Exposed: Secretly Dating

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In which, the great Hwang Eunbi, daughter of the richest YC University's owner, lost her phone. The next day, pictures of her with her "Secret girlfriend" was posted all throughout the School's website. How would Sinb handle the issue? Knowing that her father will interfere on it?

Foreword

I know I haven't finish my Untitled story yet and I haven't updated it in a while now but I just want to write this since the plot keeps on bugging me and it's making me sleepless. Lol. Just to give you guys a headstart, slow updates ahead! It's December, and I am kind of busy helping our family business since the demand is high. I hope you're okay with that ^^ thank you for waiting patiently <3

Author's Thoughts
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Thinking of starting a twitter au but wondering if readers will support it at the same time.
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Inhann #1
Chapter 11: Still hoping for an update TT
Kang_Seungmin1997 #2
Chapter 11: Ohweeeeeeee Yewon must've had a bad relationship before its sad but im glad that Eunbi is already there to assure her though...

My question might be rude to ask but I'll ask it anyways hehe will ypu be continuing this story? Umb stories are pretty hard to find eh and yours is progressing good and it does also have a good plot, im hoping for it to continue but if not then its fine you also do have other priorities in life and im totally fine with it, thank you!
MAYDAYY11 #3
Chapter 11: I wandered into this UmB AU and I just- I’m so soft uwu I just- AN UMB AU! My rare-pair is hard to find and it’s so sad ;u; This was super cute, the interactions they have with each other just make me D’AWWWW! I enjoy the fake lovers AU and to see it with UmB is AMAZING HUHUHU MY BOI. THIS IS GREAT.

Though points of improvement! Spacing. Most of the story is huge blocks of text that I sometimes find hard to read because I get lost HAHAHA Another thing is the grammar. Things like a sentence wandering into past tense when it should be in present or future present tense- Yeah I’ll stop there with the technical terms HAHAHA But ya get me right? Tense’s are important. For example in the last paragraph of this chapter- “and wiped the lone tear that HAD fallen from her eye.” That’s only one example but you do tend to be careless with that. There’s also the ellipsis, which should be three dots not two lmao Off the top of my head these are your most obvious mistakes.

I hope this helped? It’s honestly a really good story imo. If you don’t mind the mistakes it’s a really enjoyable concept and a wonderful story! I REALLY REALLY LOVE the fake lovers AU and UmB is one of my faves ;u; I’m glad I was able to read it! Even if you discontinue this author-nim, I hope the criticism helps you in your future endeavours!
TongdariTtororong #4
Chapter 11: I need an update ??
ohairiyu #5
Chapter 11: update please ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Slowhands #6
Chapter 11: Update please :(
Hwang_Eunbi #7
Still waiting:((
ohairiyu #8
Chapter 11: still waiting for the date authornim ㅠㅠㅠ hope youre still there!
BuddyBunBun #9
Chapter 11: ur stories are great author~nim. I hope you can update soon~~
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