Tantris Onara: Review Request from missterious
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Title Grab :[10/10]
STILL No idea what it means. But it does make it sound mysterious. ^^
Foreword/Description: [8/10]
You made it short and simple. Sweet =D xD
Good job my friend. =3
Storyline/Flow: [22/30]
The chapters are a bit too short, you should have spacing =3! Allows the reader to read more easily but other than that its okay. You story features yuri, I adore you for that... there arent ALOT of people on aff who like /yuri... so sad... I have a story similar to yours =3 but it you are welcome to check it out ^^
Characters: [26/30]
Good job on character portrayal ^^ Keep at it!!! I at writing and portaying characters D=
But still GOOD JOB =D BETTER THAN ME XD
Laughs/Bonuses/Extras: [20/20]
You have some laughs here and there and its good ^^
You got da art and everything <3 very creative i loves it =3 <3
Overall : [86/100] a B GOOD JOB <3
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