CHAPTER THREE

Orion
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The ride home was unsettling. Bomi could tell that Chorong was still crying, trying to stifle her sobs. She couldn’t help but worry about her and everything else that has transpired within the last two days. Was Chorong lying when she talked about her family? That can’t be, her sorrow felt so real. Bomi couldn’t put the pieces together, especially now when she’s already dead tired.

She parked her car inside the garage and opened the door on Chorong’s side. Not realizing that the journey was over, Chorong took a few seconds longer to finally get off.

The older girl still refused to look at Bomi even as they entered the house. How could she? She was feeling embarrassed, and guilty, and miserable, all at the same time. “I’m sorry for all the trouble. Please don’t worry about me, I’ll be fine on the couch.”

The state of the older girl was breaking Bomi’s heart. She couldn’t do anything for Chorong other than offer her home. “No unnie, you’ll sleep in this room.” She said as she held the older girl’s hand and led the way to the spare room.

Chorong didn’t realize that Bomi went out of the room until she came back carrying a set of clothes.

“Wash up when you can, then try to sleep for a while.” Bomi said but the older girl didn’t respond. She sat down beside Chorong and wrapped her in a warm embrace. “You must be having a hard time right now, but you have to rest first so you can figure this out with a clear mind in the morning.” Seeing that Chorong still didn’t respond, she stood up slowly and lovingly kissed the older girl’s crown. She didn’t know why she did, but it felt right. “I’ll be in the next room when you need me, Unnie.” She whispered as she took her leave.

Bomi couldn’t do anything but sigh, hoping she could breathe out some of the pain she’s been feeling. She mindlessly washed herself up and went to bed. Unfortunately, it was impossible to sleep that night.

 

“Chorong, please…”

She heard a man’s voice in her dream again. She was sure it was Changsub; but yesterday, she was also sure that she had a family. Chorong didn’t want to wake up, she didn’t want to face anything that awaits her when she does. Can I just stay in this darkness? But it was too late, she felt herself being pulled back into reality.

She stayed in bed for another half an hour, reading and re-reading her own document. It didn’t say much aside from her name, blood type, physical description, and her registered address. As she got up, she decided that she’d call the orphanage listed on her document. I have to at least confirm this.

“Bomi?” She looked around the house and saw that no one was there. But she noticed a note on the kitchen counter addressed to her.

Hey,

You must be really tired so I didn’t bother to wake you up. I went off to work, I’ll be back around five in the afternoon.

Breakfast is on the table.

Call me if you need anything. I’ll be at my dance studio.

Bomi

Beside the note was a cellphone with only one contact on the list. Bomi

Chorong couldn’t believe that Bomi would go to such lengths for a complete stranger. Just like that, she felt a new sense of admiration and gratitude towards the younger one. At least there’s one person who makes this situation a little more bearable. She’s not alone in this, she thought and smiled to herself.

 

“Oh. Bomi-yah. You’re early today.” Eunji greeted her friend who was making her way inside the office. “Is there something wrong? How’s Chorong-ssi doing?”

Bomi hesitated for a moment, then began. “That’s just it.” She sighed. “She said a lot of weird things yesterday, saying that everything wasn’t in the right place and it wasn’t how she remembers it.” Seeing that Eunji merely tilted her head in confusion, she continued. “We started to get to know each other and she told me about her parents. But after all the commotion about everything not being in the right place, we rushed to the SSC to get her documents and -” For some reason, this part was hard for her too. “She’s an orphan, Eunji, without any known relatives. I would think that she made up all those stories, but when she broke down on her document, she seemed so genuine.”

Eunji thought about it for a while. “It’s possible” Bomi looked up with expectation in

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pandaredux
I’m deeply sorry for putting you all through Chapter 15, especially those who read it before the Epilogue got posted. I just really wanted to know your reactions, especially of those two people having their tea. :)) Anyway, thank you for Reading through. My first fic, finally done. Thank you. ^^,

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AegyoPRASH
#1
Chapter 16: Reading this masterpiece for the 2nd time. I barely remembered anything so it was full of surprises again. This fic got me in a way I can’t explain, I loved it from the beginning and almost cried in chapter 15, but I’m seriously glad you’ve wrote the epilogue, after everything Chorong’s been through, she deserved that amazing ending.
deloctrl
#2
Chapter 16: Oh my god...

After being confused with the previous chapter, i thought i was gonna have another heartbreak in the epilogue. I’m glad it had a turnaround. That was seriously a good and interesting plot. It was different, but a good one. It got me confused and thinking every time Chorong’s dreams/nightmares would appear but it all somehow made sense. Thank you for the story!
EarlySpring
#3
Chapter 16: "A/N: I'd like to thank everyone who supported this story no matter how much it ."
I'm gonna be really honest with you: NOTHING about this story . It was beautiful from start to finish and I immensely enjoyed reading it.

