Thinking about you

Fly away love

Miyu: "I heard something, I don't make a joke now". Suddenly someone knocked on the door. Miyu and I scream. I stood up and looked who it was. It was the postman with a parcel. "aigoo~ it is just the postman..." I opened the door and said sorry to the postman for our screaming. I explained to him: "we were watching a movie. I am sorry". The guy said it was alright and gave me the parcel. I closed the door. "Miyu, let's clean our faces, it's time :3 " "alright, I am coming" we walked to my bathroom. I grab towels and washcloths for us and I open the tap for warm water. "Miyu! the water is nice isn't it?" I said and splash water at Miyu. Miyu screamed. "hahahaha" i laughed at her. "You are going to get that back!" she said and splashed water back. I screamed now too. We splashed water at each other and laughed our off. We dry ourselves and clean our faces. We go back to the living room and watched the movie. A hour later Miyu went home and I go to bed.

 

~the next day~

The next day I go off to work again. I was busy as usual. When I got home I made diner for myself and checked my mail at the computer. Also my bank account to check how much money I got. I grabbed my bag and wallet and go off to the shopping mall.

"will the guy will be there in the store? " I thought out loud. I walk to different stores. I bought a friendship necklace for Miyu and me. I go to the store where that guy is working. I see nobody at the store. But whait... I heared something... at that door over there... I open the door quietly. I hear a guy singing. 'he is singing soooo beautiful!' I thought. 'he is that cute guy who said I looked nice with the skirt. He works here! When he is finished singing I shouted: "you are the man with the mask from Shining Star!" the guy ran to me and putted his hand on my mouth. "tell nobody about this okay?" he said. "okayy" I said back when he took his hand away from my mouth. The guy and I goes back to the store and he closes the door and locked the door with his key. "why do you keep this as a secret?" I asked him. "because I don't want to be bothered by people on the street or have to answer those stupid questions from journalists and things like that..." He answered. "okay. But to be honest... I thought you were that guy that came after you. He really looks like you, you know! But he doesn't sing that well..." "haha he is my twinbrother. I don't have good contact with him. He hates me because I have a good voice and his voice is not that great so that's why... We are really different from each other but we still we look almost the same." "ooh, I am sorry.." "no no you don't have to be sorry, don't say that. I hear it from more people that they were confused untill they hear our voices."

I look around in the store. "it is not that busy today hu?" I said. "true, I like it when it is like this" he said back.. I walk through the store but suddenly stopped when I saw a cute dress.(   this dress ;D  ) "KAWAII !! I like this dress! " I said. " hey you can talk Japanese!" He said while looking at me and at the dress. "well yes, I am quart Japanese, quart Korean, and ½ American ;D . my mom is American and my dad is ½ Japanese and ½ Korean" "okay, I am ½ Japanese, quart Korean and quart Chinese. My mother is ½ Korean and Japanese and my father is ½ Japanese and Chinese." "okay awesome ~" I go to the changing room with the dress. I fit the dress and I look into the mirror outside the changing room. I look at the price. 'hmmm it is too expensive, I should hang it back...' I thought. I go back to the changing room to put on my own clothes and go back to hang the dress back. I look a little dissapointed. "what's wrong?" The guy asked. "it is too expensive" I answered. "naaw, it looked really nice on you" "yeahh... what's the time?" "it's half past eight" "well, I will go home then... bye" i walk out of the store.

But on that moment someone grabbed my bag and started to pull. I screamed: "let my bag go!!"

 

 

 

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hwaranni #1
Chapter 2: The characters are a little confusing but I'm glad that you thought of using different names for them because I've thought of doing that too. But I didn't do it. XD I'm just voicing out my opinion so if I state that I don't like something, don't feel bad, okay? So, 1st chapter, you should break the whole chapter into more paragraphs because you're not using any font and normally readers don't like reading long paragraphs. It's just like an essay, if you have messy handwriting and you didn't break your essay into paragraphs, the teacher wouldn't enjoy reading it. And I'm glad that you did that in the 2nd chapter. Oh, and your full stops and capital letters. After a full stop, the next letter must be a capital letter. If not, it would just look like you're not putting in effort to write this story nicely. Other than that, your story is good. ^^ I like it. And I shall press the subscribe button right away! Happy writing! I hope this helps you! Don't feel bad, okay? Because this is only from me, maybe other readers don't think the same. ;D
QueenGirl
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@angie_xiong ; wait and you will see ~ :3
QueenGirl
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@angie_xiong I have updated another chapter ^^ I took so long because I have to translate everything again because I lost everything :( but it's still fun !