Prologue - Ssh... a boy...

Siren Song

“Would you like to come out and see the sky, Matthew?” Father asked.

 

I looked up from the map of the world, my mind infested with it. Comprehending how big the world was and how small I was on my father's huge ship.

 

“Yes!” I said. He held my hand and left the deck. It was a dark, dark night. Father chuckled.

 

“Too bad, son. The sky is dark tonight. Too many clouds. Wanted to show you the stars.”

 

I looked up, tried to see the small openings between the clouds.

 

“I could see it, father! Over there!” I pointed.

 

“Yes, but I wanted to show you more. Usually, when the sky is clear... you can see it all. Stars, like diamonds spread before your very eyes. Down to the horizon. No end to it.”

 

I could only imagine what he meant. But I believed it must be the best sight, to make him look up dreamily as such. A crew called up for him and he had to get back.

 

“Matthew, let’s get back inside.”

 

But I was mesmerized. I didn’t follow him right away.

 

 

 

 

Ssh... a boy...

 

 

A voice whispered. It made me jump. I quickly looked around me. A ship crew asleep on the heaps of rope. And no one else. I would’ve shrugged it if I didn’t hear the song.

 

 

A beautiful, mesmerizing voice. Humming a song I’ve never heard before. It was beautiful. I walked up to the front of the ship. I wanted to check the waters. My small steps were shaky, still imbalanced against the sea. But I reached it and I could see the water. Dark.. endless. It gave me the shivers behind my neck. But the song... it’s beautiful. I want to hear more.

 

 

 

The dark sea... suddenly I could see the moon... slowly clearer on the water. The clouds must’ve moved from its way. It’s beautiful, glowing bright and round. I smiled. A song and the beautiful moon.

 

 

 

The sea was such a wonder.

 

 

 

“Matthew!” My father yelled. I quickly turned back, found him walking towards me in haste.

 

“Boy, I told you to come inside!” He held my arm. I quickly apologized, told him I wanted to see more of the stars. He sighed and carried me back to the deck.

 

 

“One day, son. One day you’ll explore the sea.” My father smiled at me before I sleep on his bed. The sea rocking me to my dreams, I dreamt of.... the water. Swimming in it. Like I could breathe in it.

 

 

 

 

Rosie asked me many things about the sea. I tried to think of everything... but everything was... reduced to one thing.

 

 

 

 

“The moon was very beautiful, Rosie!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Fin-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Alice’s note :

 

For S and F, my dearest <3

A very very experimentation fic. Never tried the genre, nor the idea. Was very fun T-T

A unique pairing (?) like I said lmao might be hard to imagine but......... is cute once you do *sparkly eyes*

I might be making another one (HEHE) with Matt my muscle hot body boy and Yoon my smol uwu pretty bubu bcs I can and bcs Ms. S and Ms. F will support me (? Will u guys ?) hehe

BUT HEY I’LL UPDATE A MINYOON FIRST AFTER THIS :D

Also, I will tweet the illustrations that inspired me for this whole fic, especially Mama Siren :D check it out if you’re interested <3

@alicewasasleep

 

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rashie
#1
Chapter 9: I have read all your works here and reread most of them (EXCEPT LOVELESS BECAUSE I CANT OKAY) except this one. When I first saw the casts and the tags, I was like ????????? So I skipped it.... but tonight I was like "cmon it's Alice and her words, why leave this one??" And YYOOWWWWW!!! THIS IS AAAAAA. I FOUND MYSELF HOLDING MY BREATHE A FEW TIMES LIKEㅡ ALSO THE CAST IS PERFECT. THIS IS SO HAUNTINGLY BEAUTIFUL. I CANT SAY I LOVE IT BCS NOOOOO I AM STILL SCAARREDD BUT STILL THIS IS AMAZING. YOU'RE AMAZING. OKAY. NOW HOW DO I SLEEP WITHOUT THINKING ABT SEUNGYOON AS THAT SIREN.
Hixone01 #2
Chapter 9: Ohhhhh~~~ i like it so much!!?its so random, but its fun? will patiently waiting for another story for this pair??
Yellow-Dandelion
#3
Chapter 9: It was awesome as always Alice. :)
Yellow-Dandelion
#4
Chapter 8: Alice you should write a novel. TT
Yellow-Dandelion
#5
Chapter 7: Oh my god So Matthew just killed himself, or I would say the thing make he killed himself.
LuckyLikesLemons
#6
Chapter 9: WOW.



What a beautifully disastrous ending!



UGH.



So Rose met her tragic demise, just as I expected. Honestly Rose, floating out into the open ocean in an oar-less boat with nothing but some food and a practically useless gun? What were you thinking? (I get it though, she wasn't thinking) What did she hope to do? Kill the monster that had captured her brother with a rusty bullet?



