Chapter 10

When a nerd transforms to a kingka

 

Warm morning breeze, you quickly got up to go jogging. You weren’t feeling well but you still gave it a go. It became your habit to go jogging every Thursday, so yeah.

You went downstairs to eat a banana. You went outside and started jogging.

While jogging around the neighborhood, you saw a guy that is jogging also.

You greeted him, “Hello! Are you new in this neighborhood? I don’t seem to notice you anywhere before. You look… unfamiliar.”

The guy giggled. “Yes I am. How about you? Do you live here?” the guy asked.

“Yeah. Anyways, what’s your name?” you asked.

“I’m Lee Ho won. You can call me Hoya for short.” He introduced.

“Hoya? Hahaha! That’s a nice name. It’s a flower. Who named you that?” you asked.

“My mom. Aish. If you think it’s funny then you can just call me by my real name.” he said.

“No. I find Hoya easy to say. No offense, ok?” you smiled.

“Anyways, what’s your name?” he asked.

“Jiyeon. Choi Jiyeon. Nice to meet you.” You introduced yourself.

“Nice to meet you too. You’re so beautiful.” He said. You smiled and thanked him, “Thanks. Oh! I’ll go back now. Bye! See you around?”

“Sure.” He nodded. *She’s so beautiful. Does she have a boyfriend?* he thought.

You were jogging back to your house. Myungsoo saw you as he called you, “Jiyeon!” but you didn’t turn back. You were feeling dizzy and you don’t feel well.

“yah! Jiyeon!” this time, you heard him but you ignored him. You don’t feel like talking to him today, even though you wanted to.

You went inside your house. Myungsoo’s shoulders deflated.

*Whats up with her? Why is she acting so strange today?* Myungsoo thought.

You were lying on your bed. You were feeling so cold. You were sweating so badly, at the same time.

Your mom left because she has some job to do, leaving you alone in the house.

*I can’t go to school like this. My head is… so heavy…* 

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-2Mirae-
14 streak #1
Chapter 80: I noticed I bookmarked your story so I decided to reread your story from the beginning. The ending and the reuniting is so cute!!!
Shihsuan2005 #2
Chapter 80: I agree with teddy2005 I love this story so much so please continue the story
teddy2005 #3
Chapter 80: I love this story very much and I wish you will write a story to continue this story
Rini6189
#4
Chapter 80: It's nice for the whole family to reunite after all those years that they'd been apart. At least their father had come to his senses to finally learn to accept them as they are. Forgiveness leads one to make peace with the pain.

That's ending the story on a good note with the scene of Myungsoo, Jiyeon and the guys having a good time on the beach. He and Jiyeon are funny together in the way that they goof off. They make such a cute couple.

No problem! I'm glad that you appreciate the help I'd given you with the corrections. It's good that you've learned something that'd help you in becoming a better writer. Experimenting with different styles and formats is part of the writing process in developing your skill. Everyone needs to start somewhere on a path of self-discovery in order to grow and learn more about themselves.
Rini6189
#5
Chapter 79: This is one sugary sweet and heartwarmingly fluffy chapter of Myungsoo and Jiyeon drowning in love. It's cute that he's widely grinning while pretending to be unconscious as she confessed her love to him. He's quite mischievous to put on that act just to get that out of her.
TIffany_93 #6
Chapter 12: I love this story so much. The whole story line is so sweet. :)
maoaher #7
Chapter 80: Dang I was up at 2 am reading this and forced myself to sleep. I didn't want to get away reading this fabric. It was so sweet, I'm getting attacked my bugs lol. Thank you authornim for this cute, cheesy story
AngelNic #8
Love this story
taoftsehun #9
i love this story I'm rereading
_Taemi_
#10
i really enjoyed this story authornim