Tears.

You're Mine. Just mine.

Min Hyo's POV

Someone sent me a voicemail today. It was Minho.

"Min Hyo, Today is the Rapping contest that I auditioned for last week. I left a ticket in your mailbox. If you come, It means you're ready to forgive me and that you will be back to me as a friend, or as a girlfriend. I miss you, and I still love you. Love, Minho."

Suddenly, Bad memories appeared.

Hee Rin and Sung Rin dying..

Minho kissing Krystal..

Mom suiciding..

Dad abusing me..

I called Taemin..

"Yobeoseyo?" Taemin answered.

"Taemin.. I.. HELP.." I stuttered.

Taemin's POV

 

When I got to her house, I called her.

"Min Hyo?? Min Hyo? Where are you?"

I got to her her room and saw her unconscious on the floor.

I immediately called an ambulance and called Yuri and GD.

"Ottokhae?" I said.

IN THE HOSPITAL..

Minho's POV

It's almost my turn! But.. No Min Hyo..

I remember.. Amber wanted to join this thing.. She was in the V.I.P area.

Suddenly, my phone rang.

"YAH! CHOI MINHO! MIN HYO IS IN THE HOSPITAL!" WHAT?!

Suddenly, An idea came into my head.

Rapping contest's MC's POV

"CHOI MINHO!" I called.

"Oh.. Wait.. There's been a change.. AMBER LIU!"

Amber's POV

MWO? ME? A PART OF THE CONTEST? "THANK YOU, MINHO!" I said.

"No Problem, GOTTA GO!"

Yuri's POV

"You know about your sister's problem.. right? Honestly, it has gotten worse. Those bad memories, they have increased. She is weak at the moment. One of those problems need to be decreased, if it wouldn't lessen, It could take over her mind and it could lead to amnesia. Yes. The bad memories are too much for her to handle." The doctor explained.

I buried my face in my hands.

When Minho arrived, GD grabbed Minho's collar, pushed him against the wall, and lifted him up.

"YOU! YOU DID THIS TO MY SISTER!" He yelled.

"SHHH! WE'RE STILL IN HER ROOM!" I said.

"GET OUT OF HERE! YOU DON'T DESERVE TO BE WITH MY SISTER!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! GET OUT!" GD ordered.

"No.." A calm voice said. We looked at Min Hyo.

"Unnie, Oppa.. Please leave the three of us alone." She said.

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What will happen in the room?

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Ashazeki #1
Wow what a nice story i love it
deadlysins #2
Wowowowoww....<br />
It's so romantic~<br />
What a good ending... :DDDDD<br />
So sweet...
randomsparadise
#3
the end is adorable ^.^ <br />
looking forward to your new fic! fighting!!
Rini6189
#4
xD It's sweet of Minho to take back what he said and appreciate what Minhyo tries to make for him. In this case, it's definitely the heart that counts. Like you said, the basketball match turns out to be a good one with Minho's team getting the upperhand. Though, he did get attacked. Luckily it wasn't anything really serious that rendered him uncapable of playing throughout the whole match. From the looks of it, there's no doubt that his side defeated the other team. Minho's bound to come out as a winner with his competitive fighting spirit on the court. Kudos to Minhyo and Minho for stepping in to defend each other's honors. It's correct to say that she "treats" his wounds rather than "cures" them. She is doing a good job taking care of him. I don't find the ending weird. It is sweet and romantic. :) A kiss is a great way to end a love story. It leaves the viewers with that warm fluttery feeling from witnessing a romance. Nice close captioning with the fanfic's title. Inserting it in the end makes this fic a memorable one. It's a happy ending for the Minho-Minhyo pair (the last time I'll be referring to this couple). Together forever and never apart. ^^ Hopefully the readers who come by to read this fic will enjoy it (if they stick around to read the whole story). <3
ninaaziz
#5
it sweet and cute~~~
Rini6189
#6
I don't know about Tekken 6. I'm not much of a gamer myself.<br />
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xD Minho's reaction must've been priceless when he saw what she came out wearing. Being the second fashionable member of SHINee (after Key), he's bound to have good taste in clothes. He should've thought about that beforehand and choose a shirt that's not form-fitting. Though, he decided to choose something that he thought would look good on her. Haha...Chicken pair. Minhyo and Minho seem to be alike in gaming. Both have competitive spirits. That's some good fun between them.<br />
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Chapter 39 mistakes:<br />
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1. I played Tekken 6 Min Hyo.<br />
* The preposition "with" is missing before "Minhyo."<br />
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2. When we got home, Min Hyo slept in the house beside ours, While we slept in the dorm.<br />
Correction: When we got home, Min Hyo slept in the house beside ours while we slept in the dorm.
deadlysins #7
LOL...<br />
Tekken~<br />
Update Soon~
generalfish
#8
Oh hooo... Such a tease! Loling at Minho and Minhyo. Hihihi!<br />
Oh and please beep me, if ever you posted your New Fanfic already! K? Thanks!
generalfish
#9
Ahaaa... The END is getting closer and nearer. :(