Sing for me

Fly away love

"we are here..." SooMin said with a nervous voice. 'why does he sound nervous?' I thought. I took away the bandage. And I looked around. I went quiet... "so what do you think?" SooMin said. "it.. it is so wonderful here !!!!" I said back with my mouth open and looking around like I was in heaven. He took me to a open space in the woods. There are rays from the sunlight going through the trees which make it seems like a magic place. And there is standing a piano.

((Imagine something like this ->  ))

"I am in love with this place right now, I don't even know what to say..." I said while still couldn't take my eyes of the piano. He sat down on the stool and play DBSK - Believe . I sat down in the grass between the flowers. I am listening to the piano and SooMins voice.  He sounds beautiful, the piano too but his voice is like an angels voice. One of the rays falls down on SooMin face. He really looks like an angel from heaven. everything is beautiful here but he makes it complete. SooMin: "you are the only one... in my life"  I get tears in my eyes. "what's wrong? Did I do something wrong? :O " SooMin asked worried. "no no it's nothing, I just... the song... everything here is so beautiful and you sang so beautiful that I began to tear up hehe..." I said while blushing. "thanks. Can you play a song on the piano?" "uhmm.. yes.." I stood up and sat down on the stool. Soomin sat down in the grass between the flowers. I play Insa - DBSK . I see SooMin closing his eyes, listening to me playing the piano and singing. I start to cry. I can't sing anymore so I just only play the piano. SooMin opens his eyes and sees me crying. He takes the singing over. When the song is over he stands up and walks over to me. I quickly whip my tears away. "why are you crying?? it was so beautiful, I didn't know you can sing..." He said. "it is just because the song has a meaning to me. " I said back. SooMin walks to a tree and picks up a picnic basket. "yeeaayy, I love to picnic :D " i said happy. I stood up to help him but he pushed me away. "let me do it, you can play the piano and calm down :3" He said. "...okay" I said back. I sit down on the stool and play dango daikazoku . "i know that song! that is a song from my youth!" he said with a smile on his face. SooMin is singing along with me. When SooMin is done with everything I stop playing the piano and sit down next to him. He gives me something to drink and eat. We are having a nice picnic. "Irisa! Open your mouth~" SooMn said with a strawberry in his hand. I open my mouth. He puts the strawberry in my mouth. "hmmm ~ it's sweet ^_^" I said. I grab a strawberry and say: "SooMin! CATCH!!" I throw the strawberry to SooMin and he catches it with his mouth. "you're good!! good dog :3 " I said while clapping. SooMin: "I am not a dog!" "Yes you are~" "I will get you!" . I quickly stand up and run away: "no! you can't catch me!"  SooMin also stands up and runs after me. He grabs my hand: "I got you" he said while laughing. "i will get you too!!" I said with an evil smile. 'Oh no!" SooMin runs away. I run after him. 'he is too fast!' I thought. I fall down and pretend I am hurt. "oh no! are you okay?" SooMin said worried. he kneels down to check if I got nothing. I qiuckly grab his hand. "I got you!!" I said with a evil laugh. He loses his balance and we both fall on the ground, in the grass. We both laugh out loud. "that was false" SooMin said while still laughing. "ofcouuurrsee nooott ~ :P " I said back. We lie in the grass between the flowers. "sing :D sing for me~" I asked. "... okay"  SooMin said. He start to sing Because you are my girl - Lee Seung Gi. I close my eyes. 'he is singing beautiful... Because of that I always get tears in my eyes...' I thought. "that song.. Insa... the song I played on the piano... My mother always sang that song for her first love, my dad. My dad died when I was young, from cancer. He loved the song and after he died my mom was always singing the song when she was missing him... My mother died 2 years ago.. When we were shopping together, there was a car which was driving too fast but I didn't see it and my mom pushed me away... I... I almost died but my mom saved me and died instead...." i said while crying with my eyes closed. SooMin stopped singing. "I am sorry... I didn't know..." SooMin said. He didn't know what to say to comfort me. "Can you sing another song for me please?" I asked. SooMin started to sing words are hard to say - Lee Seung Gi. I am feeling a little bit tired... I yawned and closed my eyes again. I fell asleep.

SooMin let a tear fall down. He looks at my face; 'so cute but with so many worries... let me take some of your worries away...' he whispered. He takes carefully my hand (he doesn't want to wake me up). "saranghae~ ..."

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hwaranni #1
Chapter 2: The characters are a little confusing but I'm glad that you thought of using different names for them because I've thought of doing that too. But I didn't do it. XD I'm just voicing out my opinion so if I state that I don't like something, don't feel bad, okay? So, 1st chapter, you should break the whole chapter into more paragraphs because you're not using any font and normally readers don't like reading long paragraphs. It's just like an essay, if you have messy handwriting and you didn't break your essay into paragraphs, the teacher wouldn't enjoy reading it. And I'm glad that you did that in the 2nd chapter. Oh, and your full stops and capital letters. After a full stop, the next letter must be a capital letter. If not, it would just look like you're not putting in effort to write this story nicely. Other than that, your story is good. ^^ I like it. And I shall press the subscribe button right away! Happy writing! I hope this helps you! Don't feel bad, okay? Because this is only from me, maybe other readers don't think the same. ;D
QueenGirl
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@angie_xiong ; wait and you will see ~ :3
QueenGirl
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@angie_xiong I have updated another chapter ^^ I took so long because I have to translate everything again because I lost everything :( but it's still fun !