Short update... suggestion? :)

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Poster and background should be in order now. Stupid Tinypic.

Omg, thanks SO much for all the comments! Didn't know this would be so well recieved ~ <3

I've actually also been thinking about making this a longer fanfic, still starting with the (current) oneshot as 1st chap, but then tell about what happened before this and all (cuz I can kinda imagine it, and I like the characters already O_O), but I don't know if I should. So I'd like to hear your thoughts about this :)

Planning to write more Korean fanfiction in the future, but it'll have to wait until my finals are over, and of course, until I've finished writing Blazing Ring.

Anyways, I got the essay back today ;D I got 12, which is the top grade in Denmark, yay ^^,

Here's what the teacher wrote:

"Dear Ida

It is a very beautiful short story you've written! And I think you've caught the "situation" [in the poem] so well.

Love, Line"

*proudness*

Again, thanks for all the comments :)

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Gril4Life #1
Wow Blitz... It's really... Woow...<br />
Even though this is the second time I'm reading it, it still leaves me somewhat speechless. Well, all your writing does, as you're an amazing author, but this special piece really has something over it... You know, it leaves the reader thinking (or maybe that's just me :p)<br />
I truely do understand why you got the marks you got, and I honestly don't see what could make this any better... It's simply... Perfect.
Blitz-IHS #2
namelessloverxx: Omg haha, uhm, I'm just afraid it'd ruin what I already have written. And because of practical reasons, it wouldn't be that smart to start up a new fanfic now that my finals are coming up, and I'm going to Hong Kong next year :/ But I promise to write more fanfics starring Korean artists, k? ^^,<br />
RainStormRaider: Thanks :D I'm really glad it came through. You know, always the worry of a writer - will the work be understood? LOL but yeah, thank you so much :)<br />
chasethestars: Already replied on your wall <3
chasethestars #3
I admit to have thought twice when I saw "2Min" written up there because my mind associates that label exclusively to slash [don't worry, my mind is just strange like that XD], and yet this reads very much like a genfic. And that thought has been further cemented when you mentioned "brothers" and "brotherly love" so yes, I consider this as genfic.<br />
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That aside, this was a wonderful piece of work, very poignant and a truly delightful read. It broke my heart a little when I discovered Taemin was blind; his innocence in this is something I think he possibly possesses in real life and you did well portraying that without exaggerating it or, say, making him borderline gullible O.o Minho as the protective and caring brother suits him just as much, making sure Taemin is safe and sound and would do anything to protect that innocence of his [e.g. hiding the cruel truth about what happened to their dog, Shy]. I also like how you portrayed the themes of light and dark in this as one reader pointed out, the undertones of despair and hope, and how warmth and cold could be a representation of Taemin and Minho respectively.<br />
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For a first time in K-Pop fiction, you have done a really good job =3 I for one think this is better off as a one-shot; there's really nothing more to explain because everything has already been laid out in the story and it's as good as it is. The ending might be open but in my mind I have found my answer as to what could have possibly happened to them. So... yeah XD<br />
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Looking forward to your other K-Pop-centric fics in the future [if you do plan to write more, that is] =3
Blitz-IHS #4
dinomyte: Wow, thanks :) I also want to write more D: like, the story is forming in my head ^^, but I don't know if I should. Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting :b<br />
deestar: *blushes* thanks! :D I also plan to, when I'm done with my current fic ^^, tnx for commenting ^^,<br />
bokchoi: LOL thanks :D wow, that's a huge compliment! thank youuuuuuuu~<br />
- Blitz
dinomyte #5
omg this was so perfect and so good i really wish this was longer, or this was a book cuz i really want to know the story behind it, the bigger story and to connect all the pieces together, i loved the ending, because it was perfect and heartbreaking i guess, thank you for sharing <3