Chapter 18: AJQJNZKANSJWNSKQNSKWNSJWKPWOWUENS!!!!
OMGGGGGG!!!!! I AM SCREAMING! LIKE LITERALLY!!!!
How… what… WHY?!!!!
I NEEDED THIS… I FREAKIN NEEDED THIS!! This is the update I never knew I needed… and here it is, just gave me a BIG SHOT OF ADRENALINE!!

I wanna cryyyy… this is so freakin good, I wanna cry!

I COULD LITERALLY FEEL THAT I WAS THERE!
Ever scene is just PERFECT! When I say perfect, I mean it was sweat inducing-ly good!!! I almost couldn’t handle the suspense.

That dinner scene… omg! I was sweating my a** off.
I mean, Mayu’s mouth has no filter!
Her questions… I felt for Amu for real!

"How am I supposed to sit back and watch you nonchalantly bully the girl that I..." —> THIS LINE!! I mean really, Daiki! Just say it!!!! You might as well have since you told the whole country already!!!!!!! Gosh! These two!!! Please grant me permission to whack this weirdo!!
I’m just glad he finally cut ties with Mayu… she’s just a b*tch in this chapter. If I was Amu, I would’ve flipped the table on her!

But but but… #justiceforChinen!!! OMGGGGGG.. this kid needs an award… give him two trophies, please. He needs to be protected at all cost!
“Don't get me wrong, letting you go is painful but seeing you unhappy in our relationship hurts even more."… my AmuChii heart just shattered in to a million tiny pieces. T^T
I’ll officially adopt Chinen as my son!

And and and…. THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR GIVING ME A TASTE OF YAMARIO! You have no idea how much this just lifted my spirits up!!
"It was probably during the first few days when I was still living at her apartment. I hated having to rely on people and I wanted to do my own laundry. I didn't realize her clothes were still in the washing machine so I dumped mine in with hers. When I went to take the clothes out, she caught me holding her out of coincidence, and she was sooo furious." Ryosuke explained, shivering at the memory of Rio's outburst. "Seriously, I've never seen her that red before!" —> I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH THAT I TOOK A SCREENSHOT OF IT! Hahaha..
I just freakin miss my OTP! T^T

I sincerely want to thank you (and hug you) for such an AWESOME UPDATE!! you seriously just saved my mental health… for a minute there, I forgot all my worries.
I love you so much!!

PLEASE SPARE ME THE MISERY AND UPDATE!! T^T
The suspense could KILL ME…

P.s. I still can’t forgive you for the cliff hanger but my love for you still triumphs!

Chapter 17: I READ THIS AGAIN… from the beginning!!!!!! T^T
I miss the love triangles…… ahggg! I flailed like the first time.
I’m literally biting my nails on how Mayu/Daiki/Amu interaction will be like on the next chapter.
Rio needs to be there to protect Amu! Please!!!! Protect AMU!!!!

Chapter 17: 4th time reading this chapter alone!!!!!!!
Lalalalalalalalalala~ Just the idea of YamaRio in the same room makes me happy.
Still can’t get over when he saved her from Satoko!
My ship is bigger than the titanic!!! あああああああああ！

Chapter 17: I.CANNOT.WITH.THIS!!!! OMGGGGGGG!!
I read this as soon as I woke up and only managed to get some time to make my comments.
Do you know how hard it is to hold my reaction for this long?! I'm like a ticking time bomb waiting to explode!

THIS IS THE BEST! OMG!! Why do you keep topping your chapters?!
I AM FREAKIN IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!
First of all, you changed the cover back to our BIG 4! T^T THEY'RE SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!

This chapter made me flail BIG TIME!!! FROM BEGINNING TO END, MY HEART JUST KEPT POUNDING!

Directly in front of Rio, stood Ryosuke with his back towards her, his entire body shielding her from Satoko's harm. <--- I'm surprised you didn't hear my scream all the way from the UK to New York! I flopped like a fish on my bed while flailing! I was seriously grinding my teeth at Satoko. I was IN the moment. I really felt like I was Rio. *dreams*
When Yama broke up with her, I was cheering non stop! Do you know how hard it is to scream internally so I wouldn't wake my whole family up at 6am?!

