CHAPTER ONE

Orion
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“Chorong please, wake up…”

Chorong suddenly woke up to the antiseptic smell of the hospital room, scrunching her nose. Wondering whose voice was trying to wake her up, she looked around and realized she was alone. She couldn’t remember how she ended up there; all she could muster out of her brain is leaving her house this morning. But then she realized she doesn’t even know how long she’s been there.

She was about to get up when the doorknob twitched and a doctor went in.

“Good to see you’re awake. I’m Jeong Eunji and I’ll be the doctor attending to you while you’re here.” She said with a smile as she flips through her patient’s clipboard. “Have you been up long? How are you feeling?”

Chorong was slightly taken aback by the doctor’s genuine bright smile thus it took her a moment to realize what she’s been asked. “Oh. Not really, I just woke up a few minutes ago. My head feels heavy and my body aches.” Only realizing just now how much of a mess she feels.

“I see. That doesn’t sound so bad.” The doctor said as she walked closer to Chorong’s bedside. “However, just to be sure, I need you to stay and rest a bit more. I’m going to send you food in a while; all you’ve been getting is this IV since you were brought here the other day.” she said as she flashed another smile, adjusting the flow of the saline solution.

The other day? I’ve been out for that long? And I was brought here? She thought for a while as she racked her brain for even a tinge of memory. Nothing. “Do you happen to know who brought me here?” she reluctantly asked. “And why?”

“About that,” She shifted her gaze and sighed, wondering how to explain to the patient what happened. “my bestfriend found you unconscious in the park and brought you here. We couldn’t find any information about you since you didn’t seem to have any identification on you.” With dread, she asked, “Can you remember anything? Your name, perhaps?”

Chorong was starting to become more confused. “I-I’m Chorong. Park Chorong.” She was getting frustrated as she still couldn’t remember how she ended up at the park, then eventually here.

Eunji saw Chorong’s furrowed brows and figured she must be trying so hard to regain her memory. “Don’t strain yourself too hard, Chorong-ssi. I’m sure the memory will resurface.” She held Chorong’s hand and gave it a light squeeze. “The important thing is you’re awake, and you remember who you are.”

After a few more adjustments and routine checks, Eunji finally tucked her stethoscope in her coat. “Everything seems to be normal.” She gave another warm smile. “But you still need some rest. I’ll check on you again in a few hours.”

“Oh. Thank you, Eunji-ssi.” Chorong gave a weary smile as the doctor left the room.

Eottoke. What did you get yourself into this time, Chorong? She thought to herself in frustration. A few minutes and a blinding headache later, she gave up on trying to figure out what the hell happened and fell asleep.

 

Eunji’s phone buzzed in her pocket after she closed the door on Chorong’s room. “Ne?”

“How is she?”

“She’s awake. I got her name but she couldn’t remember what happened.”

“Oh? What’s her name?”

“Park Chorong. She seems really confused right now, come see her as soon as you can.”

“Alright, I’m on my way. Thanks, Eunji.”

The doctor pinched her nose bridge as she hung up the phone. Bomi-yah, why do you always end up saving strangers?

 

“Come back to me, please…”

There’s that voice again; this time, it sounds familiar. It took her a while to realize that it was her fiancé, Changsub, who was calling out to her. She struggled to open her eyes, wanting to see if her family finally came for her. When she managed to open them, she saw that the room was still the same except for the food tray on her bedside table. No one’s here yet? Aren’t they worried about me? I’ve been here for a few days now.

Just then, the doorknob twitched again. With a hopeful heart, she expected her parents to come. However, much to her dismay, it was yet another stranger.

“M-may I help you?” Chorong croaked cautiously.

“O-oh. I’m sorry, I’m Yoon Bomi. I was the one who brought you here.” She grinned shyly but stayed by the door. “May I come in?”

“Ah, yes. Please do. I’m Park Chorong. Thanks for-” She felt herself blush and sat down rather quickly which made her dizzy.

Bomi rushed to her and helped her sit comfortably as she held her steady. “You shouldn’t make sudden movements like that.”

“Oh. Y-yes. I’m sorry. Thank you again.” Chorong saw that Bomi’s hand was still on top of hers which made her cheeks feel like it was about to burst.

Noticing how Chorong suddenly turned red, Bomi realized

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pandaredux
I’m deeply sorry for putting you all through Chapter 15, especially those who read it before the Epilogue got posted. I just really wanted to know your reactions, especially of those two people having their tea. :)) Anyway, thank you for Reading through. My first fic, finally done. Thank you. ^^,

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AegyoPRASH
#1
Chapter 16: Reading this masterpiece for the 2nd time. I barely remembered anything so it was full of surprises again. This fic got me in a way I can’t explain, I loved it from the beginning and almost cried in chapter 15, but I’m seriously glad you’ve wrote the epilogue, after everything Chorong’s been through, she deserved that amazing ending.
deloctrl
#2
Chapter 16: Oh my god...

