CHAPTER FOUR

Orion
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“Uh- Yes, is this the orphanage?” Chorong nervously inquired over the phone.

“Oh. Chorong-unnie?” The girl on the other line clearly recognized her voice. She felt bad that she couldn’t say the same.

“Ah. Y-yes. I was won-“

“How have you been? It’s so nice for you to call. It’s been a few days since you left us. I thought you’d forgotten about us already.” The excitement and disappointment is crisp and clear. “But it’s okay, unnie! We know you must be busy with your new life. We’re so happy for you!”

She felt guilty that she couldn’t recognize the person on the other line, and it’s too late to ask now. “Ah. Yes, it’s been… quite eventful.” And a whole lot weird. “Uhm. I hope you’re all doing well there.” What was she thinking? She couldn’t even remember them.

“Ahh. That’s our unnie! We’re all okay here. But I have to go now, the kids are having a sugar rush. You know how they are. Come visit us soon! -  Aish! I told you not to eat that!” The line went dead.

For a moment, Chorong felt grateful; it seems that a lot of people cared about her. She may not have relatives, but something inside her told her that she had a family. A family she that couldn’t even remember now. Feeling her stomach drop, she felt the loneliness filling her up again.

You’re better than this. There’s a lot to be thankful for. She thought to herself. Clearly, you left that place to start a life on your own. So do it. “Alright, fighting!”

After her own pep talk, she looked around Bomi’s house. It wasn’t grand, but it surely was more than enough. Although, upon taking a closer look, it seemed lonely for some reason. Taking a positive perspective on her new life, she decided to do something nice for Bomi. The woman did do a lot for her. It’s only right to give something back. After contemplating on what to do, she decided to thoroughly tidy up the house. She got to her feet and started on the kitchen.

As she continued to the living room, she noticed a lot of frame-shaped stains on the walls, and there were a lot of them. It’s as if the house itself is getting rid of memories, only to be left with scars. She then realized why the place felt lonely, it was too plain. Why would she remove them? Without spending much thought on it, she shrugged and went on with her work. It’s none of my business anyway.

 

“Bomi-unnie, I have a recording this afternoon. Will you be fine without me?” The cheeky girl said teasingly.

“Aish! Namjoo-ah! Of course I will. Why do you and Hayoung always make it a big deal?” Bomi ruffled the younger one’s hair. “You’re the dongsaeng here, aren’t you?”

“We know unnie. We just like to tease you.”

But Bomi knew better than that. The maknaes have always been the ones taking care of their unnies lately, even with Eunji and Naeun. Sometimes she still couldn’t believe how mature they’ve grown. “Arasseo. I’ll be fine here. You go run along now before I tell Hayoung you’ve been hiding her games one by one.”

“Unnie! She’s a grown woman for crying out loud!” Namjoo exclaimed as she went for the door and Bomi was left shaking her head.

To be perfectly honest, Namjoo has been an immense help to her. She’s a singer and co-owner of the dance studio. She’s been running it in between her recordings when Bomi couldn’t even make it out of bed. More than that, the young one never failed to cheer them up. It was her lively self who makes the air lighter. She’s also the one who can lift up the tension when Eunji and Naeun are in the same room with them. Everyone knows it’s such a burden to the poor girl, but she always managed to stay positive and just be grateful to be there for her unnies.

Checking her phone, Bomi wondered why Chorong hasn’t called her yet, or at least dropped by if she’d figure out her situation already. She was worried, but what can she do? If Chorong decided to leave without a trace, she doesn’t really have a say on that, does she? Who was she to stop her anyway? She was pulled back from her reverie when her dance students came in. Finally. She thought. After all, dancing has always been her most effective weapon in her arsenal. It’s both her offense and defense against life. When she starts to dance, she loses herself in her own world, her momentary solitude.

 

“Babe? I’m home!” Namjoo called out in their house. They’re aren’t really married yet but they do consider themselves a m

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pandaredux
I’m deeply sorry for putting you all through Chapter 15, especially those who read it before the Epilogue got posted. I just really wanted to know your reactions, especially of those two people having their tea. :)) Anyway, thank you for Reading through. My first fic, finally done. Thank you. ^^,

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AegyoPRASH
#1
Chapter 16: Reading this masterpiece for the 2nd time. I barely remembered anything so it was full of surprises again. This fic got me in a way I can’t explain, I loved it from the beginning and almost cried in chapter 15, but I’m seriously glad you’ve wrote the epilogue, after everything Chorong’s been through, she deserved that amazing ending.
deloctrl
#2
Chapter 16: Oh my god...

