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Unspoken words

 

Due to to story being lost i will change things a bit because i cant clearly remember the story line completly. Sorry for a very late update been very busy with school lately. i have tweeked the story a little along the way
 
 
minah's point of view
As i walk into class i walk over to nathalie and miranda since i already finished my project and we are suppposed to brainstorm a new one. 
So what are you going to do i ask miranda since she finished her previous project
well i don't know but i want to do something cultural 
like what i reply
dim sum
what is that i ask 
you have never heard of dim sum before 
nope never why is that a big deal i reply 
yes it is delicious 
hey nathalie have you ever tasted dim sum 
no but i've heard of it she replies
uggghhh miranda feels frustrated
(is it really that serious)
jaypark's point of view
i walk towards miranda who seems frustrated 
oh you're here she says relieved, have you ever tasted dim sum
of course i have its delicious, who hasn't 
she points at minah and nathalie
well you should eat some it is delicious 
miranda grabs minah towards the computer as she replies
come on ill show you
i walk along behind them 
she searches dim sum, so does this look familiar she looks at minah
no i have never seen that 
miranda is quickly mesmirized by the dim sum
have you ate dim sum before i ask minah 
no i havent, this is my first time hearing of it
i see nathalie and jinwoon approaching 
well we should all go eat some dimsum some time for those who haven't tried it yet 
i throw a glance at minah who doesnt notice
but we have to go early of course
how early nathalie replies
at 10 30 or 11 at the latest
thats not even early minah replies 
its early for lunch, if we get there later there wont be any left. 
oh she replies, the conversation quickly dissolves 
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rainbowloveyou #1
uwaaa! jinwoon!
maeanneda123
#2
I was reading your story and it's really good.
Maybe you should add more tags in the tag box such as "jaebeom" or something. Then, more people will see it. It'll really help!
Other than that, as I've said, your story is great. Good job. Update soon!