Again???!!!

Look Like Rain

Tomorrow day, Yoochun and Yunho walked together toward the school. Without deliberate Yunho and Jaejoong collide and their quarrels.
 

"If the road be careful ..." Jaejoong snapped.
 

"You were careful ... The road daydream? If you daydream at home ... "Reply Yunho.

They face each other for a moment. Jaejoong send death glared as well as Yunho. Yoochun looked at Yunho and Jaejoong and turns with a puzzled look.


"I want to daydream, sleep ... Indeed, what is your problem?" Asked Jaejoong.
 

"Really does not exist ..." Reply Yunho scratched his head.
"But it's VERY annoying ..." Add Yunho emphasize the word 'VERY'. While they were busy arguing, Yoochun looked at his clock and then his eyes rounded.

 

"Hyung ..." Call Yoochun Yunho and Jaejoong but ignored it.
 

"Hyung ..." Call Yoochun with the sound a bit harsh but the result is nil. Then, because of disgust was ignored by Yunho and Jaejoong. Yoochun  took a deep breath in and then scream.
 

"Hyung!! STOP DEBATE, WE ARE LATE ENTRY! " Yell Yoochun. Immediately Yunho and Jaejoong stopped arguing and looked at Yoochun.
 

"Huh? Too late? Omo ... I die! " Yunho said and then ran.
 

"Aisshh ... All thanks to you !!!!!!" Reply Jaejoong and followed Yunho, leaving Yoochun alone.
 

"Hyung .... Aiissshhhh ... Why did I end up like this? Got a weird friend ... "and Yoochun began to pursue hate  Yunho and Jaejoong.
 

In another place, away from Yoochun. Yunho and Jaejoong ran while still had quarrels.
 

"You ... If I was late, I'll kill you!" Threatens Jaejoong still kept running.
 

"Actually I said so ... idiot!" Reply Yunho.

~> Jaejoong POV <~
Akhh ... Why I have to meet this man again? Is it because I forget to pray yesterday? But ... I've been praying really ...
Ugh ... What's wrong with this heart again? Why in times like this should be a recurrence?

~> End POV <~

Jaejoong slowed down and holding his chest. Yunho stopped and looked Jaejoong surprised.

 

"Are you okay??" Asked Yunho approached. With irregular breathing, Jaejoong raised his hand. Intending to stop Yunho to close.
 

"Do not come ... You'd better go first! I'm just tired ... "Jaejoong answered. Yunho was getting worried and approached Jaejoong again.
 

"But your face is pale ... Are you all right??" Asked Yunho again. Jaejoong had not responded, he was not strong anymore and was unconscious. Yunho quickly caught him and hold him.
 

"Fortunately the school was not far away anymore ..." Yunho said in your heart and holding Jaejoong with bridal style.

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Kathynka
#1
Chapter 3: Nice story, but I don't really understand...I mean your grammar, or just...It doesn't make sense at all. Sorry
CinqLuna #2
nice story :)
naznew #3
Best story..kamsahamnida 4 make the story
eternalcassie1803 #4
OMG one more Indonesian writer on Asianfanfics XD I'm Indonesian too...amazing story by the way :D keep up the good work
KimFengHua_Fengfeng
#5
ah... yeah, im ind0nesia t0...<br />
im really xry. im 4get t0 check again...<br />
thx 4 c0ment.. xDd
KimSera
#6
hehehe.....are you Indonesian?<br />
"di bahu" ?<br />
hehehee.... <br />
Good job..... >.<
KimSera
#7
omo.....what happend to my jongie T.T <br />
*killed by yunho*<br />
update soon.....<br />
come on..come on....update again...!!!! <br />
<3 <3 <3
KimFengHua_Fengfeng
#8
Thnx 4 read and coment^^
yunjaemrcn #9
i loved it!!! seems sooo good! (thumb up)
moongirl #10
hi your sttoooooooooooooooooooory is beautiful hehhehe update fast