Twists of Fate

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Life is like the ocean.

It is beautiful.

It is untamable.

It bows to no man.

 

Fate is like the wind.

It is unpredictable.

It is free.

It does what it wishes.

 

When the ocean and wind are joined.

They become a cyclone.

They are awe-inspiring.

They are powerful.

 

They are deadly.

 

 

Foreword

This was it. There was no going back now. The gate to flight 14 was right in front of me. I knew it was just a gate to the plane I was going to board, but it felt like so much more. It felt like I was at the entryway to a new world, a new identity, and next to it was a sign that read, "Point of No Return".  Cheesy, I know, but for a girl who hardly ever left her hometown, this was a big step! An eighteen hour flight from LAX to Seoul, South Korea. What was I thinking? You aren't supposed to be thinking, babo. I answered myself.

 

I took a deep breath, gathered my courage, and slipped through. I waited for a minute, waiting for a rush of emotions to render me speachless and awestruck...Nothin'...Strange, I don't feel any different. I looked over my shoulder at the gate in near confusion, hardly noticing the people streaming past me. I smiled and thought. Oh well, it'll probably hit me later.

 

"Come on, Aeryn!" A voice called, snapping me out of my reverie. I looked up and grinned at my friend, Krysia, also known as Ayame.  The bubbly, crazy girl was currently dragging my other friend, Rose, up the stairs leading to the plane. I hurried to catch up to them as Rose said,

 

" Ayame! You're going to fall if you don't pay attention!" An exasperated expression was on her face, as if she had no more strength left to deal with said girl.

 

I chuckled and thought, That's Rose for you! Always a mom, regardless of whether or not you're older than her. My thoughts continued to dwell on my Umma-like friend. Her natural ability as a leader had gotten us out of more than a few scrapes, despite being the youngest. "She likes to boss us around a lot too... I mused, not that we really minded, Ayame and I just weren't cut out for calling the shots.

 

I easily slipped my body through the tiny entrance on the plane, Being short is probably a good advantage when you're a flight attendant. I chuckled at the one in front of me now. He happened to not be so short. Probably 6' 4", "Poor guy..." I muttered as I watched him try to greet people while bending over almost halfway.

 

"Hello! Welcome to World Class Airlines! If you need anything during your journey, just ask me. I hope you have a nice flight!" He said. I nodded and thanked him with one of my signature grins. Then turned and made my way down the aisle.

 

After finally finding my seat and making myself comfortable, I began to take in my surroundings. We were in first class(that was probably why the flight attendant was so nice) so we had pretty, white leather seats and there was a wood-toned consol between my seat and the one nearest to the aisle. Oh yeah! Window seat! I mentally celebrated, glad to not have to worry about any claustrophobia. Not that I had it, it was just good to know it was no longer a possibility.

 

The chair next to mine was empty, but we were on a packed flight, so they probably just weren't on board yet. With a sigh, I pulled out my iPod and jammed my headphones into my ears. I yawned suddenly and decided to try to catch up on some much needed sleep. I had been super excited all month for this trip so insomnia was a frequent visitor for me. I buckled my seatbelt so I could ignore the take-off announcement and hit shuffle.

 

Now, as a normal human, I didn't just hit shuffle and let it play. Oh no. I hit skip. A lot! I finally found the song I was looking for though, so I just closed my eyes and laid back, waiting for sleep to take me.

 

Not that it was going to happen. I freakin' love this song! I thought as I let the music carry me away instead. I got so engrossed in my own little world of awesomness, I didn't notice that I started singing quietly, or that someone had sat down beside me.

 

"I'll spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly. I'll do what it takes till I touch the sky. I'll make a wish, take a chance, make a change, and breakaway.  Out of the darkness and into the sun. I won't forget all the ones that I love. I'll take a risk, take a chance, make a change, and breakaway." I sang.

 

By the time the song ended, I had succumbed to the magic of the music and was startled by the sound of clapping beside me. My head whirled around and found the source of the noise as I yanked the headphones out of my ears and caught my iPod before it slipped off my lap. 

