Amusement Park.

You're Mine. Just mine.

Min Hyo's POV

I was going home when phone rang. Aish. Taemin.. I think?  I looked at my phone and.. Uknown Number..

Who is this?

"Yeobo..Yeoboseyo?" I said. "Yah!" the other person said.. "YAH! STOP IT! THAT'S MY PHONE!" "OWW ! YOUR FOOT Is IN MY FACE!" "Uhm.. Hello?" I asked. "SHUT UP. HE'S TOO YOUNG FOR THOSE WORDS!" "YAH! HYUNG! I CAN FREAKIN' SWEAR TOO! THE HELL I CAN!" Oh? Taemin? "Uhm.. Taemin.. That's not swearing." I said. They all stopped and started laughing. "Oh.. Yeah.. I don't think so too." Taemin said. He's so cute. Haha! "So.. Uh.. We wanted to ask you if you could come to the amusement park with us?" Key asked. "When?" "MONDAY." They replied in unison. "Sure. Can I bring Seohyun-ah?" I asked. "Of course." Taemin said. "Thanks guys." I said.

I asked Seohyun unnie if she wants to come. She said yes. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

MONDAY...

Jonghyun's POV

I miss going to the amusement park. Oh.. Is there something I need to remember today? Hm.. OH WELL! Back to sleep.

"HYUNG WAKE UP WE NEED TO GO!" Aish. Taemin I'm gonna kill you once you scream like that again. Getting my beauty sleep here! "HYUNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!" "WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"We go to the amusement park today!" he said, acting stupid. "Oh. Yeah." I changed and told Taemin to call Min Hyo-sshi.

"Okay hyung. She's ready."

We drove to her house and she was there. She was with Seohyun. "Annyeonghaseyo!" they both bowed.

AMUSEMENT PARK..

"Guys! Let's ride that! It's so big and fast and cool and.." Min Hyo said. "Okay! Just stop with the describing!" Minho said.

"Loser." she mumbled. "Let's go." we rode it and before the ride started..

"Why do I have to sit beside this thing!?" Min Hyo and Minho asked at the same time. "I'm a thing?! Oh, You're stupid are you? I'm a person!" they said again. "Yeah right." they both added. "STOP COPYING ME!" They yelled. "They're weird." Omo. I didn't know I would say that! "Who's WEIRD!?" they asked. "OF COURSE IT'S YOU! YOU.. YOU.. COPYCAT! I'M NOT A CAT!" They yelled at the same time again. "Kids." I said. "Guys, look!" Seohyun said. We noticed that the ride was starting. "Thanks. We owe you." Key, Taemin, and I said. "Yah! Kwon Min Hyo!" I yelled. "WHAAT?!" she screamed. Guess she's mad because of the sitting arrangements. "WHERE'S HEE RIN?" I asked. "BUSSSSSSYYYYYYYYYY" she exclaimed.

We were bored after we rode all the rides.

We looked around and we heard someone chanting..

"FOOD

FOOD

FOOD

FOOD

FOOD

FOOD

FOODFOODFOODFOODFOOD!"

"WHO THE HELL WAS THAT?!" Minho asked.

"Who the hell was what?" Taemin asked.

"THE FOOD GUY!" Minho told Taemin.

"Oh, the guy singing food? That's.."

"WHHOOOO TAEMIN?" We asked him.

"Me!!" Taemin claimed.

"Okay. Let's buy food." I said.

We entered a random restaurant.

"Beautifull~~~" Min Hyo and Seohyun said, looking around.

Just then Min Hyo stopped.. Her eyes were glued to something.. to be more specific.. someone... "What's wrong?" I asked.

Taemin's POV

Aish. I'm so hungry. Before we went for food, I was soooo JEALOUS. I noticed that.. when the ride would go faster.. Min Hyo would hold Minho hyung's arm. Anyway.. Min Hyo-ah stopped and looked at a guy.. WHO THE HECK IS THAT..Am I.. Jealous Even though I don't KNOW THIS GUY?.. HE Looks familiar.. "What's wrong?" Hyung asked..

No reply..

Suddenly..

"OPPA!" she yelled..

"Dongsaeng!"

I couldn't believe my eyes and my ears. The man she was looking at.. He was...

Cliffhanger! :)

Wonder who? :P

Late update! Sorry guys. I got TONS of homework yesterday. No worries. I'll update 2 more later. ;)

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Ashazeki #1
Wow what a nice story i love it
deadlysins #2
Wowowowoww....<br />
It's so romantic~<br />
What a good ending... :DDDDD<br />
So sweet...
randomsparadise
#3
the end is adorable ^.^ <br />
looking forward to your new fic! fighting!!
Rini6189
#4
xD It's sweet of Minho to take back what he said and appreciate what Minhyo tries to make for him. In this case, it's definitely the heart that counts. Like you said, the basketball match turns out to be a good one with Minho's team getting the upperhand. Though, he did get attacked. Luckily it wasn't anything really serious that rendered him uncapable of playing throughout the whole match. From the looks of it, there's no doubt that his side defeated the other team. Minho's bound to come out as a winner with his competitive fighting spirit on the court. Kudos to Minhyo and Minho for stepping in to defend each other's honors. It's correct to say that she "treats" his wounds rather than "cures" them. She is doing a good job taking care of him. I don't find the ending weird. It is sweet and romantic. :) A kiss is a great way to end a love story. It leaves the viewers with that warm fluttery feeling from witnessing a romance. Nice close captioning with the fanfic's title. Inserting it in the end makes this fic a memorable one. It's a happy ending for the Minho-Minhyo pair (the last time I'll be referring to this couple). Together forever and never apart. ^^ Hopefully the readers who come by to read this fic will enjoy it (if they stick around to read the whole story). <3
ninaaziz
#5
it sweet and cute~~~
Rini6189
#6
I don't know about Tekken 6. I'm not much of a gamer myself.<br />
<br />
xD Minho's reaction must've been priceless when he saw what she came out wearing. Being the second fashionable member of SHINee (after Key), he's bound to have good taste in clothes. He should've thought about that beforehand and choose a shirt that's not form-fitting. Though, he decided to choose something that he thought would look good on her. Haha...Chicken pair. Minhyo and Minho seem to be alike in gaming. Both have competitive spirits. That's some good fun between them.<br />
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Chapter 39 mistakes:<br />
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1. I played Tekken 6 Min Hyo.<br />
* The preposition "with" is missing before "Minhyo."<br />
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2. When we got home, Min Hyo slept in the house beside ours, While we slept in the dorm.<br />
Correction: When we got home, Min Hyo slept in the house beside ours while we slept in the dorm.
deadlysins #7
LOL...<br />
Tekken~<br />
Update Soon~
generalfish
#8
Oh hooo... Such a tease! Loling at Minho and Minhyo. Hihihi!<br />
Oh and please beep me, if ever you posted your New Fanfic already! K? Thanks!
generalfish
#9
Ahaaa... The END is getting closer and nearer. :(