Hot n´cold devil

Dumping Grounds (one-shots)
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Hot n´cold devil

 

3rd POV

 

Fayetteville, North Carolina. Siwon´s house. 13:35

Siwon did not expect things would come to this. But to be honest, he should have. Hyukjae and Donghae, after all, are naturally born troublemakers. And should we pick on the details, it was Siwon himself who invited his friends over to America for a short vacation and thoughtlessly told them the rumours about the Devil´s Tramping Ground.

“I don´t know, Donghae,” Hyukjae scratched his scalp, “this will probably not work.”

“Do you have any better idea how to trap the Devil, then?” Donghae raised his eyebrows, challenging his friend.

As always, it was Hyukjae who came up with the idea to catch the Devil and it was Donghae who got excited for no reason. Siwon was walking around, gathering camping utensils while the two of them were building a devil trap.

You see, about an hour of travelling by car, there is a camping ground in Bear Creek. It is said that on a certain place no grass nor plants grow, things left there are often thrown out, animals are scared to go near, and people feel too uneasy to stay there overnight. The reason for all these strange occurrences is said to be the Devil himself, walking around at night in circles, thinking deeply. Long story short, Siwon was the last person that wanted to sleep over in such a place. But what else could he do; his friends were unstoppable.

 

 

Bear Creek, North Carolina. Camp. 16:46

“We should have brought a shovel, the ground is hard,” Donghae sighed, waving with the trowel in his hand.

“It was your idea to bury a bowl,” Hyukjae was standing next to him with a gleeful expression.

The friends were in the camp, there was still time before the sunset, so they were getting ready for the hunt. Donghae was digging a hole in the so-called Devil´s Tramping ground to bury there a bowl he stole from Siwon´s kitchen. Hyukjae drew some weird pictures with a permanent marker inside the dish, letters they found with Donghae on the internet and his own interpretation of how a demon dog looks like. When Siwon inquired about the cute dog, he was told that this is the Devil´s true form. For sure.

When Siwon looked around, he felt nervous. Indeed, the grass in the clearing was darker, on same places the ground was burned and bare. It was autumn and a cold day, so the three friends were the only ones camping there. What a bad idea, Siwon thought.

 

 

Harper´s crossroads, North Carolina. Fast food restaurant. 17:37

Siwon felt so much better in the inhabited area, thirty minutes of walk from the camp. They were having dinner, Donghae and Hyukjae in good spirits.

“I can´t wait to see the trap,” Donghae mused, munching fries.

“I don´t know what you are so excited about, it won´t work,” Hyukjae snorted with a straw between his lips. He sipped from the coke and put the paper cup on the table. “If the Devil was this dumb to get caught in your bowl, he would have been caught ages ago.”

“Well, if you aren´t the smartest one, tell me your idea then,” Donghae challenged, stuffing his mouth.

“What we need is a proof, Donghae,” Hyukjae reasoned, sprawled in his seat, smirking. “We should film him.”

Siwon was listening to the conversation with interest. You have to understand, that he liked his two friends a lot. He missed them very much, or else he wouldn´t have asked them to come see him all the way here in the first place. He was grateful they agreed to travel across the globe for him, it was a tiring journey and they even brought him lots of chilli paste and all the good stuff he missed eating. Friends for life, cer

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sugar_snow
#1
Chapter 16: This is a masterpiece! My second time reading this oneshot and I'm still crying. The ending twisted my heart, I don't know what to feel, it's soooo good.
I'm so in love with their personality, they had heart like angels but also they were not perfect. Eunhyuk was kind to accept Donghae even though he never loved Donghae as lover. Seems like Eunhyuk also accepted not so perfect human as lover because he truly embraced that human was not perfect anyway. But I'm also disappointed that he never told Donghae he wanted to be human. He probably knew from the beginning that Donghae wouldn't let him go but still...
Then Donghae.... ahhh he was an angel who was full of love but come on, he gave special care for Eunhyuk as his sheep. I'm a bit jealous. Hopefully my personal angel up there doesn't give special treatment to other sheep. lol
Donghae breaking down as angel also what I like in this story. He was not 100% perfect and unable to function without Eunhyuk. But, as ex-angel, Donghae also considered the other guy's feeling and seemed like he would agree even if Eunhyuk wouldn't want to break up with the other guy. What if one day Eunhyuk found someone he truly love? Then he would understand the real meaning of human's love. Ahhh I'm going crazy thinking about this, I'm tethering between sad and relieved feeling.
sugar_snow
#2
Chapter 15: Donghae is soo in love he won't even tell Hyukjae the real deal. I'm a bit sad about this. I know he doesn't want Hyukjae to feel bad and worry about it, but what if someday Hyukjae finds out about it? Won't Hyukjae feel devastated knowing he shaved 3 hours of Donghae's life?
sugar_snow
#3
Chapter 13: I wonder why the black shuck attacked Donghae the second time? Donghae found the beast because it wanted to be found so it was not completely Donghae's fault for finding the black shuck. Or was it a test for him whether he could listen to Hyukjae's warn or not? hmm...
sugar_snow
#4
Chapter 11: My mom used to tell me that if we wake up with bruise, that means a ghost or spirit pinch us. I randomly used to get bruise as well especially when I was younger. Ugh, thankfully it was not spreading all over the body.
sugar_snow
#5
Chapter 7: This is so dark. First of all Hyukjae had very cold heart, he didn't hesitate to kill the old elf! Yikes scary, no wonder he was an experienced hunter. He seemed cautious and knew Donghae could potentially kill him if he wanted to do so.
On the other hand, Donghae... hmmm he was so mysterious, even until the end. I mean he could easily kill Hyukjae from the beginning or even waited until Hyukjae got the money from the buyer and killed the buyer, right? I wonder why he didn't do that. He also prefer received punishment from Hyukjae rather than ran away. I guess in a way he felt grateful that Hyukjae woke him up? He was afraid of being lonely and he knew Hyukjae would never hurt him. hmm complicated.
sugar_snow
#6
Chapter 6: Interesting combo that I've never really thought before. I don't really have any preference though, any combination as long as it's eunhae is interesting to me. Conman x detective is intriguing!
sugar_snow
#7
Chapter 4: this is extremely cute!!! Cold bodyguard Hyukjae is really a turn on but then he is cute inside?? aww I'm dying!!!
sugar_snow
#8
Chapter 3: Ugh Donghae is super annoying hereeee. I can imagine him whining all the time and Hyukjae just following here. Grrrr annoying but cute. I'm in dilemma, seems like Hyukjae loves Donghae so much but I can't with this annoying little brat. I hope by the time Donghae is a bit older, he can be less bratty and cheeky.
sugar_snow
#9
Chapter 1: I always think of kappa as cute creature, I thought Donghae was the kappa...
now I need to think twice, if I ever see a kappa...