Chapter II

Exposed: Secretly Dating
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What really happened in the US..

 

Sinb sat down on bench. She's been walking around the City since earlier ago. She thought that after a long flight from Incheon, she'll be escorted by one of her Father's employee to a hotel which she would spend her next six weeks to. But no one fetched her to the airport. She even waited for an hour, thinking that the employee was just caught in a traffic jam. But an hour had passed, no one showed up. She decided to just find the hotel herself but it just make the situation worst. She got lost in the middle of strolling and now, she didn't know what to do anymore. She tried calling her father to ask for some help but he's not answering. "Must be busy with work" she thought. Sinb cursed herself mentally. This was her first vacation alone, without any family or friends to guide her. But it's not just the reason. She literally smacked her own head for not taking her english class seriously. She tried to ask some locals earlier but it seems like they can't understand her. Knowing only some basic english words surely . She doesn't know why she finds English boring. She learned Japanese in just almost two months of studying it, which is obviously more difficult to study than english. Now, she take a mental note to study english as soon as she's back to korea. Or might as well, do it while she's in the US. She sigh once again and stood up. She fished her phone out from her pocket and dialled her father's number once again and continue walking.

*bold letters signifies words stated in korean.

"Omo! I'm sorry Miss! I wasn't looking in the way." The stranger bows and apologies. Seeing this, Sinb finally breathed a relieved sigh once she realize that the stranger is a fellow Korean.

"It's okay miss, I wasn't looking in the way too." Sinb smiled to the stranger. She can't contain her excitement and happiness now that she accidentally bumped into someone who can understand her.

"You're a Korean? Wow! Annyeong haseyo."  the girl bowed which was returned by Sinb. She greeted the stranger too and introduced herself.

"I'm Hwang Eunbi. I am glad to meet you. I actually got lost and I don't know where is the hotel I am suppose to be st

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Thinking of starting a twitter au but wondering if readers will support it at the same time.

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Inhann
#1
Chapter 11: Still hoping for an update TT
Kang_Seungmin1997 #2
Chapter 11: Ohweeeeeeee Yewon must've had a bad relationship before its sad but im glad that Eunbi is already there to assure her though...

My question might be rude to ask but I'll ask it anyways hehe will ypu be continuing this story? Umb stories are pretty hard to find eh and yours is progressing good and it does also have a good plot, im hoping for it to continue but if not then its fine you also do have other priorities in life and im totally fine with it, thank you!
MAYDAYY11
#3
Chapter 11: I wandered into this UmB AU and I just- I’m so soft uwu I just- AN UMB AU! My rare-pair is hard to find and it’s so sad ;u; This was super cute, the interactions they have with each other just make me D’AWWWW! I enjoy the fake lovers AU and to see it with UmB is AMAZING HUHUHU MY BOI. THIS IS GREAT.

Though points of improvement! Spacing. Most of the story is huge blocks of text that I sometimes find hard to read because I get lost HAHAHA Another thing is the grammar. Things like a sentence wandering into past tense when it should be in present or future present tense- Yeah I’ll stop there with the technical terms HAHAHA But ya get me right? Tense’s are important. For example in the last paragraph of this chapter- “and wiped the lone tear that HAD fallen from her eye.” That’s only one example but you do tend to be careless with that. There’s also the ellipsis, which should be three dots not two lmao Off the top of my head these are your most obvious mistakes.

I hope this helped? It’s honestly a really good story imo. If you don’t mind the mistakes it’s a really enjoyable concept and a wonderful story! I REALLY REALLY LOVE the fake lovers AU and UmB is one of my faves ;u; I’m glad I was able to read it! Even if you discontinue this author-nim, I hope the criticism helps you in your future endeavours!
TongdariTtororong #4
Chapter 11: I need an update ??
ohairiyu
#5
Chapter 11: update please ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Slowhands
#6
Chapter 11: Update please :(
Hwang_Eunbi #7
Still waiting:((
ohairiyu
#8
Chapter 11: still waiting for the date authornim ㅠㅠㅠ hope youre still there!
BuddyBunBun
#9
Chapter 11: ur stories are great author~nim. I hope you can update soon~~