"Ryosuke's eyesight must really be getting worse. He has to be blind to fall for someone like you." <-- OMG! I felt that through my bones! Rio probably look like a servant compared to her but HECK!!!! I felt insulted for Rio! Mouuuu!

Don't even get me started on the 'shirt' scene! OMG OMG OMG!
I could picture Yama randomly pulling his shirt off and giving it to Rio! I WOULD REACT THE SAME WAY - top it with nosebleed!
Damn it, Yama! We all know you're y, you don't have to flaunt it! Some of us have weak hearts!
I was hyperventilating at this!!!!!

Just when I thought my heart couldn't get any more worked up, THE ELEVETOR SCENE!!
He was about to confess to her! OMGGGGG!!! I wanted to bang my head on the wall. That was just a huge tease!!!
Rio is so dense... I just can't! (sometimes I forget that Rio's character is based on me and I'm actually as dense as her). lmao...

Wait wait wait… I have another one... YAMAYUTO!!!!! GOSH!!! Can this chapter get any better?!
Upon hearing Ryosuke's vague explanation, Yuto grabbed the latter's jacket, pulling him out of the elevator before finally shoving him against the wall. "I told you to stay away from her, yet you had the audacity to even lay your hands on my girl." <--- I held my breath at this! The way he calls Rio "my girl". SHOOKT! Rio, you lucky duck! What did Rio do to deserve 2 handsome guys fighting over her?!
I wanna switch... NOW!

But then again, DO NOT HURT YUTO!!!!! I should've listened to you when you said I should guard my YutoRio heart! WHAT THE HECK?!! I felt Yuto's pain!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You fixed my heart and broke it again! T^T I cannot wait how the YamaRioYuto love triangle will unfold! Release me from this torture!

--> I had to pause from my comment coz I'm struggling to stay composed!

Now let me move to AmuDai!!!! GAAAAAAAAHHH!
What the heck?! Amu should've been there when Dai-chan proclaimed his love on Amu to the whole country!
I still can't get over that. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

"I just don't understand why would he jeopardize his relationship for someone he no longer likes."
"Amu-chan, I don't think he was ever over you."

--> I love how the two best friends are oblivious of their own love stories but aware of each others! LMAO

aaaaaaand… WHAT IS MAYU PLANNING?! I don't trust that girl one bit!!!
a dinner with Daiki, Amu and Mayu… why do I feel so uneasy? I could feel the tension all the way from Japan.
I need to protect AmuDai at all cost!
THIS IS SUCH A BIG CLIFF HANGER!!! Give me moooooore!!

I can't believe you finished this so quickly! Just when I thought you couldn't be more amazing!
I just know I'll be re-reading this again tonight. THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH FOR YOUR AWESOME UPDATE!
Like a greedy bunny, I WANT MORE AND I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!! FOR REAL!!!
I LOVEEE YOU!

Chapter 16: Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!
I read this the 5th time now within a span of 2 days…
What’s does that tell you?! I’m freakin addicted!

I can’t wait for the next oneeeeee!!

Chapter 16: AMU-CHAAAAAAAN! THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER!!!
HAVING WOKEN UP TO THIS IS JUST MADE MY WHOLE YEAR! OMG!
I needed this... I really did! Remember when I told you that the last chapter was my favourite, I lied.
THIS IS! OMG OMG OMG!

I'm going to go chronologically so I won't miss any detail! I'm soooo excited. GAAAAAAH!

--> I paused for a bit to look for my favourite scenes but I ended up re-reading the whole chapter. I'm so hopeless when it comes to your writing!

Okay, now that I finished it... again...

