THE DBSK DORM

HORIKITA MAKI AND HER LIFE IN THE SM BUILDING

Chapter2:

 

[MAKI’S POV]

 

Its gonna be 12am in the morning soon. Lucky for me, both of my parents will be attending some function and would be out early morning and reached home at wee hours. All of the servants are sleeping. Oh yea, this is my chance!

 

I went to my walk-in closet and picked out about 5 of my most comfortable and favourite outfit, my PJs and my school uniform and placed them in my backpack. Most of my books are in the school lockers so thank goodness I only had to bring my notebooks along with me. I took all necessary items with me. I changed into a electric blue sweatshirt which was relatively long, just 5 inches above my knees. I wore a pair of black leggings and sneakers.

 

Once I’m done, I looked out of the window and I kinda wanted to chicken out but somehow I convinced myself not to. I can do this! I’m only on the second floor, I guess I won’t die if I jump from my room’s window right?

 

I breathe in deep and then I jumped!

To my surprise, I landed on both feet, unharmed!

But it was not over yet, I still had to climb over this oh-so-freaking-high wall before I will see the light to freedom.

My wall was quite hard to climb that I almost felt like giving up and accepting reality that I can’t escape this arranged marriage. However, it was that strong feeling of not wanting to marry someone I don’t love that kept me going.

Soon, I was on top of the wall. I jumped down from the wall and YES!!! I’M FREE!

 

I wanted to scream, cheer out loud, tell the whole world what a genius I am but I was pretty much conscious about the fact that I might wake my parents up and so, I didn’t.

 

Everything was going according to plan.

 

As I was walking on the streets, still feeling quite proud about myself, I took out my cellphone and dialed YunHo oppa’s number.

 

“Maki?! –yawns- Why are calling your oppa in the middle in the night? Shouldn’t you be sleeping? –yamns-“ I could tell that I just woke YunHo oppa up from his sleep but his voice was still, as gently as always.

 

“Ne oppa, can I come over to your place? I’ll explain everything to you later, I promise!”

 

“Do I have an option? Well, since the other members are all asleep, I guess you can come over for awhile. You know where it is right? SM building, 10thfloor, unit number 12.”

 

“Ok oppa, I’ll be there as soon as possible.”

 

(in the SM building)

 

Oh god. This place is really really mega huge!

Oppa didn’t told me he lived in a building as pretty as this?! I can’t believe it! How can oppa hide something like this from me?!

 

I pressed the button in the lift and exited the lift once it reached 10thfloor.  I dialed YunHo oppa’s number once again to inform him that I’m here already.

 

Within seconds, the door opened and I was greeted by oppa’s worried yet sleepy face. He looked around and then dragged me inside and closed the door.

 

“Maki, remember to keep your volume down. I don’t want you to wake up the members and them to find out about you, arasso? Anyway, mind telling me your reason for coming here now?”

 

I told oppa everything, like seriously everything. From mum and dad’s facial expression, and every single word in our conversation and I guess I kinda exaggerated a little but an arranged marriage is already that bad so NO I’M JUST STATING FACTS.

 

“So you don’t want to marry that guy and thus, you came to your oppa for help, hoping that he will let you stay here and hide away from mum and dad?”

 

I nod my head and gave him the most innocent look and those big puppy eyes. “Please oppa … I don’t have a place to stay and mum and dad would scold me if I went back home and knew that I attempted to run away from home. Please oppa…”

 

As usual, that tactic worked on my oppa. “Aww~ Maki, how can I ever say no to my cute little sister? –pats head- Well, listen. You can sleep at that room at that corner. –points to a room- That room used to be Changmin’s but he’s moved to Junsu’s room because he’s too scared to sleep alone since 2 months ago so I guess its okay for you to sleep there for the time being. And remember to lock the door before you sleep, the members must not find out about this. Ok, I’m really tired now. Good night Maki.” Oppa kissed my forehead as he walked back to his room.

 

-yawn-

 

I guess I’m tired too. I should really get some sleep too.