It was such a crazy ride, thinking Chorong's previous life was the dream and now she was in reality, only to discover that it was the opposite. At the same time, you had been hinting at it since the very beginning of the story and I had my moments of doubt, but then I would get swept up in the story and push these thoughts aside. Seriously, kudos for how you played this.

The part when Chorong woke up in chapter 15 was heartbreaking, but the reveal of how her life was and what truly happened to her was a satisfying one. Then, in the epilogue, the moment when she finally saw Bomi again was so beautiful and heartwarming. It really was perfect.

Thank you for writing this story! <3
Panda0619
#4
Chapter 16: Gosh this has got to be one of the best one read so far.. I must say it was perfect till chap 15.. Haha

I love your lines.. so sensual..

And now I'm gonna re-read this before checking out other stories from you!

Thanks for such an awesome story!
Panda0619
#5
Chapter 13: This has got to be one of the best chapters I've ever read on this site..
phouse
#6
question : how to erase your own memory so I can read this story over again and get thrilled like the first time I read it?
and the way I missed scattered hints on earlier chapters, hahaha..
pandanonymous
#7
Chapter 16: Thank goodness you came back! Otherwise I won't get to finish this fanfic. This is gold. Each chapter made me feel scared, scared that maybe Chorong isn't real or maybe Chorong has her own family waiting for her (WHICH APPARENTLY IS THE FCKING CASE) I was scared. But as chobom warms up to each other.. as they grow in love, all those maybe's and afraid feelings I have disappeared. I actually enjoyed reading them happy. I was contented and ready for a happy ending. Kudos to that effective writing. It's like what they called "calm before the storm" I was calm until you wrecked my life with chapter 15. I swear to god I may have stopped breathing and my hands went cold sweaty. Napa putangina talaga ako. Hahahaha! I'd be looking forward to your next fanfic. Thank you for a wonderful piece. <3
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 16: Ugh my heart aches at the thought of lost memories, especially to this extent. What a revelation! But Bomi, oh the way you described Chorong finally seeing her in this lifetime, oh my, it’s so beautiful >.<

This ending really squeezes my heart. It makes me yearn to see how their relationship will progress this way, but I have no doubt it will be breathtaking. ‘Beautiful’ is all I think about to describe their fateful meeting and the ending of this story *0*
dpdlvldzm #9
Thank you for this! It is so well written from start to end. Looking forward to your next chobom fic <3
WavingPanda
#10
Chapter 16: First of all, congratulations on finishing this journey! It must have been exhausting at times but you finally typed that final period. You worked hard and it shows. It was done wonderfully and you knew how to make the plot remarkable. I know it's going to stand out from many other fics for the same reason.

Now, onto the story...you tricked us! I can’t wipe off the smile on my face because you gave us clues but we happily ignored them. That's fantastic and I tip my hat.

Guessing here, maybe that's why your story is named Orion, because we read and lived through Chorong's imagination. But here’s the catch, maybe what we read is what's called astral projection/travel and Chorong was wandering in her own Orion (brightest constellation). Supposedly when into an astral projection, if done correctly and with previous experience, you can actually travel into unknown territory that in fact exists and meet people that actually lives. When in a coma, you can live something similar to an astral projection and live through another reality with people from your initial reality, because you're meeting with their souls and their other me. Chorong picked up their names and started her astral projection with that knowledge (because every single person she met were exactly as they actually are).

Also, your foreword should have warned us because Chorong did wake up but was her life with Bomi what never ever existed. Heartbreaking.

I felt butterflies dancing in my belly when Bomi stood in front of Chorong, I knew that you were going to give us what we were asking for and it was lovely how Chorong got to be with Bomi after all and got her happy ending. Being honest, I loved the ending so much; now watching the entire picture, it is the best ending. Plus, I adore open endings that only give an end to the main trouble in the storyline because it gives the reader the freedom of expanding the plot in their minds after the final period.

Another thing I must say is, your writing feels more descriptive and flows even better in these two final chapters. Actually, it have been progressing in every chapter, like you had pushed yourself with each passing chapter and it's amazing. I admire your determination and your skills.

Finally, thank you for sharing this story with us. A treasure. A marvellous work. I'm truly happy that you're a writer that dedicates some of her talent to this pairing and group :')

(Your mention at the end of the epilogue, the feelings are mutual. I know you know how much I appreciate you and it's heartwarming to know the feelings are mutual).