Fly away love

Description

Love, Pain, Heartbroken, Sadness, Death. All those things can make you want to run away from reality.

SooMin and Irisa. They meet each other in a store. Is this love at first sight? They think that they can handle everything as long as they have each other. But they are also... just human.

What problems do they face?

Will their love last forever?

Foreword

So this is my first fanfic ^_^ .

It's a story I have written in Dutch since I am from the Netherlands. But I am translating it for you guys/girls to read it ^_^

I am not that good in English so if I made a mistake take it easy on me please.

I was inspired by a lot of kpop songs and videos.

enjoy the story ^_^

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hwaranni #1 Jan 20, 2013 06:08:42

Chapter 2: The characters are a little confusing but I'm glad that you thought of using different names for them because I've thought of doing that too. But I didn't do it. XD I'm just voicing out my opinion so if I state that I don't like something, don't feel bad, okay? So, 1st chapter, you should break the whole chapter into more paragraphs because you're not using any font and normally readers don't like reading long paragraphs. It's just like an essay, if you have messy handwriting and you didn't break your essay into paragraphs, the teacher wouldn't enjoy reading it. And I'm glad that you did that in the 2nd chapter. Oh, and your full stops and capital letters. After a full stop, the next letter must be a capital letter. If not, it would just look like you're not putting in effort to write this story nicely. Other than that, your story is good. ^^ I like it. And I shall press the subscribe button right away! Happy writing! I hope this helps you! Don't feel bad, okay? Because this is only from me, maybe other readers don't think the same. ;D

QueenGirl #2 Jul 22, 2012 06:11:34

@angie_xiong ; wait and you will see ~ :3

QueenGirl #3 Jun 27, 2012 11:35:55

@angie_xiong I have updated another chapter ^^ I took so long because I have to translate everything again because I lost everything :( but it's still fun !