EVIL JONGHYUN

HORIKITA MAKI AND HER LIFE IN THE SM BUILDING

Chapter5:

 

[MAKI’S POV]

 

“Now that I’ve save you from Key, do I get a reward?”

 

“A rewa—“ Suddenly, I could feel Onew’s lips on mine. His hands were on my thighs and then it travelled all the way underneath my shirt. no! I’m still a ! Don’t you dare to that on me Onew! He deepen the kiss and tried to insert his tongue into my mouth but I didn’t not co-operate. He started touching my bare skin and attempted to unclasp my bra.

 

 However, I managed to escape by bitting on his lips really hard with my sharp teeth. I guess it probably hurt ‘cause he removed his hands from his shirt and touching his lips. I used this opportunity to get out of Onew’s room.

 

My encounter with two of the SHINee members. All I can say is I pity whoever who is gonna be SHINee’s maid.

 

I looked at the door, the only way out of this scary place. Should I? Suddenly, I was shocked by JongHyun’s voice. “So, I assume that Onew tried to you?”

 

Eh nani? How did he know? He started walking closer to me. Ohno! Not JongHyun too?! I probably looked really scared because JongHyun was laughing at me. “Relax, Maki. I’m not gonna do anything to you. I have a girlfriend already.” For a second, I could feel myself heave a sigh of relief. At least not ALL of the members in SHINee is erted.

 

“Good to know that JongHyun but I’m never coming back to this dorm ever again. Bye, I’m out of here.” There’s no way I’m gonna stay in this place full with creepy people any longer. And besides, I have some shopping to do.

 

“Why? But TaeMin really need someone to take care of him! You see, me, Onew and MinHo is having this photoshoot tomorrow and we can’t leave little TaeMin all alone in the house! What if he gets hurt?! And I don’t think we would be able to find another maid in time.”

 

JongHyun continued to persuade me but was to no avail. “Sorry but, nah. I really can’t help you. Look, I really have to go. I have some erm… really important matters to attend to. Yes I do!” Before he could ever answer, I grabbed my bagpack and ran for the door and YES!!! I swear I couldn’t felt any happier when I was out of the SHINee dorm.

 

I was. Until I saw Changmin. His jaws literally dropped. He pointed to me, then at the door. Oh . I shook my head profusely, hopefully he doesn’t misunderstand.

 

“Don’t worry, Maki. I understand. I won’t tell YunHo hyung about what I saw.” Changmin gave me that i-get-it look but I know he didn’t. He probably thought that me and some dude from SHINee is having some romantic relationship urgh.

 

Anyway, why is he here? Isn’t he having a photoshoot?

 

“Oh that. Well, the female model couldn’t make it today because she was ill and it was cancelled in the end. YunHo hyung and the rest went to get groceries while I came back alone to sleep.”

 

Aw man. Guess that means I can only go shopping another day. We walked back to the DBSK dorm together, unaware that someone was watching us, planning something…

 

[END OF MAKI’S POV]

 

[JONGHYUN’S POV]

 

NO THE MAID CAN’T JUST LEAVE LIKE THAT! WHOSE GONNA TAKE CARE OF OUR LITTLE TAEMIN? HE NEEDS SOMEONE TO BABYSIT HIM WHILE WE AWAY ON THE PHOTOSHOOT? I’VE GOT TO RUN AFTER HER!

 

Well, that was what I intended to do but just as I opened the door. I saw Changmin hyung, jaws dropped.

 

“Don’t worry, Maki. I understand. I won’t tell YunHo hyung about what I saw.” Changmin said.

 

YunHo? Oh yes, this piece of information came just in time. So there’s something going on between that Maki and YunHo hyung is it? OMO SHE’S EVEN GOING INSIDE THE DBSK DORM? Something must be going on between them then. Well, I’ll just use this to threaten Maki to babysit Taemin and she can’t say no! Muahahahaha! Yes, I’m aware that I’m evil.

 

I saw at the corner of my eye, Maki’s phone on the sofa. Perfect opportunity…

 

[END OF JONGHYUN’S POV]

 

[MAKI’S POV]

 

It was dinner time and YunHo oppa prepared dinner for the DBSK members. And I helped to chop the carrot and tomatoes! :D (Actually, that was the only thing I could do. L) Soon, dinner could be served and we all sat down and had dinner. Hehe my first dinner with my oppa and his bandmates was not bad actually. At first I thought it would be awkward but they were friendly and tried to make small talks with me and include me into their conversations.

