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Sparta and His Valkyries [Will be rewritten!]
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Hey Guys. I know that you guys have been waiting for an update for this story, but after reading this story and how it was going, I found myself writing and rewriting the next chapters so many time and being unsatisfied with all of them. Instead, I started writing one-shots and what if chapters instead of the story chapters, which didn't make sense. 

So I've decided to write new, far better and more coherent story. 

This was my first Asianfanfic story. When I first started to write this story, I started with an already complicated story plot with other characters. But since I'm already doing that in my other independent story, I feel more comfortable writing a new story. 

The coupling will be pretty much the same in my version 2. KJKXHYS and Spartace will definitely be there. 

Thanks for reading this story up until now, and sorry about this news. But don't feel too disappointed, as a version 2 of this story will start next monday (11/30) !

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losaturn #1
Chapter 34: Bummer, I guess there's no longer a reason for me to follow the story anymore. There are already plenty of "Spartace" stories out there but only one other story with KJKxSNE.
Bobthe
#2
Chapter 34: So, bout naeun???? Haaaa..... Little bit sad when she gone.... Huhu
danburo #3
Chapter 13: I think there will be conclusion already, it's about spartace or not, seems i just wait it complete and see the end result before read it.
H_Haru_H #4
Chapter 13: ah, I love all 3 women so much and I like all 3 ships, but ig my endgame pairing for this story is jongkookxyeseul.

for me, naeun and jongkook seem to be in different stages in life. jongkook's looking for a wife and mother to his kids, and i'm not sure if naeun wants that yet (which jihyo and yeseul have an advantage over her). even if she is the cupid and has the best compatibility compared to yeseul and jihyo, if 2 people don't want the same things, then compatibility gets thrown out the window. it also seems like she sees him as her "hero" and not as much as a person (well, unless you change that lol). however i really like how the apink members are gonna help her until jongkook tells them to stop and as long as it doesn't jeopardize the other members - it's more realistic than them helping naeun until the end and at the cost of everything.

jihyo, on the other hand, waited too long. personally, i'm not a fan of the whole "realizing I love you bc you're in a relationship that's good for you and now i want you to be mine" trope so ig this is why i'm not rooting for her as much as yeseul. she seems to be the "comfortable option" imo - aka the one person you've known for so long that everyone (including your family) thinks and expects you would date. jihyo deserves to be more than the comfortable option. she also seems to look at him as some kind of "hero" like naeun, except she knows the person beneath. she does have the advantage, however, of knowing and being friends with jongkook the longest.

yeseul is a breath of fresh air to jongkook's life. she teaches him to enjoy life more and to be freer. she's also looking for the same things as jongkook: a spouse and kids, so they're on the same page. she does seem kind of shrew-ish lately and the throwing pills thing I'm not a fan of, so i hope she confides in jongkook more so that they can communicate properly. she also has the advantage of being jongkook's girlfriend, as it would be hard to sway jongkook since he's a loyal man.

i'm hoping we can see jongkook's true feelings for the 3 girls! does he actually still have feelings for jihyo, as many claim, or did he love her once, but has moved on completely? is he truly falling head over heels for yeseul? and what about naeun, does she actually stand a chance to be seen as a woman in his eyes?

i'm looking forward for the next chapter of this story!
Bobthe
#5
Chapter 13: Wow.... Okay... The poll say otherwise..... It support to be jongkookxyeseul but then be kookeun + spartace.... Interesting!..... I don't know that many people interested with kookeun.. I thought only me love to make unusual pair... Nice story btw...... Spartace really real deal for this time.... Hwaiting and take care of your healthy ^¬^!
Mongmongjkjk #6
I miss you
Hawaali #7
Women can be scary thowing away pills just to keep your man makes me think she is not confident with herself. Hopefully its not what im thinking. As much i want Spartace here i want Jihyo to be happy and find her own happiness if kjk isn't.