After being confused with the previous chapter, i thought i was gonna have another heartbreak in the epilogue. I’m glad it had a turnaround. That was seriously a good and interesting plot. It was different, but a good one. It got me confused and thinking every time Chorong’s dreams/nightmares would appear but it all somehow made sense. Thank you for the story!
EarlySpring
#3
Chapter 16: "A/N: I'd like to thank everyone who supported this story no matter how much it ."
I'm gonna be really honest with you: NOTHING about this story . It was beautiful from start to finish and I immensely enjoyed reading it.

It was such a crazy ride, thinking Chorong's previous life was the dream and now she was in reality, only to discover that it was the opposite. At the same time, you had been hinting at it since the very beginning of the story and I had my moments of doubt, but then I would get swept up in the story and push these thoughts aside. Seriously, kudos for how you played this.

The part when Chorong woke up in chapter 15 was heartbreaking, but the reveal of how her life was and what truly happened to her was a satisfying one. Then, in the epilogue, the moment when she finally saw Bomi again was so beautiful and heartwarming. It really was perfect.

Thank you for writing this story! <3
Panda0619
#4
Chapter 16: Gosh this has got to be one of the best one read so far.. I must say it was perfect till chap 15.. Haha

I love your lines.. so sensual..

And now I'm gonna re-read this before checking out other stories from you!

Thanks for such an awesome story!
Panda0619
#5
Chapter 13: This has got to be one of the best chapters I've ever read on this site..
phouse
#6
question : how to erase your own memory so I can read this story over again and get thrilled like the first time I read it?
and the way I missed scattered hints on earlier chapters, hahaha..
pandanonymous
#7
Chapter 16: Thank goodness you came back! Otherwise I won't get to finish this fanfic. This is gold. Each chapter made me feel scared, scared that maybe Chorong isn't real or maybe Chorong has her own family waiting for her (WHICH APPARENTLY IS THE FCKING CASE) I was scared. But as chobom warms up to each other.. as they grow in love, all those maybe's and afraid feelings I have disappeared. I actually enjoyed reading them happy. I was contented and ready for a happy ending. Kudos to that effective writing. It's like what they called "calm before the storm" I was calm until you wrecked my life with chapter 15. I swear to god I may have stopped breathing and my hands went cold sweaty. Napa putangina talaga ako. Hahahaha! I'd be looking forward to your next fanfic. Thank you for a wonderful piece. <3
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 16: Ugh my heart aches at the thought of lost memories, especially to this extent. What a revelation! But Bomi, oh the way you described Chorong finally seeing her in this lifetime, oh my, it’s so beautiful >.<

This ending really squeezes my heart. It makes me yearn to see how their relationship will progress this way, but I have no doubt it will be breathtaking. ‘Beautiful’ is all I think about to describe their fateful meeting and the ending of this story *0*
dpdlvldzm #9
Thank you for this! It is so well written from start to end. Looking forward to your next chobom fic <3
WavingPanda
#10
Chapter 16: First of all, congratulations on finishing this journey! It must have been exhausting at times but you finally typed that final period. You worked hard and it shows. It was done wonderfully and you knew how to make the plot remarkable. I know it's going to stand out from many other fics for the same reason.

Now, onto the story...you tricked us! I can’t wipe off the smile on my face because you gave us clues but we happily ignored them. That's fantastic and I tip my hat.

Guessing here, maybe that's why your story is named Orion, because we read and lived through Chorong's imagination. But here’s the catch, maybe what we read is what's called astral projection/travel and Chorong was wandering in her own Orion (brightest constellation). Supposedly when into an astral projection, if done correctly and with previous experience, you can actually travel into unknown territory that in fact exists and meet people that actually lives. When in a coma, you can live something similar to an astral projection and live through another reality with people from your initial reality, because you're meeting with their souls and their other me. Chorong picked up their names and started her astral projection with that knowledge (because every single person she met were exactly as they actually are).

Also, your foreword should have warned us because Chorong did wake up but was her life with Bomi what never ever existed. Heartbreaking.

I felt butterflies dancing in my belly when Bomi stood in front of Chorong, I knew that you were going to give us what we were asking for and it was lovely how Chorong got to be with Bomi after all and got her happy ending. Being honest, I loved the ending so much; now watching the entire picture, it is the best ending. Plus, I adore open endings that only give an end to the main trouble in the storyline because it gives the reader the freedom of expanding the plot in their minds after the final period.

Another thing I must say is, your writing feels more descriptive and flows even better in these two final chapters. Actually, it have been progressing in every chapter, like you had pushed yourself with each passing chapter and it's amazing. I admire your determination and your skills.

Finally, thank you for sharing this story with us. A treasure. A marvellous work. I'm truly happy that you're a writer that dedicates some of her talent to this pairing and group :')

(Your mention at the end of the epilogue, the feelings are mutual. I know you know how much I appreciate you and it's heartwarming to know the feelings are mutual).