First of all, Dai-chan jumping out of bed just by hearing Amu's name! That's hilarious! nyahahahaha..
Now I know how to get him out. lol..

and and and… the main highlight of this chapter is the YamaJima nearly pounding each other to the ground!
Gosh! I was lying down when I started the chapter but that scene made me sit up from my bed!
IT WAS SOOO INTENSE!! That worked on me like how Amu's name affected Daiki in the morning! My eyes are seriously like this the whole time --->> O_O

"... And sorry Yuto, but I don't give a damn if you don't believe me. It's not my job to convince you how much Rio really means to me." <--- THIS MADE ME SQUEEL LIKE A 13 year old kid! I just... >////////<
Are you trying to make my heart pop out of my chest?!! The weird thig is, I feel like this is something they would do in real life!
I can definitely feel the tension like I was physically there!
Is it bad that I liked that scene too much? It's because they're fighting over Rio! GAAAAAH! Please, can I just enter your fic??!! I promise I'll stay quiet.

Then Dai-chan stood up to Chinen too! I didn't know who to cheer for!!!!
I was holding both Daiki and Chinen uchiwas. My heart was pounding the whole chapter!

Also!!!!!!!! OMG!! That YamaRio scene where Rio dropped the tablet! hahahahaha..
You got Rio's clumsiness on point! She's probably too star-strucked at Yama that she forgot how to use her fingers. LOL
I LOVE IT SO FREAKIN MUCH WHEN HE TEASED RIO!!! I can totally imagine Yama mouthing the word "BAKA" to her.
I miss their banters!!!!!! mou, I demand moooooore.

I held my breath the longest time when he delivered his speech: "... especially the doctor who never refused to give up on me despite how difficult of a patient I was." <--- I seriously was like, "Errrm, are you supposed to say that on national television?" hahaha. I wonder what Yuto's and Rio's reactions were when Yama said that!!! Yuto's probably going berserk!

BUTTTTT! Just when I thought Yama's speech was bad, Daiki just announced his love for Amu to the WHOLE COUNTRY! Nyahahahaha
I was laughing so much. Yappari, AmuDai allllll the waaaaaay! Woooooop! <3 <3 <3 He's gonna get into so much trouble!
"... I loved her too." <--- please tell me Amu was there to hear that! PLEASE!!! For heaven's sake, just say that in front of Amu!

… AND WHAT THE HECK?! You cant just end the chapter like that! Where's Rio and Satoko??!!!
OMG! THIS IS JUST PURE TORTURE! I thought you're a sweet and innocent girl, Amu! But you just emotionally tortured me today!

I live for AriYama and DaiChii rivalry and this chapter just gave me so much life!!!!!
I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. Kami-sama, please give Amu more time to write!!! This is such a masterpiece.
Brb while I talk to some producers to finally make this into a movie!
I LOVE YOUUUUUUU!!

Chapter 15: Omg omg omg omg omg!!!!!!!!!!
HUWAAAAT?! WHY DID IT END??!! Why?????!!!
THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! every time you publish an update, it always turns out to be my favourite!
This chapter is my new fav!!!!!!!
I’m using so much !!!! again… can you sense how excited I am???
Mou, I was thinking of a best way to repay you for cheering me up from your last update but you gave me another surprise - and and AWESOME ONE! I’m freaking addicted to this fic!

THIS IS JUST TOO MUCH TO HANDLE! I’m loving how chaotic this is. Hahahaha.
Can I just say, I’m in love with AmuRio friendship.
I feel like they could read each other’s minds with just one look.

Idk how I can collect my thoughts. First of all, when Yuto called Rio “my love” OQJSHDEIWHSWIIWSIWNSSHJS!!
WHAT THE HECK?! Are you trying to give me a ?
I read it 4 times! "Rather than winning the competitions, I'd rather win your heart." <— THIS IS CHEESIER THAN MY PEPPERONI PIZZA AND I LOVE IT!

And the AmuChii scene! Can I just marry them already? I’ll register as a Priest just to see them on the altar! They’re just so cute. It’s not everyday I read about Amu initiating a hug. I WANT MORE!

I can totally sense the tension around the 4 guys. My mind just kept imagining Yabu, Yuya, Hika and Kei minding their own business to avoid all the chaos from the couples. I laughed so hard when Kei said “drama-free vacay” 😂😂
I bet the older ones are just sick and tired of the love triangle already. Haha. They just can’t catch a break.

