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Description

Should I loose him?

The tiny hope of a miraculous rescue, which I had held onto until now, started to fall to pieces in front of me.

Should the light be turned off in those beautiful eyes?

Minho and his little brother, Taemin, is sitting at the roadside, temperature below zero, only a blanket to keep them warm.

A oneshot about the strong bond of love between brothers.

Foreword

Disclaimer: This is purely fan fiction. Names and images of artists are only borrowed and do not necessarily resemble the artists in real life. The original plot and characters are purely made from the mind of the author, and any similarity to other works/novels/stories is only coincidental and not intended. No offence is intended towards the artists, their friends and families. No money is being made from this, and no copyright infringement is intended either.

 

This is a short oneshot starring 2min (as brothers... but picture them as whatever you like ^^,), and I actually wrote this for my mid-terms in Danish (written) :b But I liked it so much that I translated it into English to put it up here :)

But mostly because I pictured Minho as the teller and Taemin as the brother while I wrote it the first time. The guidelines for the essay were something like this:

Write a short story where the situation in the poem underneath is important. The story has to be told from 1st person's point of view (like "I..."), take place within a day and a night and have an open ending.

And when I read the poem I was like: "... O______O This is 2min! Have to write! NOOOOOOW!" And I was done within 2 hours. We had three and a half hour to write xD

First time writing fanfiction starring Korean artists, hope it's okay ^^,

Please comment, all kinds of response are more than welcome ! <3

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Gril4Life #1
Wow Blitz... It's really... Woow...<br />
Even though this is the second time I'm reading it, it still leaves me somewhat speechless. Well, all your writing does, as you're an amazing author, but this special piece really has something over it... You know, it leaves the reader thinking (or maybe that's just me :p)<br />
I truely do understand why you got the marks you got, and I honestly don't see what could make this any better... It's simply... Perfect.
Blitz-IHS #2
namelessloverxx: Omg haha, uhm, I'm just afraid it'd ruin what I already have written. And because of practical reasons, it wouldn't be that smart to start up a new fanfic now that my finals are coming up, and I'm going to Hong Kong next year :/ But I promise to write more fanfics starring Korean artists, k? ^^,<br />
RainStormRaider: Thanks :D I'm really glad it came through. You know, always the worry of a writer - will the work be understood? LOL but yeah, thank you so much :)<br />
chasethestars: Already replied on your wall <3
chasethestars #3
I admit to have thought twice when I saw "2Min" written up there because my mind associates that label exclusively to slash [don't worry, my mind is just strange like that XD], and yet this reads very much like a genfic. And that thought has been further cemented when you mentioned "brothers" and "brotherly love" so yes, I consider this as genfic.<br />
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That aside, this was a wonderful piece of work, very poignant and a truly delightful read. It broke my heart a little when I discovered Taemin was blind; his innocence in this is something I think he possibly possesses in real life and you did well portraying that without exaggerating it or, say, making him borderline gullible O.o Minho as the protective and caring brother suits him just as much, making sure Taemin is safe and sound and would do anything to protect that innocence of his [e.g. hiding the cruel truth about what happened to their dog, Shy]. I also like how you portrayed the themes of light and dark in this as one reader pointed out, the undertones of despair and hope, and how warmth and cold could be a representation of Taemin and Minho respectively.<br />
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For a first time in K-Pop fiction, you have done a really good job =3 I for one think this is better off as a one-shot; there's really nothing more to explain because everything has already been laid out in the story and it's as good as it is. The ending might be open but in my mind I have found my answer as to what could have possibly happened to them. So... yeah XD<br />
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Looking forward to your other K-Pop-centric fics in the future [if you do plan to write more, that is] =3
Blitz-IHS #4
dinomyte: Wow, thanks :) I also want to write more D: like, the story is forming in my head ^^, but I don't know if I should. Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting :b<br />
deestar: *blushes* thanks! :D I also plan to, when I'm done with my current fic ^^, tnx for commenting ^^,<br />
bokchoi: LOL thanks :D wow, that's a huge compliment! thank youuuuuuuu~<br />
- Blitz
dinomyte #5
omg this was so perfect and so good i really wish this was longer, or this was a book cuz i really want to know the story behind it, the bigger story and to connect all the pieces together, i loved the ending, because it was perfect and heartbreaking i guess, thank you for sharing <3