Remains Of Forgotten Memories

La Danse Macabre || Halloween Short Stories | WayV
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2 REMAINS OF FORGOTTEN MEMORIES  

 

Sera had always had the weirdest hobby and every single month, it changed. She first had this obsession of collecting feathers of birds and kept it in a book then it changed to collecting seashells which may seem normal but she would later then turn it into dust by crushing them and keeping them in some small glass bottles. 

 

Yes, Kim Sera has a lot of obsession.

But now her new obsession may get her killed.

What is it you may ask?

 

Well it's exploring haunted houses and making documentaries out of it which she will then upload on her YouTube channel. She didn't care much about the views, she just wanted to create those contents for herself and whoever may enjoy it by coming across it. 

 

Right now she was searching for some haunted house that might be near to her and she decided to explore one on the night of Halloween itself. To her surprise, she had found one which was literally next to hers. That house was always fully furnished and looked really pretty, no one would have guessed it would be a haunted one. In addition, she used to play with a little boy who lived there in her childhood, now all that she remembers was that he had moved away with his parents.

 

That night, she had packed a bag. She took two light torches and her camera in her hand as well as some batteries for the torches and camera. As well as a bottle of water, it's important to stay hydrated. 

 

She made her way out of her house and she saw that the streets were filled with children in costumes laughing and eating the sweets that they had received while others had their parents in costumes and were accompanying them. Halloween was never really her favourite holiday but it always brought some kind of warmth to her.

 

 

She made her way to the house and found it strange that the gate was opened, there was no lock on it. She frowned a bit because last time she had checked, she remembered that it was locked. She didn't question anything more as she just opened the door and closed it after her. 

 

The garden was nowhere sinister or anything, it looked so pretty and the roses were in full bloom. She came closer and caressed the petals gently but then she froze and touched the petals once again. That was weird, it couldn't be. She leaned closer and smelled the roses and she was shocked.

 

It was fake roses. 

 

That’s why no one suspected that house to be haunted because the roses always looked like someone was taking care of them but instead they were all fake. She then made her way inside the house and now everything was clear, from the outside it was a very beautiful house but from the inside it was broken, as if a hurricane had just passed by. 

 

She looked nostalgically at the old abandoned house that was standing there gloomily, she used to always go inside to play with that childhood

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Lost_Pharaoh
I do not know about you guys but I feel like making another chapter sequel for the YangYang part of his story. What do you guys think?

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DongBang5hinKi
#1
Chapter 3: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1462589/3'>Remains Of Forgotten Memo...</a></span>
Chap 2: Gurl. YOUR. WORDING. SKILLS. ARE. BEYOND. AMAZING! Seriously, how are you so underrated??? Like HOW?!

You know what you are great at? Describing the scenery to the smallest detail and making it for your readers a great imagination! Well done! Hats off to that, bruh. I'm mindblown.

The ending again! Soooo good! It makes me wonder if Sera turns into a porcelain doll being too?? I will never know, but you are leaving it to our imagination and that's simply great!

I've not come across many authors with this way of writing and I gotta admit, you might be my favorite in depicting scenery!

Well done! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
DongBang5hinKi
#2
Chapter 1: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1462589/1'>The Bloody Portrait</a></span>
Chap 1: I wanna start off with praising you. Seriously, what beautiful way of writing you have! The chosen words are perfect for describing the atmospheres from the autumn walk to the bedroom! Well done! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 Your skills are top!

But: I was surprised to see the first German line in this, it somewhat has a weird meaning or a wrong way of wording... Is it a German quote or translated from English to German? The second German line makes more sense in the wording 👌🏼

There are only few typos, any of major impact tho. So we don't care about typos here ;)

YOU sent shivers down my spine with that man moving closer in the portrait and then vanishing, like brrrrr (>_<) I love art and I've studied art and the meaning behind portraits and all, so imagining this part was amazing!

Well done with the brief dialogue at the end, not revealing too much, yet letting us know who or what he is! Great ending too! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Seriously, with that skill of wording and writing you should go on!!
ariesstarr #3
Just a question: do I need to start from the first chapter and proceed to the other chapters or are they stand alones?
ariesstarr #4
I have had an early October this year due to current events and I will dive right in on this one. I don’t see much NCT/WayV writers on here, so I’m glad to have this posted on my wall. The boys look incredibly creepy and the layout is fitting.
buriedphoenix
#5
Also, i think I also thought it the first time I saw the title of the story, but did you ever listen to Saint-Saëns' Danse Macabre and the tonal poetry?
buriedphoenix
#6
Chapter 1: Not gonna lie, when I started reading I was unfortunately reminded of Damien Hirst and I don't like that gut as an artist :D and the German sentence sounded bit clunky to me, even if I read old stuff 🙈 but I didn't finish at all, I just wanted to see if it would be interesting to read, but I need coffee first and so some corrections :D
Ka_lon
#7
Chapter 8: I don’t even know where I should start this was so good. First this a masterpiece, I’ve never read a Halloween story that felt like a horror movie. I was tempted to look behind me while reading Yangyang’s story. I especially loved all the names you used, and I’m sure I have Akai written down on my name list. Overall this was amazing, and so creative defiantly one of my favorite Halloween stories.
kai_appreciator
#8
Chapter 8: Damn that's hotttt! I finally finished the series, and honestly I'm quite sad, since it's rare to find good stories like that! Thank you for the stories <3
kai_appreciator
#9
Chapter 7: Hey Ireally like this theme and idea of him being a serial killer, but like just serial killer, the one who's like Robin Hood but more sinister. Ten fits it nicely and honestly I want a continuation of that, keep it up <3