❤ kiki420
Little Warrior's Shop [Batch 2; Closed]
Reviewer: My_Asianless_Mind
Story Author: kiki420
Story Author: kiki420
Amount of Chapters: 9
Ongoing or Completed: Ongoing
Life Upside Down
title: This title "Life Upside Down" You can kind if figure out how YeJin's life will change. It's simple and nice and it gives a hint to what the story may be about. 5/5
description and foreward: Description, is absolutely perfect! It's describing her features,personality, and her social ranking in her school. I like it. Nice way to credit the shops! I should try that now instead of doing "cr; To _________ shop and to graphic artist _________ for the nice poster" and have their link. Absolutely perfect. 10/10
poster: This poster shows all the main characters. Very nice, But I also perfect using the poster and background from Midnight Fantasy. It looks amazing. 4/5
chapter title: Titles~ They need to be renamed, give small hints to what's up coming. It'll get readers like me excited. 3/5
plot: Amazing! The plot was well explained and doesn't need to be changed at all! I love it! 20/20
flow: Make a tiny change. In the first chapter kind of explain how she has to leave, why she had everything confiscated, explain how she was and how she got to a high social rank. 6/10
characters: Again, explain characters how is SHINee here are they mean?,shy?,cutie boy? Explain it all. Give back ground info. 5/15
font: The font used is neat and nice. I like it, neatness counts. And as your neatness follows, you can grab more readers. 5/5
grammar: No errors here! Well done! 15/15
enjoyment: I love it. I only read up to chapter 5 and I instantly love it! Awesome job! 10/10
Well done, I didn't have to be strict on this one. I loved it!
Total: 83/100
Comments