Maybe

Description

Forbidden love is often the sweetest and most painful. It’s like holding a golden flame in your hand and watching it burn your flesh; you know you shouldn’t, but you can’t resist.

 

 

 

 

 

D: This is my first fanfiction starring real people, so I'm really worried about it....

Anyway.... I think the forward offers a better description than I could give, at least if I don't want to give anything away >_<

Foreword

Forbidden love is often the sweetest and most painful. It’s like holding a golden flame in your hand and watching it burn your flesh; you know you shouldn’t, but you can’t resist.

Unrequited love is another matter entirely. It’s the physical ache that follows, long after you’ve tried dousing the fire and applying the ointments. It just won’t leave. Eventually you think, just another day. I can handle that. Afterwards, I’ll finally be free.

It never works out that way. You stay calmly in the shadow and watch the one you love be with others. You can’t ever tell them; this thought tortures you from morning until evening as you silently listen to their breathing and watch the lips you wish you could kiss.

Until when was it worth living with this pain?

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missyb
#1
Chapter 3: Thank goodness I managed to dig this beauty fanfic up! It's so cute and fluffy and I think I'm gonna die from smiling too widely. Apart from the obvious fact that this story was adorable, I really enjoyed your description of events to the tiniest details, allowing the reader plenty of content to imagine the perfect scenario up. I especially loved how you described Hoya's tears as soldiers. Indeed, someone so tough on the outside is actually crying previous soldiers tears. Just wow~
salflower #2
Chapter 3: WAAAA so cute asdfghjkl & Howon was uke here I guess? e.o But who cares! I love the way you write this fic. Its so beautifully written ♥
TheChimeria
#3
Oh man this was so brilliant- the way Dongwoo doesn't just accept it but really struggles with himself was so well written ;__; This made my day because finding fics like this one is so hard and I'm glad I didn't stop looking <3
TheChimeria
#4
Dear god, the way you called Hoya's tears betraying soldiers just made me so happy right now.
seanjie #5
SO CUTE SO CUTE SO CUTEEEEEEEE~ :D
more please.
arimuchiu
#6
new reader here!!!! my god the confession was so cute!!!*-*
update soon please!
WhatsOnTheCeiling
#7
Stopping right at the "because i love you" part for now
THAT WAS THE CUTEST CONFESSION EVER! i'm sorry to all those cliche after school "I've seen you for the longest time and ive fallen in love" or rainy days "Please accept my feelings"
This took the cake
that was so cute
so sad
but so sweet
how things got cleared up sfbahjsdgvrhjefgvd gonna read the rest now
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"No, you stopped again"
LOOOOOOOOOOOL omg Hoya knows what he wants. XD
Oh this was cute. i really liked this XD I'm just sad that its over- wait.... its not over.... is it? O_O
Chrysalids
#8
yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes
mustmustmut1!!
lol i feel like such a , srsly. no dignity lmao;

omg.
CAN I JUST SAY HOW MUCH I LIKE THIS?!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your writing is really impressive, eeee! !!! and dino's an idiot and howon's such a uke. i mean the shirt riding up thing? omg how effin CUTE is that?! dongwoo must've been like "GODDAMN I NEED TO PUSH THIS BOY DOWN AND POSSIBLY HIM ON THE SPOT"
ok ignore me.

no, it's really good. i just get too excited sometimes.

HWAITING AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~
hyundeul #9
Oh man a sappy howon. HAYHAY, i seem to like how this is going, talk things through and get after that. Yeah. I do prefer a top!dongwoo over a top!howon. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! ...Never had i thought that i would talk about who's seme and who's uke here. :// but oh well..

Update soon!! :))