Review Request from: Shawol- Elf.

Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/151752/learning-from-above-jonghyun-key-minho-onew-shinee-taemin

Title: Learning from Above. By: Shawol- Elf.

Review: START: ^^

Title Grab: [10/10]

You made a really good title, a good start, and is very creative.

Foreword/Description: [10/10]

LAWL Your foreword and descrition is awesome, perfect, too bad you did not add character profiles, gives off a picture to the readers =P.

Storyline/Flow: [18/20]

Good start, very descriptive, a bit confusing, JUST A BIT haha.

Your grammer is flawless, just a bit more work with your wording, maybe spelling, because it only has a chapter I have absolutely no clue, but it is really good for a beginning. I don't see the conflict all i see is plot. So you are with 5 hot guys teaching you how your life was and stuff. Whats the main conflict? Is there an enemy? Or is it you just overcoming your memories? Hmm?

Off of everything, the spelling, the grammar is pretty well written and done. or what?

Characters: [ 3/10]

Only know that you(Angela) and Shinee are in it... Nothing else? Since its the beginning, I only see Angela's personality, so far I can't tell.

Extra/Laughs/Bonuses: [2/10]

I give you 3 points for showing heaven, clouds, and how Angela landed in heaven. Thats all I read and I know, if it had a bit more chapters, I would have giving you more points... SORRYY <3

Overall : [43/50] 86%

BOO HOO you could have gotten higher if you updated more T.T

I GAVE you out 50 instead of 100 due to your lack of chapters. SORRYYUUUUUUUUUU

DON'T TAKE THIS HARSHLY, IM SORRY DONT PLAN TO ASSASINATE ME =P. You should update more itll increase subbers, views, and readers. And once you get more chapters I'll review again <3 ^^

PLEASE DO INCLUDE ME IN YOUR FORE WORD or every single chapter, hehe, A LINK TO THIS REVIEW CHAPTER AND MY NAME Rin (iLoveToRawr)

THANK YOUU <3 FOR UR SUPPORT ^^