Wait, I’m not done yet! AriYama friendship! Nyahahahaha.
I just can’t with Daiki! Lmao.. he’s so painfully funny!
You got their friendship SPOT ON! I can totally see them acting like that in real life.
"What page? Was there something we needed to read?" <— he cracks me up so much! I bet Yama facepalmed himself when he said that. Looooool.

There’s more!! "I'm going to set this whole place on fire if I get put with Yuto." <— I can feel Yama’s wrath on Yuto! Hahaha.. I shouldn’t be laughing but I’m enjoying this rivalry! I wonder what will happen if he actually ended up with Yuto while Daichan ends up with Chii in the same room??? It’ll be a bloodbath!

Saying that, I really don’t know who to root for in this fic! At one point, I thought AriYama would just drop everything to confess to AmuRio. These two really does everything their way.
I’m anxious to know what Nishida, Mayu and Satoko are planning. I kinda wanted AmuDai and YamaRio to finally admit their feelings but I don’t want NakaChii heart broken again! I’m so torn! Give my heart a break!!!!

One last thing….. that soy sauce on tea scene…. I actually did something similar before (but instead of Soy sauce, it was salt) Haha. I tend to do that when I’m distracted! How can you know me so well?

Again, I apologise for the messy comment! This is me when I’m excited!
I JUST LOVE THE CHAOS! And of course, I love you so much for writing! I know how busy you are and this just made it extra special! IM WILLING TO PAY TO SEE THIS IN THE CINEMA! You’re such an amazing writer!!! I make me just zone out and forget everything while reading your stories. I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE… like REALLY!

Chapter 14: OMG, AMU!!! THIS IS SUCH A SURPRISE! I wasn't expecting you to update but *BOOM* my mind was blown!
Mouuuuuu~ like any of your updates, I didn't want it to end! I'm itching to know what will happen next,
And Okinawa!!! WOOOOOOHOOO! I always wanted to go there. I feel like I'm really going with this fic.
But I'm conflicted because Yama and Yuto will be there! AHHHHHHHH! You're seriously messing with my mind!

I CANNOT WITH THE ENDING! OMGGGGGG! So much suspense...
I mean, Nishida! WHAT THE HECK?! THIS GUY IS JUST PURE EVIL! What is he planning to do?!
He's like a game master to a very nasty horror movie!!!

and and and… that YamaRio scene! I can feel the suspense right beneath me!!
When Yama asked Rio is she's happy with Yuto… THAT BROKE ME! I literally felt my heart strings break! T^T
MY BABIES!!! AAAAND, I know it's only short but I freakin miss their banters.

"Forget that. Let's see if you could backward on a tightrope." <-- HAHAHAHA.. In my head, I was like "yeah, that's definitely more impressive than performing surgery".

speaking of banters... I wanna cry from AriYama's friendship! I miss them both. I feel like I've been focusing on Chinen and Yuto since your last update so now, my heart yearns for Yama and Dai-chan. It feels like a very long time since I read AmuDai and YamaRio (although I keep writing about them only recently). hahaha..

Wait, guess which line nearly killed me...
"Don't bother taking another step towards her." Yuto muttered in a low voice as he quickly stepped in between the latter and the door. "She's my girlfriend, not yours." <--- OH MY GAAAAAAHD! I never heard this line coming from Yuto before. It's usually Yama telling him to back off, but the tables have turned! I squealed like a 14 year-old teenager at this. >//////< I kept re-reading the same line over and over!

and I love how unlucky Dai-chan is here. hahahaha… out of all days, he picks the one where he bumps into Amu! lol. I think he really attracts trouble! but I think he attracts "Amu" more. :P I can totally imagine their faces and the awkward silence in the car. Yama's probably rolling his eyes every 2 minutes. He really needs Rio to start the teasing! Oh, how I miss YamaRioAmuDai friendship!

What will happen on the next chapter?? I really don't know!
The couples will be together on a trip! I can already imagine CHAOS!
Satoko and Mayu being there makes my stomach turn like a washing machine... and just thinking about it, I think they are working with Nishida!!! I CAN'T CONTAIN MY EXCITEMENT ANY LONGER! I kept making theories in my head but I have no idea who will end up with whom!

