Welcome to my New Life!

[Prerevamp] Saranghamnida

 

Going to a graduate school in Seoul, Experiencing life's challenges alone, and Immersing yourself in a culture different from your own, this could all be the reasons why I am going to Korea, But no. Those were the reasons I gave to my parents for them to allow me to go. Don't get me wrong though, I am going to do all those things but that is not exactly the primary reason that I'm going.
You see, I have this addiction, I mean obsession, with someone in Korea- Lee taemin.
 
Lee Taemin, He's one of the member of a famous boygroup, SHINee. He has this absolutely amazing dancing skills and can sing so well. He is too cute for his own good, he may even pass as a girl.But Hell, I'm so damn obsessed with this guy.
 
Now, about the i'm-going-to-korea-thingy, My bestiee Miina suggested that. She knows about this head-over-heels-obsession I have for taemin and since she lives in Korea and I graduated BS Biology just this year. This plan just sounded so dreamily perfect.
 
And now, I've just arrived at Miina's house to see her again...
 
"Kyaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!! I missed you Miina!!!"
"Whoa, Shizune, Is that you? Omo! You looked skinnier than before!"
I grinned at her, "You really know how to flatter me! that's why I chose you as my bestiee!" I laughed and hugged her.
"Now, come in... come in...."
 
I went in inside. I saw the picture inside her houses and bowed to those picture.
Miina saw me and smiled tearily. "Umma, Appa, Unnie, I'd like you to meet my new sister, hope you'll love her as much as you loved me."
"Thank you for accepting me into your house, Umma, Appa, Unnie" I bowed again.
Miina hugged me again. "Come, I'll show you to your new room and then we'll go to the University"
 
When we finished setting up the room, We changed to some casual clothes and went straight to the University, Miina went to the CR. So I was left alone... walking and singing along to my ipod.
 
"Nareul mukkgo gadundamyeon sarangdo mukkin chae
Miraedo mukkin chae keojil su eobtneunde
Ja yurobge biweo nuh go barabwa ojik neoman chae ulge
Neoman gadeuk chae ulge
Loverholic, Robotronic, Loverholic, Robotronic"
 
I was singing Lucifer when somebody who looks like taemin passed by. wait, I swear he looks like taemin?!
ohh... but taemin would not look like that... and besides, taemin now has a long brown hair... not that black, mushroom hairstyle from replay times...
and he's wearing glasses! Omo!!! A nerdy Taemin? 
 
He looked at me as if hearing the comments on my head and frowned. 
 
No, that's impossible! Taemin wouldn't wear that horrible clothes! I frowned at his outfit. A Blue Jacket on top of a blue polo, buttoned up to his neck, paired with a black pants and a black shoes! He Looks like a f****** librarian! I laughed at him and besides, I haven't heard any news that Taemin will study in Seoul National University.
 
"Uhmm.. what are you laughing at?"
He looked at me with a smirk, damn! He even sounds like Taemin.
 
I can't answer without bursting out laughing so I just continued to walk and pretend I didn't heard anything.
 
When I look back at him, I saw him, as if thinking so hard.. He just looks so offended.
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Rini6189
#1
Chapter 11: It has been a long time since I'd last read this fic and this was updated. My interest from SHINee had drifted, which is one reason why I didn't get to this. Life can get hectic when your priorities shift and you've got more responsibilities on your plate.

It sounds like you meant "in the studio." Using the preposition "on" doesn't make sense.

It doesn't seem like Taehyun was in the studio since his presence wasn't mentioned and the SHINee members didn't say anything about seeing him there. However, it's likely that they didn't notice him or realize that he's there when he didn't make his presence known (hiding in the shadows). Whatever purpose he has, he is paying close attention to Shizune. Because of the angle that he's in while observing her, it seemed to him that she was looking at Onew. Views can be obscured when looked at from a different angle that's not within range. Something more about Taehyun's character has yet to be revealed. Taemin's side of things need to be explored as well. It's a point of curiosity about what you'd be doing with Shizune's, Taehyun's, and Taemin's characters.

Hopefully, you'll get around to updating this fic whenever you could.
ImWeird #2
Heyoo i lM startibg to love ur stories hahah please update soon
k-love-biased
#3
I hope you'll update really soon. :DD
Rini6189
#4
This is short, but we have a sweet Onew-Shizune thing going on here. Just as he is the leader of SHINee, he can prove himself to be a good fatherly figure. He is so responsible in checking in on the other SHINee members and making sure that Shizune gets home safely. It's obvious that Onew is already in love with her even though they just met ("love at first sight" indeed). It looks like one twisted family she grew up into. Her mother wasn't setting a good example or being a good parent for her by going out clubbing with her friends instead of spending time with her on her birthday. Her father is even worst. He shouldn't have been together with another woman while he's still married. That is so morally wrong and it's infidelity on his part. It's a good reason for her parents' divorce. xD Hell might've rained a thousand daggers by then after he was found out. Throughout the madness, it's good that Shizune is able to remain sane and keep a good head on her shoulders. Taehyun's absence has gotten me puzzled. <br />
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Chapter 9 mistake:<br />
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I was on my pajamas and I decided to drink milk downstairs.<br />
* It's "in my pajamas" since she is wearing them on her body.
Rini6189
#5
That's a nice poster that you'd put up. The way that Onew reacted to their misunderstandings is cute. xD Not Taemin too! It's something I would have expected coming fron Jonghyun since he seems to be such a ladies' man. Taemin looks up to Jonghyun, but he doesn't seem to be setting a great example for him--being a flirt. The way that Taemin looks at Shizune... Could it be that she's somehow familiar to him but it's something that he couldn't quite put his finger on? xD Unless, you're trying to surprise us readers into thinking that it's Taemin but he is actually Taehyun in disguise. They are identical twins, so it's not impossible for them to pull it off. I wonder if that Selene woman had already corrupted poor Taemin. Onew is so sweet here. xD After how Shizune thanked him, he might take it the wrong way and think that there's an extra special meaning behind her actions since he's flustered over it. <br />
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As grammar reminders: <br />
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The correct prepositional phrase is "on the stage." When you wrote "in the stage," it makes me think of them standing in a hole on the floor while the two are watching them below. xD That wouldn't make sense because Shizune wouldn't have seen them before her.<br />
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It's "closer to us." Minho and Jonghyun are heading towards them where they're standing.<br />
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In this phrase, "seems like the only thing I wanted to look to feel and to hear is Taemin," there should be commas to separate the list of actions so that the sentence flows smoothly--"to look, to feel, and to hear."<br />
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Onew stuttered as scratched the back of his neck with his left hand.<br />
* The subject "he" should be inserted after "as."
NerdyJae #6
Hayy there! Your poster is ready to be picke up! Drop by whenever you can :) Thanks for requesting at NerdyJae's Photobook and thanks for being patient~<br />
~~>NerdyJae:JaeJoongLove