Why Won't You Take Me Seriously? - AbsolutelyAwesome
Sparkling Jewels {Closed}
Story Title: Why Won't You Take Me Seriously?
Author: AbsolutelyAwesome
Story Link: Why Won't You Take Me Seriously?
Title (5/5):
It reflects your story really well, and is capitalized correctly. So thank you for that :D It's nice to see someone actually follow capitalization rules on this site... -_-;
Appearance (3/5):
The poster and background do look really nice-- but it doesn't fit the tone/theme of your story. Your poster and background give off a supernatural or sci-fi feel. I'd suggest a cute one, or even an angsty one. Whatever you think is the general tone. :)
Foreword/Description (8/10):
It was really great-- I liked it! The description and foreword were actually a description and foreword. The description explained main points of your story, while the foreword gave us a sneak preview of what's to come. I really liked it ^__^
However, I took off a couple points, mainly for the coloring. I don't get it... Make it one color or the other. Or at least have a pattern to the different colors-- I didn't get why you did that. And, also, for the random picture of Baekhyun's hands at the end of the description. It seemed random and unnecessary...
But, I did like the photos at the end of the foreword. They were simple and cute, and I loved having them there! Even though I'm not too fond of pictures in the foreword/description...
Plot/Originality (12/25):
It's not really all that original. I've seen a lot of stories with the same plot... But I do like the idea of your story, which is why these types are so popular. LOL. Try adding some major twists to your story to make it di
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