I love it when Yama is jealous!!!! but I feel like Rio will be equally jealous knowing Satoko will be there!

I LOOOOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS! This definitely took my mind off work and interviews!
I should be the one cheering you up but instead, you surprised me with this! I swear to make it up to you soon.
Imma bombard you with love on Instagram.
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!

p.s. again, I'm sorry for the messy comments!

Chapter 13: OMG!!! THIS MADE ME SOOOOOOOO FREAKIN HAPPY! I CAN'T!
I'm tearing up with tears of happiness! I just...….. GAAAAAAAH!
You have no idea how much I miss your writing! THIS IS SO GOOD, I WANT TO PUBLISH IT AS A BOOK! MORE PEOPLE NEED TO KNOW HOW AWESOME YOU ARE!! At the beginning of the chapter, you set it out so perfectly!
I really felt that I was there experiencing the whole thing. Are you sure you're not a professional writer?!

Wait, I need to collect my thoughts coz soooo many things made my heart flutter!
First of all... That Yuto Rio phone call! AHHH!! The fact that YutoRio are officially together is still not fully registered in my mind! I can only imagine Yuto texting me and I'm spazzing so hard!

and and and… AmuChii! I want to cry! GAHD! I feel so sorry for Chii…

"Exactly. It's in ten minutes." The boy replied, placing his cup next to hers. "It only takes me four minutes to get there and three minutes to change. My hair and makeup are already done so that leaves me an additional three minutes to spend with you." He said as he tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear. "And I've been missing you all day." <----- HE'S SO PRECIOUS!!!! T^T *shoves Daiki away* I want our prince to be happy for once!



Chinen leaned in and gently placed a kiss on her cheek. Shortly after pulling away, he couldn't stop his gaze from falling onto her lips. Slowly, he leaned in once more, letting the distance close between them but before their lips could meet, Amu pulled away at the last second. <--- WHY, AMU? WHY???!!! Oh, I forgot about Dai-chan...

THIS STORY IS REALLY SOMETHING!!! OMG!!
I seriously don't know who to ship! At the moment, I'm cheering for AmuChii.
But then... I freakin miss AmuDai!
Daiki knew exactly where his childhood friend had been spending his time. In fact- it used to be Daiki's favorite place as well...


... It was next to Amu's side. <--- KYAAAAAAAAH! OF COURSE! AMUDAI WILL NOT BACK DOWN!

aaaaand this line:
"She's already asleep." He said to him that evening. "Don't bother calling my girlfriend anymore." <-- Oh my GAHD! Chinen for PRESIDENT!!


I seriously need to stop copying and pasting my favourite bits because I'll end up copying and pasting the WHOLE THING!

Wait, I'm not done… That awkward YamaRio phone call! hahaha..
I can totally imagine their faces. Why can't they just realise their feelings for each other?! I wanna bang their heads together!
I getting so anxious on Yama's follow up visit! OMG!! I really feel like Rio anxiously waiting for that appointment.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! CAN YOU PLEASE END MY MISERY AND UPDATE?!

Also, there are so many epic phone calls in this update! I love the usual AriYama banters! haha.. I live for their funny come backs! lol

I can't believe how much your update influences my mood and EVERYTHING!
I'm so happy I didn't have to wait until July to read this. I feel like a kid on Christmas morning after reading this! THANK YOU SO MUCH and I LOVE YOU!
I cannot contain my excitement for the next chapter!!! T^T

Chapter 12: WHAT WHAT WHAT?!! EHHHH?!!
I'M SOOOOOOO EXCITED FOR THIS!! I feel so giddy!
You have no idea how invested I am with this story!!
Can it be July now??! T^T

That character relationship chart, idk why I saveda screenshot on my phone. Hahaha~
That's like the typical relationship charts on our stories.

Can't wait for the tension, drama and suspense from this! And and and... They'll be in the beach??
It's so perfect! Why do I have a feeling Rio's eyes will wander for Yuto and Yama's abs? Haha..

July, please come sooner!!!!!!