What a Mess

Unrequited Love Complication
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"I'm Yamada Ryosuke" The brown haired boy bowed to the class. 

 

"He's super good looking..." The girls in the class whispered to each other, pulling out their phones to sneak pictures of him.  

 

Amu fijited in her seat while attempting to cover most of her face with her fringe. She turned her head to her right to catch a glimpse of Rio's opinion on her so called "fiancé". 

 

To Amu's shock, she found Rio with her jaw hanged open. She then glanced back at Amu and mouthed "HE'S HOT" to her. 

 

Rio wasn't wrong to think this way, even Amu had to admit that he was actually pretty good looking.

 

Maybe in a different life where Daiki wasn't in her life, she would've accepted marriage.

 

Just not in this life. 

 

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Amu thought this day would never end. On the other hand, this has been the most exciting day for Rio. 

 

-A little before-

 

"Yamada Ryosuke, your seat will be next to Morimoto Shintaro. Morimoto, please raise your hand." The teacher said.

 

A boy with black hair obediently followed his request and Ryosuke took the seat next to him. 

 

If there was a God, He was surely on the girl's side of this game. Shintaro sat in front of Amu and Ryosuke sat right in front of Rio. 

 

"Now, to get this class started, I will be handing out the trip forms. Please sign and fill everything out before returning it to me. You have five minutes to complete this." The teacher instructed before he began to hand out the forums. 

 

Once the forums were in Ryosuke's grasp, he took one and passed the rest back to Rio, accidentally touching her fingers.

 

Immediately, his eyes shifted from his fingers to her glistening eyes. Suddenly, Rio's heart started beating rapidly while Amu took a sneak peek at the two. "Please let this plan work" Amu begged silently "... Please let it work.... Please let it work.. Pleas-"

 

"Ahh- you're Kitagawa Amu?" 

 

Amu opened her eyes after her short prayer and found him staring straight into Rio's eyes. 

 

"Yes.." Rio nodded quietly before taking a sheet of paper and passing the other one back to the classmate behind her. 

 

"Don't worry, I didn't stalk you or anything." he replied, pointing at the necklace which Amu lent her not too long ago. "Your necklace.. It says Amu."

 

To be exact, they switched everything that poses a threat to their identities.. From notebooks, to planners, to pencil cases, to jewelry, everything was exchanged. The only thing that can possibly ruin their plan is if the teacher calls out their names which barely happens in this class. 

 

Amu and Rio didn't know much of the students in their class either. They were always isolated since they were in their own 'group' (aka F.R.A.R.K.Y) This gave them another trump card. 

 

"I see." Rio smiled. "And do you happen to be Yamada Ryosuke as in.. My fiancé?" She quietly asked.

 

The latter smiled back. "Nice to finally meet you." 

 

---end of rewind---

 

The tension went on for the rest of the day. Whenever, they were required to write their names on papers, they would switch names. Rio would put "Amu" on the top of her paper and Amu would put "Rio".

 

In other words, this was cheating in a strange way.. Even when the teacher gave out everyone's own personalized tests, Rio had to complete Amu's and Amu had to complete Rio's.

 

Although Rio spent hours studying for the exam, Amu had forgotten to because of her exhausting dillema from last night. As a result, she ended up passing Rio's test by 5 points.. 

 

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hazel2883
#1
Chapter 8: AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!! THE ENDING IS JUST PERFECT. OMG!
I'M SO GLAD THAT THEIR PLAN WORKED!
AND THE ENDING IN THE ONSEN POOL!! AND THE COUPLE ARE GONNA SHARE A ROOM?!!!!
I ALMOST CHOKED ON THAT PART...

I JUST WOKE UP AND MY EYES JUST WENT O_O

GAAAAAHHH!!!!!! I CAN'T CONTAIN MYSELF!
I LOVE YOU IMOUTO...
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS MASTERPIECE, EVEN THOUGH YOU'RE BUSY...
*HUGS* I'LL TRY MY BEST ON MINE.

I'll definitely miss this!
pockypenguinmonster
#2
Chapter 7: fingercrosses i hope the plan will really work out.

i mean, that plan is perfect!!! flawless!!! but then :( Mr. Kitagawa, hes really scary. Though i understand why he would not be approving Daiki since :| but still.....

THOUGH RIO FOUND OUT THAT RYOSUKE FOUND OUT.
oh god, i thought there would be this gigantic fight between YamaRio but im glad that they resolved it very quickly <3

AmuDai! ONE MORE OBSTACLE LEFT!

i hope everything will go well for them!!!!

GO GO AMUDAI! GO GO LET'S GO! LET'S SAIL THAT SHIP IN A SEA OF FLOWERS <3

good luck with exams and everything!!!
hazel2883
#3
Chapter 7: GAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! You have no idea how excited I get when I see "New Story Updates" pops up on my account!!

and and and... here you are again with the cliff hangers! Woman! You're gonna give me a heart attack in no time!!!!!!!

I can't get enough of this story! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S GONNA BE THE LAST CHAPTER SOON???!!!
WHY??????!!!!!!!

This chapter has sooooo much LOVE!!!
I thought Rio's gonna be very angry at Ryosuke at first but they finally found out about the truth!
I'm gonna cheer for both couples!
They only have one obstacle left! Amu's dad! I imagine him being veeery scary!

*waves an AmuDai uchiwa* GOOOOOOOO AMUDAI!

