This is so well-written ❤️ I love the characterization

Chapter 4: Every chapter was great. I really enjoyed the “close to reality” genre and you write and capture them well. Hoping for more of that in the future. Thanks!

Chapter 4: wow, this is just so well written. There's a warmth feeling while reading this kind of piece, it's more like all you wanna do is keep reading the descriptions, no matter if the story plot wise is doing something you like or hate, all you cared about while reading is the soft words and very smart put details of every scene. The right is quite good too.

I got chills from all the emotions narrated. Sincerely, thank you.

Chapter 4: The fact that it almost felt real while reading this proves that you are really good at writing and expressing what you truly feel. I am so glad that authors like you exist. That you are here to share your knowledge and making reader's heart melt as if it is their own story that was told. You're a blessing authornim. Please write more. 'always gonne be here to support you ?

Chapter 4: Really good, written well, love this ♡

Chapter 4: 'failures are often just due to the terror their shadow inflicts upon uncertain hearts' - this is really a deep sentence. Damn, I can really hear Yongsun's voice in this short piece! That determination and letting go of her fears in the last sentence! That is a short yet impactful sentence. I got a good kind of chill reading this chapter (and no, it's not from the cold weather I'm having now). I think how this chapter spans out is really interlinked with the part I quoted. I also find it touching that Yongsun still thinks about Byul and giving her encouragement as this point of time where usually people think about themselves before the curtain opens, but then again, Byul has taken up such a huge part in her life. This chapter beautifully sums up the three chapters before it. Thank you for this beautiful story. I'm looking forward to seeing more stories from you. :) (I just need to add how much I love the title of the story. 'Flowers bloom' really represents the name of Solar's concert 'Blossom', and 'winter passes' shows the hardship and emotional roller coaster she went through for her own self to blossom. Again, I'm not sure if this makes sense aha...)

Chapter 3: Damn, the first paragraph already got me hooked. Love the description of the urban jungle. Ah, it's both saddening yet a relief (not sure if that's the best word to use) to read stories about Yongsun's failed auditions. She's really an amazing person to continue pushing for her goals. I really like this part: ' (...) fears never really get away. They simply change, with time, taking on new shapes, putting on new clothes.' This ties in very well with the countless number of failed auditions, and it's understandable to see Yongsun here still feeling insecure because after overcoming one hurdle, another one comes her way. I have no words to describe just how much I adore the paragraph describing the world in their eyes and the paragraph about building walls. It's really interesting if these paragraphs are to be compared, because while it seems like they still have this boundary between them, they ultimately still recognise that the other has something to hide, but they are able to still understand each other amid that boundary. Am I making sense, sigh. Ahh, gotta love how you linked back to Byul's cover of the song. Maybe it's really about Yongsun huh.

Chapter 2: I love how you build up the setting of the cold winter. Wow, for some reason I can really imagine the real Byul thinking of whatever that you wrote here, about her train of thoughts of being the temporary leader, and her worries about herself and Yongsun. This is quite a meaningful chapter about needing to meet expectations and the means of escaping/relaxing, even for a short while. Gotta say I love this line: 'Loud people sometimes have more meaningful silences.' I like this feeling of silence that I get throughout the chapter, which is quite fitting of the setting. This chapter makes me feel so soft, with the silence not being overbearing but more of them understanding each other even without words, like how Byul is able to tell how much Yongsun trusts her. It's a pleasant surprise to see them already as girlfriends here, and then with Byul saying that they've been a thing even before they became a couple, it shows that they know they had something special going on between them.

Chapter 1: Ah, I enjoyed reading this. There are so many part I like, like the part where Byul was observing how focused Yongsun was. Aww at Yongsun getting flustered in trying to explain how important Byul is to her :') Gosh, I was expecting something else from Byul too. That tension! (interesting how Byul got inspiration for lyrics from being in that close of a proximity with Yongsun though...) I also like how you said 'Hearts do not always reach, but words can help.' and then you linked the last sentence back to this.

Chapter 4: Love your writing, author-nim!
Hope you write more stories, you have a real talent for it ^^