I really liked the interaction with the Mother Siren - scary and horrifying and hauntingly beautiful, her hair like twisted ropes, her presence and her size - that was cool. Even better - the way you wove in her story through little verses throughout the chapter. It almost felt like a ballad, a lovely myth. I appreciate the way she slaughtered the pirate with broken shards of chandelier glass.



I wish I knew the identity of the Mother Siren, but I guess it makes it better that I don't. I thought that she might take pity on Rose and her appalling naivete , but no. Glad she got to see her brother one last time though.



DAMN, I didn't think Matthew would rip her head off. That was completely unexpected. . I didn't really like Rose but damn, she didn't deserve that kind of end. Wouldn't drowning be enough?



Then again, a small dark part of me really loved it. I'm a (closet) fan of Lovecraftian horror and splatter-gore, so that unexpected ending really served up some feels. I love how the other sirens just swam up and feasted on her entrails. I also think its poetic in a way - the ocean will always be blemished by her blood, Matthew will always have a residue of his sister with him, even though it looks like he's completely forgotten about her existence.



I'm lowkey dying to know if Matthew kissed Seungyoon afterwards, if he swam up to the boy he threw away everything for, if he stained his spiked teeth with his sister's blood under the silver light of 3 moons. This hypothetical scene is haunting me and I really wish you could do something about it. Maybe a bonus chapter or something?



Interesting to know about Barth the Blind Man. Even more interesting if he actually carved his eyes out after seeing Seungyoon. That's hardcore.



I loved how you ended with a prologue. Oof. Man, Matthew's early days really hurt. But I guess he's always been connected to the sea, even when he was young. He even heard the motifs of Seungyoon's song on his father's ship. I'd like to think he was destined to meet Seungyoon and fall for him. I really do. And it's so sweet, the way he tells Rose 'The moon was so beautiful Rosie!'. Ugh, my heart. Thinking about Matthew, his devotion to Seungyoon and the way he loves him, all of him (including his maniacal siren form) makes me hope that they're okay down under the waves.



I'd really like to see another Matthew and Seungyoon piece, maybe not so tragic? It'd be interesting to see their dynamics in say, a real life AU. Something to think about!



Definitely looking forward to some Minyoon in the future. Keep in touch and keep me in the loop! Hope you enjoy this horribly out-of-control review (upvote if you like!!!) and buckets of love <3<3<3<3
Siz123456 #7
Chapter 7: I need visual display of this ?
LuckyLikesLemons
#8
Chapter 7: Oooof, that was painful. What a ride!

I like how all the loose ends tied up here, and I can finally figure out where this might go. I honestly feel terrible for Rose (but a little vindictive part of me kinda feels like she deserves it after all the unintentional she pulled Matthew through) and I feel even worse for Matthew, who's so hopelessly in love with Seungyoon, I don't even know what to think anymore.

Seungyoon - wow. What a piece of work. I'm completely enthralled by the bipolarity of his character - does he truly care for Matthew (personally, I don't think so, I feel like he's more of a means to an end) or is he a temporary plaything? I love the description too - the long white hair, the white eyes, the claws, the teeth - very thrilling. (Though the hair part did creep me out a bit - especially in the bathtub. I tried imagining Matthew cradling Yoon in a whirlpool of white hair, and yeah....mixed feelings. But I guess the horror theme worked!)

I'm not so fond of Rose at the moment, though that's to be expected. I'm glad she's realizing her mistakes. Hoping for the best for Matthew (he's obsessed and a little manic about Yoonie, then again I don't blame him), I guess he's been captured now.

I'm also curious about that old blind man (?) in the last chapter (?) who smelled Yoonie's scent on Rose. Who is he??? Does Yoon have history with other people too? I'm dying to find out.

I also liked the fantastical imagery you pulled off in Matthew's nightmares/delusions/hallucinations - especially when the sun blows out and the moon splits into 3. That was cool, the way you explained how everything supposedly 'good' in Matthew's fragile existence extinguished after Yoon disappears.

And Matthew loves him, despite EVERYTHING. Such devotion, man. I'm impressed. Though I kinda get why he feels like he owes Yoon his happiness. He had no one to help him through his grief and depression, except Yoon. So I hope something works out for them (but seeing Yoon's character so far, I'm a bit skeptic).

I guess Rose is going to start on her mythical adventure soon - I'm not that hopeful about her fate either. What does she have - like, one bullet? And some food. No knowledge (except the stuff she's got from fairytales) and 100% naivete. Yay. Can't wait to see how this plays out.

Me? I'm looking forward to a mythical tragedy with a good dose of horror. (I'd like is some other characters turn up too, but that's up to you!)

Great progress, intrigued to see where this is going. Good work girlfriend! (Hope you like this rambling review!!!!) <3<3<3
Sunny_Yoon #9
Chapter 6: Oit!
seungyoonation #10
Chapter 6: gosh what is going on.. my mind is a mess, can i kiss "him" too to feel better?