meeting you ~

Fly away love

it was on a spring day when I first met you...

I was walking in the shopping mall near my home. I looked inside the stores but didn't see anything special. A store with clothes only for man, a bakery, an expensive jeweler's shop, more stores with clothes. I looked in a store with cute clothes, and I found a cute skirt! I look at the price and I saw that I had enough money to buy it. I went to the changing room with it. I put the skirt on and look into the mirror outside my changing room. "this is so cute I have to buy it! :D" I said. I suddenly heard a guy's voice behind me: "it sure fits you, it looks nice ^_^ " when I turned around to look who said that I saw a handsome guy standing in front of me who works here. "thank you" I blushed. I go into the changing room and pull on my own clothes. I walk to the cashier to pay for the skirt. The guy was standing behind the desk was the guy from before who said I was cute. "good choice to buy it, it looks nice on you :)" he said. "Thank you" I said while giving him the money. he put the skirt in a plastic bag and gives the plastic bag to me. "bye :3 " I said "see you next time" he said back. 'what was he nice' I thought 'Probably because he is a salesman'.

I walk to my home. Back home I put on my cute skirt. "aaah gwi yeo weo :3 " the skirt rotates when I turn around. I hear the voice in my head from the guy from the store "it sure fits you, it looks nice" "when I get more money, I will go back to that store" . "hmmm I am hungry" I look at the clock "DINER TIME !" I grab the stuff  need for making Kimchi and go cooking.

 

-a couple hours later-

my favourite progam is on TV : 'Shining Stars' ((it is something like; --- got talent)) I like to see the auditions, because there are some people who can sing, yeah and some people not...  But than, on the progam, a guy with a masker on is walking on stage. A Jury: "who are you and what are you going to do?"  the guy: "I am me and I want to sing the song from Lee Seung Gi; Because you're my woman/girl" . "Okay, go on anonymous man" said the Jury. And the guy with the masker started to sing. It was soooo beautiful!! "can you sing a faster song for us?" said a jury when the song ended. The guy began to sing Daite Senorita, a Japanese song."  SO BEAUTIFUL AND Y <3. If I only knew who it was... But his voice.. It sound familiar... Jury: "we voted, we see you in the next round from popstar!"  "thank you" the guy bows and walks away. "WOW FANTASTIC BABY ! hehe. He is really good in singing!!" I said. The next person for the audition came on. my mouth went open and I pointed at the TV. "ISN'T THAT THE GUY FROM THE STORE ??"

 

 

I am sorry if I made any English mistakes ^_^ I hope you like it. I was short but I have to go to school now ;A; mianhae. If you are curious about the skirt she bought, see the image.

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hwaranni #1
Chapter 2: The characters are a little confusing but I'm glad that you thought of using different names for them because I've thought of doing that too. But I didn't do it. XD I'm just voicing out my opinion so if I state that I don't like something, don't feel bad, okay? So, 1st chapter, you should break the whole chapter into more paragraphs because you're not using any font and normally readers don't like reading long paragraphs. It's just like an essay, if you have messy handwriting and you didn't break your essay into paragraphs, the teacher wouldn't enjoy reading it. And I'm glad that you did that in the 2nd chapter. Oh, and your full stops and capital letters. After a full stop, the next letter must be a capital letter. If not, it would just look like you're not putting in effort to write this story nicely. Other than that, your story is good. ^^ I like it. And I shall press the subscribe button right away! Happy writing! I hope this helps you! Don't feel bad, okay? Because this is only from me, maybe other readers don't think the same. ;D
QueenGirl
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@angie_xiong ; wait and you will see ~ :3
QueenGirl
#3
@angie_xiong I have updated another chapter ^^ I took so long because I have to translate everything again because I lost everything :( but it's still fun !