Midnight Train

Description

Jung Wheein got on a train to Jeonju. After a nap, she woke up... only to realise the coach was empty. She was alone, it was late at night, and it felt like someone was lurking in the dark, watching her.

Foreword

So this is just a Wheebyul one-shot. I'm still in the process of moving abroad for work and I'll wait until I'm fully settled to write a proper fic. I kept this ship because I wanted to write a tiny bit more about these two hehe.

The idea for this oneshot came as I was myself travelling by train, and it took a while to finish it because I was unsure of the direction the story should take. As you'll see, I used a first person narrative. I'm not used to that in English. I usually think it doesn't fit this language too well. So let me know in the comments if it sounded natural or weird.

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zellybeans #1
Chapter 1: Your beautiful writing really has a way of tugging the right emotions. Reading this, it felt like it was me who’s experiencing everything. The pain, felt every bit of it. You’re now my favorite author! 😭
Honeyoong93
#2
Chapter 1: 2021 cz i love this story and wheebyul ofc
cyner9 #3
Chapter 1: i didn’t see that coming. at first i thought i couldn’t read this coz i’m a scaredy-cat but i didn’t expect that it will bring me to tears.

thank you for writing this story! :)
Vera2116
#4
Chapter 1: This was one hell of collercoster of emotions.... this was so amazing but so sad... I'm still crying ㅠㅠ
WeenieHut_Jr
#5
Chapter 1: MY FEELINGS
I mean tHis Is great BUT WHY DO I HAVE TO GET HURT
CheshireKat019
#6
Chapter 1: It's me. Yes, I'm crying. To be wheein is so painful.
angstphd
#7
Chapter 1: Wow you made an emotionless girl like me actually tear up for once in her life lol
Ok but I really enjoyed this story! It was written really well and I found myself caught up in it, soaking up every detail. I think this definitely needs more exposure to readers! I look forward to what you have in store for the future!
Harukijun1996
#8
Chapter 1: So much emotion shown, I felt tears rolling down my cheeks...thank you author-nim.
Squeakytoys
#9
Chapter 1: Thank you for sharing this. You’ve built up the story beautifully and your writing really makes the emotions within the story resonate.
I can only look forward to future works from you :)
RussetMeng
#10
Chapter 1: I was so scared at first (and I'm reading during the day ^^;), but I'm glad it's all in Wheein's head..
The unexpected passing of someone is always the hardest to accept..I hope Wheein can forgive Byul for being the kind soul that she is and let Byul go for her own sake...
Thank you for this poignant story!❤