Good luck on the finale! I loooove you! <3
Thanks for inspiring me!
pockypenguinmonster
#4
Chapter 5: he knows.

he.

knows.

YAMADA RYOSUKE KNOWS.

"I know who the real Amu is and I know she's not the person I love."

OH MY FREAKING GOD

CAN YOU HEAR ME SCREAMING AND GRINNING ALL THE WAY ACROSS THE BOARDER

CAUSE

HOLY MOLY. MY HEART IS SCREAMING.

THIS IS SO GOOD.

IT BRINGS ME TO TEARS TO KNOW THAT YAMADA RYOSUKE KNOWS AND LOVES YAMADA RIO DESPITE THAT SHES LYING TO HIS FACE THAT SHES AMU.

my heart did a little leap

BE RIGHT BACK.

I NEED A MOMENT TO CONTAIN THIS.

AND THAT THEY ARE TO-GET-HER. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


RIOO YOU LUCKY HUMAN.
AAAAAAA

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, YOU KNOW THAT

AAAAAAAA THIS BRINGS MY CRAZY WEEK TO THE HIGH POINT!!!!
hazel2883
#5
Chapter 5: AAKNXNKSNDJSBALALLWBDLANBX
AMU-CHAAAAN! did you get that?
That's fangirl talk that means... YOU ARE FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!

OH MY HEART CAN ONLY TAKE TOO MUCH FLUFF... ><
AND AND AND... CAN I JUST SAY...
YOU, MY PENGU MAMA, IS THE QUEEN OF CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!
like what the heck??! I didn't want the chapter to end.. ><

I seriously cannot wait for the next one.

And this line: However, the classroom immediately fell silent when he leaned over and placed a kiss on Rio's cheek. "Morning babe." He smiled at her, taking his usual seat in front of her.

*squeals like a retarded seal* Rio, you lucky duck!! ><
Excuse me for being crazy ne~
Ganbatte on the next one!
hazel2883
#6
Chapter 4: Omg omg omg omg!!!!!!!!!!
I have totally mixed emotions at the moment!
First of all, it's not good to flail so much like this early in the morning! I might wake everyone up!!!!!
GAAAAAHHH!

Second of all, I'm so jealous of Rio... She's so darn lucky!!!

Third of all, damn you Rio for lying to Ryosuke

Fourth of all, AMUDAI!!!!!! I know it's bad but why do I like Dai-chan acting jealous and all? .... Theyre so cute!!!!!!!!! Don't worry Dai-chan! You're the only one for Amu! *takes Yama away*

Fifth of all, I feel quite nervous when Yama finds out that Amu and Rio are lying to him...

Amu-chan! You made me feel like I'm riding an emotional roller coaster!!!!!!!!
I love you for this!
How can you even find time out of your busy schedule to write such a masterpiece??????

I'll patiently wait for the next one!
hazel2883
#7
Chapter 3: I WOKE UP TO THIS AND WHAT THE FREAKIN HECKKKKKK????!!!!! OMG! I SMELL TROUBLE...

THE GIRLS ARE IN SO MUCH TROUBLE!!! GAAAHH.
AMU-CHAN!!!!!! YOU'RE SERIOUSLY TORTURING ME! I'M HERE ON MY BED BITING MY PILLOW (sorry pillow-san) ><

But seriously... Can you hear me scream from UK to New York?? I can't! I just can't take this...

"If you ever see black flakes in the rice, those aren't seaweed scraps. They're ashes..."
THIS IS SO ACCURATE! Rio is NOT a COOK. Good thing Amu is there to save the day!

But the cliffhanger in the end.... It's seriously making me crazy! I can't wait for the next one... This is so clever! Your writing is just getting better an better.
Kami-sama, please give Amu loads of time to write!!!

Please update soon *pulls of Chinen's puppy dog eyes with double intensity*
hazel2883
#8
Chapter 2: WHYYYYY. WHYYYYY DID THE CHAPTER END?????!!!!
AHHHHHHHH! I'M SO ADDICTED TO THIS FIC..
OMGGGGGGGG.
I FEEL SORRY TO DAI-CHAN. MOU~ JUST BE PATIENT, AMU IS DOING THIS FOR YOU! ><

I wonder how Ryosuke will react after knowing that they switched identities?!! This is getting exciting!

And our group FRARKY! ahahahahahahaha. That's so US! LOL..

Am I being too greedy if I say UPDATE.... AGAIN? *pulls off Chinen's puppy dog eyes*
hazel2883
#9
Chapter 1: Dropping by again to say... UPDATEEEE!
YAMARIO AND AMUDAI IN ONE FIC MAKES ME GIDDY!

I MISS YOU AMU-CHAN!
hazel2883
#10
Chapter 1: OMGGGGGGGG!!!!!
AHHHHHHHH!!
WHAT THE HECK??!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M FEELING ALL GIDDY AND EXCITED.
OMG! I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING AGAIN!
I'VE READ THIS STORY BEFORE BUT STILL.....
CAN I BLACKMAIL YOU TO UPDATE??!

I CAN'T WAIT!
I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
CAN YOU FEEL MY FLAILING FROM UK TO NEW YORK??!!!!
OH SWEET MOTHER OF STRAWBERRIES! I LOOOOVE YOU.


AND YES! AMU'S PLAN IS BRILLIANT!
WHY DO I HAVE A FEELING RYOSUKE AND RIO WILL CLASH WHEN THEY MEET? Hahaha..

Please update!! I am begging you!!!!

Thanks for cheering me up! I SOOOO love your update!