Some Things We Don't See

Little Stories
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The endless cacophony of invisible rain drowning my thoughts, making me deaf to whispers of hopelessness begging to be heard as it claws at this hollow muscular organ somewhere inside my s.

 

Should I wish to be blind so I could no longer watch you watch her smile?

 

 

 


 

A/N: When I said little stories…I really meant little. >_<

I was drunk while writing this. lol...just kidding.

That quiet moment when your heart breaks. I wanted to capture it a few words.  Any thoughts? Sorry if you expected some long-ish story. *hides*

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RogueMia
#1
Chapter 5: Thank you for the snippet/quote at the end of this chapter. . it really voiced out how i'm feeling as of this moment since i just broke up with the person i thought was thinking of me as a special piece in his life. . but as the line said. . maybe it was just MY wishful thinking. . :P

Thank you for this. .cleared up my head. . :)
ephemeral1911
#2
Chapter 1: i love your writing on Walking Around . i hope you would make it into a full length story. it's interesting :)
dream_keeper88
#3
Chapter 6: do you remember me? aweee >///<
I don't think I would forget too. I hope not.
sweetmedusaaa
#4
Chapter 6: AWW!! shocks this is just so sweet T_T <33333 thank youuu for this :3
tillynilly
#5
oh wow you are a great writer. im loving these a lot more than i thought i would. the way you tell your stories is a lot different from what ive usually seen; the whole narration and setup is very new and refreshing to me. :)
even now, the first chapter gets me; the letter to top. i really do wish that maybe one day youll be able to go back and expand on it, because it just feels incomplete, and im craving more. if you made that little story into a full fledged book i would totally buy it. agrjdl im just imagining its awesomeness right now. i loved reading all of these though. they kinda make you think while youre reading; its cool.
secsnow #6
Chapter 5: Sometimes people want to be seen through the soul not just face and to be heard deep meaning of words not just came from mouth... Beautiful and touching deep... Thanks so much...'bow'
sweetmedusaaa
#7
Chapter 4: wow.. this is just amazing <33
Telor2 #8
by asking if she should, she's already wishing that she is blind, isn't she?
dream_keeper88
#9
The third one... Beautiful ^0^
's' could be chest too ^^
Yeah, the image in my head kinda... Oh nvm :)
almostblue
#10
;A; these are amazing!