A/N

telescope: seeing the edge of a galaxy through an upside-down lens
Please log in to read the full chapter

 

Author's Note

 

hello (I made an A/N ‘cause why not ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ).

 

Tiny heads up: this probably contains a few spoilers for those of you who’ve not read the story yet!

 

when it comes to this specific story, I had tried to give myself as much freedom as possible, which is why you can definitely see some similarities between this story and my other ones. I like similar themes, and I like exploring them in Alternative Universes, and I guess that’s why most of my stories center around the same ideas. I’d also taken the liberty of reusing my old ideas for this story as well. Freedom is also why the narrative ended up being so, how do I put it? Broken into pieces? It was honestly just for my own sake, so that I wouldn’t get bored or dismayed.

 

It’s funny how some things begin: I tried to give myself as much freedom as possible in this story, but I still ended up setting a couple of rules for myself, or I fell into this pattern — this ‘style’. And from that the storyline got clearer as I wrote it. I was allowed the freedom to jump back and forth between the narrative (which made it easier for me to keep track of things).

 

The narrative is basically like this: anything written in third-person POV is written in the present, so it’s happening now, and that’s the main storyline that we’re following. But! Then we have Moonbyul and Yongsun’s thoughts popping up out of nowhere, and the idea behind that is that they’re describing what’s happening/happened in the future.

 

While writing the third and last part, I was worried how I was going to make it all come together, or how much further should/could I drag the story? That’s why some parts are repetitive in function, it was a deliberate choice, as I tried to weave things together. And also, I hoped that the overlapping of thoughts + storyline would add context to Moonbyul and Yongsun’s thoughts. And I’m not surprised if any of you choose to read it again, because OH BOI am I going to!

 

This story is primarily cyberpunk (at least I’ve tried to make it cyberpunk). It’s extremely difficult to write a cyberpunk AU when you don’t have the right terminology for all the technical stuff (I’m obviously not a tech-savvy (like Wheein in the fic, haha, absolutely love her)). But! I absolutely adore the concept of cyberpunk (the punk attitude + cutting edge technology!). I like the dystopia-parts of it, and I really enjoy writing stories right before a major event, like in this one: the uprising (I also like writing what happens afterwards, so there might be a follow-up to this story, but not anytime soon, unfortunately). Also, I did do a little bit of research and I’ll put a link to the page that I used to delve deeper into cyberpunk.

 

The idea for creating a physically divided city came after seeing a picture of the city of He

Please log in to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
Despereauxx
I couldn't help myself! Here's an Author's Note! haha, haven't written an A/N in a while! Thanks again guys! <3

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Jscl38 #1
Chapter 4: This was an incredible fic.
AgentKuga
#2
Chapter 4: you broke me, I hope you're happy.
gayflippers
#3
Chapter 4: I just finished this and the other one where MB and YS died. My heart feels so heavy. It's just so perfect and beautiful to the point it affected me so much. God.
NobodyAnywhere #4
Chapter 4: I read this whole fic in one sitting and wow, what a ride that was. I literally have like tears on my face while I'm writing this.

Thank you so much for this well-written tear-jerking story...
denfanyi #5
Chapter 4: Dear author, tbh I didn't know this was angst until I was in too deep... You made me shed tears realizing how byul lost her memories and what the dialogues were about. Still I pushed through and finished this tho. My heart still breaks thinking how Yong is the only one who remembers, but then a glimmer of hope lies with how byul still have that one memory of left. ?

Thank you for writing this and sharing this with us. Not gonna lie, your take in story telling is uncommon, but not in a bad way. It takes getting used to but boy oh boy, it hits you right in the feels! ?

And, it's a breath of fresh air. Really ?

Til next time. ♥
rosewoodred
#6
Chapter 4: You’re honestly the greatest. Thank you so much for this story ! I don’t know how you manage to come up with these stories, or how you manage to write them so beautifully and so extremely raw... man, hit me right in the feels... <3
gay4pineapples
#7
Chapter 4: oh man... i’m torn.
beautiful job once again, des, you’re killing the game with these stories!! and i’m really just in love with these concepts, and spiffy wheein and hwasa are just the best ;))
yong... could totally pull off an angel wings tattoo. or like the goddess isis under her s?? yeah, yong could totally pull off THAT
i think everything here is so cool, and byul’s family... lmfao that’s TOUGH
thank you for this story, as bittersweet as it is! it’s still really good, and i enjoyed it very much. cannot wait to see maybe more works in the future from you, and thanks again!! :))
gay4pineapples
#8
Chapter 2: this is interesting?? i’m scared n i want them to be happy but gosh this is so good lol
Lotusious #9
Chapter 4: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1428488/4'>A/N</a></span>
i love the "atmosphere" you create in your stories !
i really enjoyed reading ''you think " and " the theory of life" so i was really looking forward to this story and yet again i was not disappointed ! i enjoyed reading it a lot, thank you !
I can't wait to read more from you.
Moon_22
#10
Chapter 4: Wow! Just WOW! what a bittersweet story autornim