I walked back to my temporary room and laid on the bed, slowly drifting to sleep…

 

[END OF MAKI’S POV]

 

[JAEJOONG’S POV]

 

I just woke up from this really scary nightmare, that dinosaurs were chasing after me!

I was so scared I just wanted to sleep at any member’s room. (preferably YunHo’s hehe) I didn’t bother to switch on the lights and just went to into any random room that I could find.

I walked into the room and lie down next to the person on the bed I’m sleeping.

 

[END OF JAEJOONG’S POV]

 

(in the morning)

 

[MAKI’S POV]

 

I had a comfortable sleep last night, and from now on, I can sleep for as long as I want! Back at my house, the maids would wake me up at 8am everyday without fail, which sometimes, do pisses me off. I wanted to get up from the bed but there was this weight that prevented me from doing so.

 

And when I finally realized, what that “weight” was, I screamed like, “AAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!”

 

Oh . Wrong move for I have just woke up everybody in the DBSK dorm.

What am I to do now?! 

 

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Ok chapter2 is kinda crappy. :/ but do look forward to chapter3! there will be interaction with taemin! :D (i think there will be :/)

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haha_idk
#1
Chapter 6: Interesting......UPDATE ^-^ now pwease
Rini6189
#2
It does seem like a short chapter. Though, I've noticed that you've posted "Chapter 5" twice on the same page. That makes it look longer. Camp sounds like fun. Exploring the great outdoors is a good learning experience. Being surrounded by nature is a good escape from the stress of everyday urban/city life. It's a nice change of scenery. I hope you'll have fun. <br />
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Jonghyun really is not leaving Maki with much of a choice in the matter by blackmailing her. None of the SHINee members (except Key) seem to be aware that she's not actually their maid. At least Key is the only one suspecting her. Leaving her alone with Taemin may not be a good thing depending on how much trouble he'll be for her. When Yunho finds out, I don't think he'll be happy finding out how they've been treating her. He might try to clear things up. Then everybody would be in on a secret to keep her from being found out by the higher-ups.
enuj454
#3
BUM BUM BUM! I wonder how Maki will handle Jonghyun's misguided blackmail. And what Yunho will do to stop it!! If he even finds out that is lol. Another fun chapter from you~ Reading your stories is something I always look forward to :P
butterfly555 #4
ah i c and omg i hope yunho oppa save her
Rini6189
#5
Ch. 5 mistakes:<br />
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1. “NEW MAID?!” the other 4 members exclaimed.<br />
Correction: "NEW MAID?!" The other four members exclaimed.<br />
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2. I don’t feel like telling Maki that I’m his soon-to-be groom and I think it would nice to play tricks on Maki, make life difficult for her when she’s in the SHINee dorm, and besides she really slow, it would be fun!<br />
Correction: I don't feel like telling Maki that I'm her soon-to-be groom and I think it would be nice to play tricks on Maki and make life miserable for her when she's in the SHINee dorm, and besides, she's really slow. It would be fun!<br />
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3. Erm… well, I wanted to explain all this to you guys but you all were so excited and kept cutting into my words so I didn’t had a chance to confess about all these. <br />
Correction: Erm... Well, I wanted to explain all this to you guys, but you all were so excited and kept cutting into my words, so I didn't have a chance to confess about all these.<br />
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4. Don’t you dare to that on me Onew! <br />
Correction: Don't you dare do that to me, Onew!<br />
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5. He deepen the kiss and tried to insert his tongue into my mouth but I didn’t not co-operate. <br />
Correction: He deepened the kiss and tried to insert his tongue into my mouth, but I didn't cooperate.<br />
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6. However, I managed to escape by bitting on his lips really hard with my sharp teeth. <br />
Correction: However, I managed to escape by biting his lips really hard with my sharp teeth.<br />
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7. I guess it probably hurt ‘cause he removed his hands from his shirt and touching his lips.<br />
Correction: I guess it probably hurt 'cause he removed his hands from my shirt and touched his lips.<br />
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8. All I can say is I pity whoever who is gonna be SHINee’s maid. <br />
Correction: All I can say is I pity whoever is gonna be SHINee's maid.
Rini6189
#6
