Chapter III

Exposed: Secretly Dating
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*Back to the present

 

Sinb groggily opened her eyes. School has just started a month ago but she's sure that she'll be the "talk of the town" again. Not because she is the daughter of the richest known couple in Korea, but because of the rumors circulating around the campus. She checked the university's website last night. Due to the close bond between her and Umji, one look on those photos and you'll really think of them as dating. But in the middle of checking those, she couldn't help but to feel irritated. Sinb wasn't irritated because she doesn't have copies of those. Infact, it was saved on her laptop's so called "Special" folder. Those pictures are important to her, obviously. And the reason why she was irritated is because she wants those pictures only for herself. It was one of Sinb's complicated characteristics. She selfish when it comes to person or things that she likes. Wait, I like Umji? She thought but just shakes her head after.

 

After an hour of prepairing. She took her car keys on the bedside table and took off. Sinb wants to learn things on her own. That's why at the age of 20, she started living on her own. It wasn't easy to deal with her mother at first but then, she eventually agreed to it. She bought an apartment just 10 mins away of drive from the University. Arriving at the university's main gate, she can already see the students looking at her car. She sigh. Hoping that no one would dare to ask her about the issue. She parked her car on the reserved parking space for her. She wore her sunglasses and walked through the school's open field, wanting to avoid most of the students which was walking on the hallway.

"I heard that her girlfriend is in America."

"I wonder how they met?"

"That girl is so lucky. How could she get Eunbi's attention easily." 

She balled her fist inside her coat's pocket. "Can they just stop talking right in front of me!?" She thought. She just let those people to talk about her but one certain comment about her secret "relationship" with Umji triggered her.

"I heard that the girl in the pictures is a e in the US. Someone said that Eunbi hired her for her own pleasure." 

She walk closely to the group of student who said that. She removed her glasses

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Thinking of starting a twitter au but wondering if readers will support it at the same time.

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Inhann
#1
Chapter 11: Still hoping for an update TT
Kang_Seungmin1997 #2
Chapter 11: Ohweeeeeeee Yewon must've had a bad relationship before its sad but im glad that Eunbi is already there to assure her though...

My question might be rude to ask but I'll ask it anyways hehe will ypu be continuing this story? Umb stories are pretty hard to find eh and yours is progressing good and it does also have a good plot, im hoping for it to continue but if not then its fine you also do have other priorities in life and im totally fine with it, thank you!
MAYDAYY11
#3
Chapter 11: I wandered into this UmB AU and I just- I’m so soft uwu I just- AN UMB AU! My rare-pair is hard to find and it’s so sad ;u; This was super cute, the interactions they have with each other just make me D’AWWWW! I enjoy the fake lovers AU and to see it with UmB is AMAZING HUHUHU MY BOI. THIS IS GREAT.

Though points of improvement! Spacing. Most of the story is huge blocks of text that I sometimes find hard to read because I get lost HAHAHA Another thing is the grammar. Things like a sentence wandering into past tense when it should be in present or future present tense- Yeah I’ll stop there with the technical terms HAHAHA But ya get me right? Tense’s are important. For example in the last paragraph of this chapter- “and wiped the lone tear that HAD fallen from her eye.” That’s only one example but you do tend to be careless with that. There’s also the ellipsis, which should be three dots not two lmao Off the top of my head these are your most obvious mistakes.

I hope this helped? It’s honestly a really good story imo. If you don’t mind the mistakes it’s a really enjoyable concept and a wonderful story! I REALLY REALLY LOVE the fake lovers AU and UmB is one of my faves ;u; I’m glad I was able to read it! Even if you discontinue this author-nim, I hope the criticism helps you in your future endeavours!
TongdariTtororong #4
Chapter 11: I need an update ??
ohairiyu
#5
Chapter 11: update please ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Slowhands
#6
Chapter 11: Update please :(
Hwang_Eunbi #7
Still waiting:((
ohairiyu
#8
Chapter 11: still waiting for the date authornim ㅠㅠㅠ hope youre still there!
BuddyBunBun
#9
Chapter 11: ur stories are great author~nim. I hope you can update soon~~