Seredipity - psyduck
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Story Title: Serendipity
Author: psyduck
Story Link: Serendipity
Title (5/5):
I absolutely love the title! It’s simple, yet is still able to wrap up the entire theme of the story in one word. It’s such a flowy and intriguing word as well!
Appearance (5/5):
The poster is so bright and unique, but nowhere near being overdone. It reflects the title so well, and so do the characters. The background is really nice also. Just like the title does, it elegantly radiates simplicity.
Foreword/Description (10/10):
I can already tell that the story is going to be interesting, which means the foreword and description are doing their job! Again, I can’t emphasize how much I love that you’re making things come about so well without cramming it with unnecessary details.
Plot/Originality (23/25):
I know you got the idea of your story from a movie, which I actually looked up by the way just because I was curious, but you’re definitely putting a nice twist on it. I’m not sure what all you got out of the movie because I haven’t seen it, but everything just seems so well composed! I’m also surprised that I’m able to compliment you so much even though you’ve only written FOUR chapters!
Grammar/Spelling (28/30):
Another amazing job well done, and English isn’t even your first language. There were a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, but none that really stood out or tainted the story in any way. I’m in
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