 

Halfway through dinner, the phone rang. “I’ll get it.” Yes, I do have manners.

 

I picked up the phone. “Yeboseyo?”

 

“Oh. Its me, Maki.” That voice was familiar. Then, I realized it was JongHyun. Hey wait. How does he know what number to dial to contact me?

 

“How did you –“ I whispered into the phone so as not to attract oppa’s attention.

 

“What? Surprised? I know you secrets, Maki. Come to the SHINee dorm tomorrow at 9am if you wanna know more. Anyway, your cellphone, you left it at the dorm. So either ways, you have to come here.”

 

God damn it. That bastard. How did he know?

 

“I got it.” I said and hung up after that and walked back to my seat at the dining room.

 

“Who was that?” YunHo oppa asked.

 

“Oh nothing. He got the wrong number.” I lied to oppa and continued eating my food while thinking what that Kim JongHyun is up to…

 

[END OF MAKI'S POV]

 

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I was supposed to be studying for my exam tomorrow but I decided that I need some time off the books so here I am with an update! :D Okay, I know its a short one but I'll try my best to update it some time next week. (though I'll be away on a camp for 3 days) I initially wanted to update THE STORY OF A TEENAGE GIRL WHO LOST HER MEMORY but halfway through typing the chapter, I got a little lazy and tired and too much ideas were flowing in my head i didn't know which one to pick so I update this story instead.

