br />
but....whoo called the police????? <br />
wait...wat he's goin BACK!!!! woah....im just as shocked as all of you...<br />
omg omg he shot him.....i cant believe this...<br />
YES YES YYYYYYYEEEEESSSSSS U SHOULD REALLY DO A SEQUEL.....<br />
but all together...i really loved ur story...it was really unbelievable as u can see, i said that alot lol but i mean woah...and i was shocked.... fantastic....great story....<br />
but no really do a SEQUEL... ^-^hwaiting<3<3...
ukiss7 #8
omo they gave him a nickname....u no i thought they wanned sunny from SNSD to go walking with minho when his hyungs mentioned it... i didnt get it until they were in the hospital and minho said "yes sunnie im ok" im like oooohhhhh.....their talking bout taesun...<br />
i dont know how or y but i just did...lol<br />
i really did just catch on very slowly that time....oh wow...<br />
ok i got carried away..<br />
countinuing on....
ukiss7 #9
aniyo key.....he did not catch onew's sangtae...<br />
oooo yea he's good...<br />
neh. i see that now taeminnie.....that ur brother is messed up in the head...<br />
but if u said befriend him..i think ur best option minho is to become friends with him.... neh minho-ah fighting...<br />
ewww tae's finger is in his nose....
ukiss7 #10
komawo key, u didnt know, but from pouring the drinks down the drain...<br />
BWOH!!!!! omfg no he did not just say that....better yet he did not just do that...<br />
just because u came in 2nd, u decided to take the money so you could be on top....what.....?????????<br />
what kind of a damn brother are you....<br />
minho i wish u would have never said that u were gona tell the others and just went to them and told....<br />
MINHO-AH......plz b ok....ooo i hope someone saw him get pushed...taesun,,u are goin down.....<br />
waaaa i dont want to go to the next chapter.....pouts
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