After being confused with the previous chapter, i thought i was gonna have another heartbreak in the epilogue. I’m glad it had a turnaround. That was seriously a good and interesting plot. It was different, but a good one. It got me confused and thinking every time Chorong’s dreams/nightmares would appear but it all somehow made sense. Thank you for the story!
EarlySpring
#3
Chapter 16: "A/N: I'd like to thank everyone who supported this story no matter how much it ."
I'm gonna be really honest with you: NOTHING about this story . It was beautiful from start to finish and I immensely enjoyed reading it.

It was such a crazy ride, thinking Chorong's previous life was the dream and now she was in reality, only to discover that it was the opposite. At the same time, you had been hinting at it since the very beginning of the story and I had my moments of doubt, but then I would get swept up in the story and push these thoughts aside. Seriously, kudos for how you played this.

The part when Chorong woke up in chapter 15 was heartbreaking, but the reveal of how her life was and what truly happened to her was a satisfying one. Then, in the epilogue, the moment when she finally saw Bomi again was so beautiful and heartwarming. It really was perfect.

Thank you for writing this story! <3
Panda0619
#4
Chapter 16: Gosh this has got to be one of the best one read so far.. I must say it was perfect till chap 15.. Haha

I love your lines.. so sensual..

And now I'm gonna re-read this before checking out other stories from you!

Thanks for such an awesome story!
Panda0619
#5
Chapter 13: This has got to be one of the best chapters I've ever read on this site..
phouse
#6
question : how to erase your own memory so I can read this story over again and get thrilled like the first time I read it?
and the way I missed scattered hints on earlier chapters, hahaha..
pandanonymous
#7
Chapter 16: Thank goodness you came back! Otherwise I won't get to finish this fanfic. This is gold. Each chapter made me feel scared, scared that maybe Chorong isn't real or maybe Chorong has her own family waiting for her (WHICH APPARENTLY IS THE FCKING CASE) I was scared. But as chobom warms up to each other.. as they grow in love, all those maybe's and afraid feelings I have disappeared. I actually enjoyed reading them happy. I was contented and ready for a happy ending. Kudos to that effective writing. It's like what they called "calm before the storm" I was calm until you wrecked my life with chapter 15. I swear to god I may have stopped breathing and my hands went cold sweaty. Napa putangina talaga ako. Hahahaha! I'd be looking forward to your next fanfic. Thank you for a wonderful piece. <3
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 16: Ugh my heart aches at the thought of lost memories, especially to this extent. What a revelation! But Bomi, oh the way you described Chorong finally seeing her in this lifetime, oh my, it’s so beautiful >.<

This ending really squeezes my heart. It makes me yearn to see how their relationship will progress this way, but I have no doubt it will be breathtaking. ‘Beautiful’ is all I think about to describe their fateful meeting and the ending of this story *0*
dpdlvldzm #9
Thank you for this! It is so well written from start to end. Looking forward to your next chobom fic <3
WavingPanda
#10
Chapter 16: First of all, congratulations on finishing this journey! It must have been exhausting at times but you finally typed that final period. You worked hard and it shows. It was done wonderfully and you knew how to make the plot remarkable. I know it's going to stand out from many other fics for the same reason.

Now, onto the story...you tricked us! I can’t wipe off the smile on my face because you gave us clues but we happily ignored them. That's fantastic and I tip my hat.

Guessing here, maybe that's why your story is named Orion, because we read and lived through Chorong's imagination. But here’s the catch, maybe what we read is what's called astral projection/travel and Chorong was wandering in her own Orion (brightest constellation). Supposedly when into an astral projection, if done correctly and with previous experience, you can actually travel into unknown territory that in fact exists and meet people that actually lives. When in a coma, you can live something similar to an astral projection and live through another reality with people from your initial reality, because you're meeting with their souls and their other me. Chorong picked up their names and started her astral projection with that knowledge (because every single person she met were exactly as they actually are).

Also, your foreword should have warned us because Chorong did wake up but was her life with Bomi what never ever existed. Heartbreaking.

I felt butterflies dancing in my belly when Bomi stood in front of Chorong, I knew that you were going to give us what we were asking for and it was lovely how Chorong got to be with Bomi after all and got her happy ending. Being honest, I loved the ending so much; now watching the entire picture, it is the best ending. Plus, I adore open endings that only give an end to the main trouble in the storyline because it gives the reader the freedom of expanding the plot in their minds after the final period.

Another thing I must say is, your writing feels more descriptive and flows even better in these two final chapters. Actually, it have been progressing in every chapter, like you had pushed yourself with each passing chapter and it's amazing. I admire your determination and your skills.

Finally, thank you for sharing this story with us. A treasure. A marvellous work. I'm truly happy that you're a writer that dedicates some of her talent to this pairing and group :')

(Your mention at the end of the epilogue, the feelings are mutual. I know you know how much I appreciate you and it's heartwarming to know the feelings are mutual).