Taemin is so cold towards her. Key probably wants to make life hell for her because of what he had to eventually go through under his father's orders. That way, making it an unpleasant experience to be under the same roof as him could be his escape route to avoid the arranged marriage so that Maki wouldn't agree getting married to him from seeing the kind of person he is, which she already disapproves herself. It's predictable what Onew would do considering how he's portrayed here. Good thing that Maki managed to escape his grasp. It may have been better off for her to face Key than Onew. At least Key isn't so touchy. Since Key and Maki have the same mindset about the arranged marriage, there's the chance that they could work toward an agreement and help each other out in a way. I wonder how she'd fare being their "assumed" maid and whether there's a way out of that situation. I'm anticipating an encounter between DBSK and SHINee later. I'm all right with you not writing rated scenes because I don't think I'd like reading that in this story. It gives me an "iffy" feeling. I wasn't drawn to this fic at first because of the content. It's the story's plotline that's got me interested. I appreciate reading something that builds up on the plot rather focusing on the content. :) I like it just the way it is now that you're writing it. <br />
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Rini6189
#7
Here are the mistakes that I've found in Chapter Four:<br />
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1. I walked into the room and lie down next to the person on the bed I’m sleeping.<br />
Correction: I walked into the room and lied down next to the person on the bed and fell asleep.<br />
* Since you begin this sentence in past tense, you'd want to keep the consistency by keeping the whole sentence in past tense (the actions).<br />
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2. Before leaving the dorm, oppa gave me a set of keys to the dorm and some money for me to buy new clothes ‘cause I only brought 5 sets of clothes with me.<br />
* "Oppa" should be capitalized since it's like a name that refers to someone (i.e. Dad, Mom, etc.). To be gramatically correct, numbers are to be spelled out. (5 = five)<br />
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3. Ok, I’m not gonna stay in here alone, doing nothing in this dorm anymore, I shall go to some shopping mall and shop for new clothes with the money oppa gave me!<br />
Correction: Ok, I'm not gonna stay in here alone doing nothing in this dorm anymore. I shall go to some shopping mall and shop for new clothes with the money Oppa gave me!<br />
* The phrases are best written as separate sentences since they're referring to completely different topics.<br />
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4. I feeling kinda happy now that I have escaped from that marriage, left the house, my parents can no longer control me.<br />
Correction: I'm feeling kinda happy now that I have escaped from that arranged marriage and left the house. My parents can no longer control me.<br />
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5. The lift reached the 12thfloor and I began to walk to the SHINee dorm, I saw this girl standing in front of the SHINee dorm.<br />
Correction: The lift reached the twelfth floor and I began to walk to the SHINee dorm. I saw this girl standing in front of the SHINee dorm.<br />
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6. I wanted to tell him that I wasn’t a maid but he opened the door and dragged me in the room. <br />
Correction: I wanted to tell him that I'm not a maid, but he opened the door and dragged me into the room.<br />
* A personal trait or the person's current position should be described in present tense.<br />
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Rini6189
#8
This may be a boring Chapter Four, but it's helping to move the plot along. xD Jaejoong had better be running or he'll get eaten alive. Though, it's just a really bad nightmare. Now the rest of the DBSK members will have to try to keep Maki a secret from their manager and maybe the others. It's too late now that Taemin has encountered her in the hallway. She could be in the worst position after Taemin mistook her for a maid. Onew being lecherous is just plain creepy. Hopefully Maki would be careful to stay clear of him. It seems that will have to go with it in order to avoid being found out.<br />
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RayGasan #9
I honestly thought Taemin was going to be her soon-to-be-groom...<br />
And more rated scene to come?<br />
I don't know if I'm gonna like that but it's still a good story. Keep it up. And hopefully with less of rated scene.<br />
Ahahahaha...<br />
xx
yaymaki #10
@ makichan: haha thanks! But I'm kinda having a writer's block now :/<br />
@ butterfly555: Honestly I myself have no idea how the story will go haha we'll see what will happen when the story progresses :) <br />
@ Forbidden: haha yes I will try my best and continue to update this fic :)<br />
@ enuj454: haha thanks for your constant support! :D you're always there to give me motivation to update my fics!