Hell in School.

You're Mine. Just mine.

Minho's POV

"DINNER!" Key hyung yelled.

When I got downstairs, Key hyung had his arms crossed. He looked mad.

"Will you please explain to me why Min Hyo ran out of the dorm, crying, yelling out 'I hate you Choi Minho!'?" He asked.

"..."

"CHOI MINHO, YOU MADE A GIRL CRY?!" Jonghyun hyung asked.

"Hyung, I just.. I need time alone."

THE NEXT DAY..

Min Hyo's POV

I had to go to DAMN SCHOOL today.

I woke up and changed to a T-shirt that said 'I HATE LIFE.'.

While I was sleeping in the car, I waited for all the babbling about SHINee to start.

-SILENCE-.

"DAMN. WHY IS IT SO.." Oh. Yeah. Hee Rin.

When I got out of our car, I walked down the hallway.

I heard people whispering things like 'Oh, Look! The girl who stole our Minho and Taemin is such a loser! She's a dumb loner!' or 'Looks like her cousin left her because she stole Minho and Taemin!'

I was halfway to my locker when I heard a hurtful comment.

"Look at that . Oh, I meant y crybaby. She's crying just because she lost a stupid cousin."

".. Crying just because she lost a stupid cousin."

".. just because she lost a STUPID cousin."

I looked at the guy who said that.

"Yeah. Say that like the bastard you are!" I yelled and slapped him.

"Ah, Guys. You know what to do." He said, smirking.

. I JUST SLAPPED ONE OF THE WORST BASTARDS IN THE WORLD.

One of them grabbed me by my arm, and DAMN IN WAS PAINFUL.

I closed my eyes, waiting for a slap or a punch, but all I heard was..

"DON'T YOU PEOPLE DARE PUNCH MY GIRLFRIEND!"

WHAT?!

"Yah, Min Hyo, we should celebrate~ Today is our monthsary~" Minho sang.

"WHAT? Minho, WE? THERE'S NO WE ANYMORE. NOT EVEN IN HELL, OR HEAVEN!" I yelled.

"Please listen to me.." He begged.

"THERE'S NOTHING TO LISTEN TO ANYMORE!!" I yelled again.

Minho's POV

Wait.. Last night, Taemin didn't eat.. Anyway..

HOW COULD I GET HER TO LISTEN TO ME?!

Boring chapter.. but.. I'll make the next ones WAAAAAAY more interesting than this one. :)

PROMISE. :D

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Ashazeki #1
Wow what a nice story i love it
deadlysins #2
Wowowowoww....<br />
It's so romantic~<br />
What a good ending... :DDDDD<br />
So sweet...
randomsparadise #3
the end is adorable ^.^ <br />
looking forward to your new fic! fighting!!
Rini6189 #4
xD It's sweet of Minho to take back what he said and appreciate what Minhyo tries to make for him. In this case, it's definitely the heart that counts. Like you said, the basketball match turns out to be a good one with Minho's team getting the upperhand. Though, he did get attacked. Luckily it wasn't anything really serious that rendered him uncapable of playing throughout the whole match. From the looks of it, there's no doubt that his side defeated the other team. Minho's bound to come out as a winner with his competitive fighting spirit on the court. Kudos to Minhyo and Minho for stepping in to defend each other's honors. It's correct to say that she "treats" his wounds rather than "cures" them. She is doing a good job taking care of him. I don't find the ending weird. It is sweet and romantic. :) A kiss is a great way to end a love story. It leaves the viewers with that warm fluttery feeling from witnessing a romance. Nice close captioning with the fanfic's title. Inserting it in the end makes this fic a memorable one. It's a happy ending for the Minho-Minhyo pair (the last time I'll be referring to this couple). Together forever and never apart. ^^ Hopefully the readers who come by to read this fic will enjoy it (if they stick around to read the whole story). <3
ninaaziz #5
it sweet and cute~~~
Rini6189 #6
I don't know about Tekken 6. I'm not much of a gamer myself.<br />
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xD Minho's reaction must've been priceless when he saw what she came out wearing. Being the second fashionable member of SHINee (after Key), he's bound to have good taste in clothes. He should've thought about that beforehand and choose a shirt that's not form-fitting. Though, he decided to choose something that he thought would look good on her. Haha...Chicken pair. Minhyo and Minho seem to be alike in gaming. Both have competitive spirits. That's some good fun between them.<br />
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Chapter 39 mistakes:<br />
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1. I played Tekken 6 Min Hyo.<br />
* The preposition "with" is missing before "Minhyo."<br />
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2. When we got home, Min Hyo slept in the house beside ours, While we slept in the dorm.<br />
Correction: When we got home, Min Hyo slept in the house beside ours while we slept in the dorm.
deadlysins #7
LOL...<br />
Tekken~<br />
Update Soon~
generalfish #8
Oh hooo... Such a tease! Loling at Minho and Minhyo. Hihihi!<br />
Oh and please beep me, if ever you posted your New Fanfic already! K? Thanks!
generalfish #9
Ahaaa... The END is getting closer and nearer. :(
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