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haha_idk
#1
Chapter 6: Interesting......UPDATE ^-^ now pwease
Rini6189
#2
It does seem like a short chapter. Though, I've noticed that you've posted "Chapter 5" twice on the same page. That makes it look longer. Camp sounds like fun. Exploring the great outdoors is a good learning experience. Being surrounded by nature is a good escape from the stress of everyday urban/city life. It's a nice change of scenery. I hope you'll have fun. <br />
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Jonghyun really is not leaving Maki with much of a choice in the matter by blackmailing her. None of the SHINee members (except Key) seem to be aware that she's not actually their maid. At least Key is the only one suspecting her. Leaving her alone with Taemin may not be a good thing depending on how much trouble he'll be for her. When Yunho finds out, I don't think he'll be happy finding out how they've been treating her. He might try to clear things up. Then everybody would be in on a secret to keep her from being found out by the higher-ups.
enuj454
#3
BUM BUM BUM! I wonder how Maki will handle Jonghyun's misguided blackmail. And what Yunho will do to stop it!! If he even finds out that is lol. Another fun chapter from you~ Reading your stories is something I always look forward to :P
butterfly555 #4
ah i c and omg i hope yunho oppa save her
Rini6189
#5
Ch. 5 mistakes:<br />
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1. “NEW MAID?!” the other 4 members exclaimed.<br />
Correction: "NEW MAID?!" The other four members exclaimed.<br />
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2. I don’t feel like telling Maki that I’m his soon-to-be groom and I think it would nice to play tricks on Maki, make life difficult for her when she’s in the SHINee dorm, and besides she really slow, it would be fun!<br />
Correction: I don't feel like telling Maki that I'm her soon-to-be groom and I think it would be nice to play tricks on Maki and make life miserable for her when she's in the SHINee dorm, and besides, she's really slow. It would be fun!<br />
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3. Erm… well, I wanted to explain all this to you guys but you all were so excited and kept cutting into my words so I didn’t had a chance to confess about all these. <br />
Correction: Erm... Well, I wanted to explain all this to you guys, but you all were so excited and kept cutting into my words, so I didn't have a chance to confess about all these.<br />
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4. Don’t you dare to that on me Onew! <br />
Correction: Don't you dare do that to me, Onew!<br />
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5. He deepen the kiss and tried to insert his tongue into my mouth but I didn’t not co-operate. <br />
Correction: He deepened the kiss and tried to insert his tongue into my mouth, but I didn't cooperate.<br />
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6. However, I managed to escape by bitting on his lips really hard with my sharp teeth. <br />
Correction: However, I managed to escape by biting his lips really hard with my sharp teeth.<br />
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7. I guess it probably hurt ‘cause he removed his hands from his shirt and touching his lips.<br />
Correction: I guess it probably hurt 'cause he removed his hands from my shirt and touched his lips.<br />
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8. All I can say is I pity whoever who is gonna be SHINee’s maid. <br />
Correction: All I can say is I pity whoever is gonna be SHINee's maid.
Rini6189
#6
Taemin is so cold towards her. Key probably wants to make life hell for her because of what he had to eventually go through under his father's orders. That way, making it an unpleasant experience to be under the same roof as him could be his escape route to avoid the arranged marriage so that Maki wouldn't agree getting married to him from seeing the kind of person he is, which she already disapproves herself. It's predictable what Onew would do considering how he's portrayed here. Good thing that Maki managed to escape his grasp. It may have been better off for her to face Key than Onew. At least Key isn't so touchy. Since Key and Maki have the same mindset about the arranged marriage, there's the chance that they could work toward an agreement and help each other out in a way. I wonder how she'd fare being their "assumed" maid and whether there's a way out of that situation. I'm anticipating an encounter between DBSK and SHINee later. I'm all right with you not writing rated scenes because I don't think I'd like reading that in this story. It gives me an "iffy" feeling. I wasn't drawn to this fic at first because of the content. It's the story's plotline that's got me interested. I appreciate reading something that builds up on the plot rather focusing on the content. :) I like it just the way it is now that you're writing it. <br />
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Rini6189
#7
Here are the mistakes that I've found in Chapter Four:<br />
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1. I walked into the room and lie down next to the person on the bed I’m sleeping.<br />
Correction: I walked into the room and lied down next to the person on the bed and fell asleep.<br />
* Since you begin this sentence in past tense, you'd want to keep the consistency by keeping the whole sentence in past tense (the actions).<br />
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2. Before leaving the dorm, oppa gave me a set of keys to the dorm and some money for me to buy new clothes ‘cause I only brought 5 sets of clothes with me.<br />
* "Oppa" should be capitalized since it's like a name that refers to someone (i.e. Dad, Mom, etc.). To be gramatically correct, numbers are to be spelled out. (5 = five)<br />
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3. Ok, I’m not gonna stay in here alone, doing nothing in this dorm anymore, I shall go to some shopping mall and shop for new clothes with the money oppa gave me!<br />
Correction: Ok, I'm not gonna stay in here alone doing nothing in this dorm anymore. I shall go to some shopping mall and shop for new clothes with the money Oppa gave me!<br />
* The phrases are best written as separate sentences since they're referring to completely different topics.<br />
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4. I feeling kinda happy now that I have escaped from that marriage, left the house, my parents can no longer control me.<br />
Correction: I'm feeling kinda happy now that I have escaped from that arranged marriage and left the house. My parents can no longer control me.<br />
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5. The lift reached the 12thfloor and I began to walk to the SHINee dorm, I saw this girl standing in front of the SHINee dorm.<br />
Correction: The lift reached the twelfth floor and I began to walk to the SHINee dorm. I saw this girl standing in front of the SHINee dorm.<br />
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6. I wanted to tell him that I wasn’t a maid but he opened the door and dragged me in the room. <br />
Correction: I wanted to tell him that I'm not a maid, but he opened the door and dragged me into the room.<br />
* A personal trait or the person's current position should be described in present tense.<br />
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Rini6189
#8
This may be a boring Chapter Four, but it's helping to move the plot along. xD Jaejoong had better be running or he'll get eaten alive. Though, it's just a really bad nightmare. Now the rest of the DBSK members will have to try to keep Maki a secret from their manager and maybe the others. It's too late now that Taemin has encountered her in the hallway. She could be in the worst position after Taemin mistook her for a maid. Onew being lecherous is just plain creepy. Hopefully Maki would be careful to stay clear of him. It seems that will have to go with it in order to avoid being found out.<br />
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RayGasan #9
I honestly thought Taemin was going to be her soon-to-be-groom...<br />
And more rated scene to come?<br />
I don't know if I'm gonna like that but it's still a good story. Keep it up. And hopefully with less of rated scene.<br />
Ahahahaha...<br />
xx
yaymaki #10
@ makichan: haha thanks! But I'm kinda having a writer's block now :/<br />
@ butterfly555: Honestly I myself have no idea how the story will go haha we'll see what will happen when the story progresses :) <br />
@ Forbidden: haha yes I will try my best and continue to update this fic :)<br />
@ enuj454: haha thanks for your constant support! :D you're always there to give me motivation to update my fics!