 

Once I had pulled myself together, I began to take real note of my companion. She was Asian and very pretty. She also seemed very girly, scratch that, she was very girly. She was wearing a skirt, hot pink stilettos, had beautiful, long, inky-black hair, and her makeup was done perfectly. She was pretty much an Asian beauty. I suddenly felt very self-conscious.

 

"You have a very pretty voice." She commented with a slight accent, "Do you think you could do that in a recording studio?"

ScarletWounds
Yeah, I just figured out what this "Story Feed" thing is for. Cheers for my epic fail! -.-

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dancesingkpop
#1
New reader!!!! Love the story so far! Update sooon
BR2019 #2
Update please!! Luv the story!!
------Angel
#3
Need graphics? If you do then please read the Personal Message on my wall and follow to get graphics!! Gamowo!!!!
swabluu
#4
KFC. so much onew just hovering around at that. xD
swabluu
#5
(:
kk, I'll be waiting for the full chapter ^^
I like the picture very much 8D
swabluu
#6
Dear gods. That's a lot of blood. Quite a twist for the plot, eh? (:

Um...I think that even if the thoughts are in italics, they shouldn't have quotation marks around them (:

Nice chapter! ^^
onlythebest24
#7
wow! great job!
lol your character's friend Rose reminds me of myself ^^"
She's actually just like me, it's uncanny ><"
I'm the youngest of my trio of bffs, and they call me the Umma because without me, the other two would have never gotten their homework done LOL
I bet you can guess who they are x3 anythingkpop and Unmei474~ xD
Anyways, this story looks interesting, I can't wait to read more~
<3
OTB Unnie~
*huggles*
swabluu
#8
also
please ignore any spelling errors i make thank you ^^
swabluu
#9
Um yeah okay I'm going to continue. Sorry. I should get studying xD
So
actually
to not bother you so much, I'm just going to point out one last thing. When you said "she commented with a slight Korean accent," I immediately thought of an Asian parent with an Asian accent going "WHY YOU NO GET GOOD GRADES."
Aha. That's just me. Um...yeah. I'm so tired and sleep deprived and random. Sorry. OTL
But I feel like there isn't really a specific "Korean accent." Usually it's generalized as an "Asian accent," or just "a slight accent" will do.
Okay. I need to go back to studying. Hope this helps <3
swabluu
#10
haihai! ^^
Welcome to the world of writing (:
I am here because I need to study for my final (psh, what's studying?), and therefore I am procrastinating and wasting my time and staying up late and all that good stuff :P
So. Um, as I am currently in a stage of depression in which I am spending about two hours a day wailing over the crappiness of my writing, I'm not entirely in the best state to be giving constructive criticism, but I'll see what I can do ^^

First of all, the good stuff.
OHMAIGOSH YOU USE PROPER GRAMMAR THANK YOU I LOVE YOU
It makes me happy to see someone who's first fanfic has proper grammar. It's very heartwarming and all that jazz. Okay. I'm sorry if my comments are random. I'm sleep deprived and I really should be studying ehehehe.

Second of all, personally, I don't really like it when people put "____'s POV" in the story. It kind of breaks up the flow. To me, stories are supposed to be professional-looking tales in which I can read everything without seeing the words "___'s POV" every once in a while. If you change POV, then you should be able to show that through your writing, not "____'s POV." The reason why I'm telling you this is because I believe that your writing is good enough to be capable of revealing switches in POV and stuff without having to resort to "___'s POV"

Okay, so now to the actual story so far.

I like your character's attitude. She's not creepily girly and scary and all that Mary Sue creepiness, so that's good ^^

Normally, when writing out the thoughts of characters, I'd recommend using italics instead of quotes, because it distinguishes thoughts and dialogue from each other, and that makes it easier to understand.

Your character has an attitude. I like that. She's not boring. But I'd prefer if she was a little less...excited in her thoughts. It feels a bit awkward and exaggerated to have her think with exclamation marks so much! of the! time!

I'm running out of character space. Sorry for bothering you ^^