Target: Aquired

Description

Moonbyul finds out her target is actually the person she's been waiting for.

Foreword

A royal hall. Black and white marble floor. The walls were covered in fancy wallpaper. Stained glass in various patterns and colours filling the hall with a spectrum of colours and shapes, even when the sun was hiding behind clouds. Footsteps and the rustle of loose clothing echoed around the quiet hall, followed by a sudden slam of the door as Moonbyul entered, taking her hood off and admiring the intricate work and effort that has been put into the making of this grand hall.

Previously and originally posed on AO3

Warning! this gets worse the deeper you go. Starts off great, kinda lags behind and seems rushed at the end.

I don't plan on rewriting this anytime soon so... here ya go ^^;

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cjmoo_ #1
Chapter 4: Nice. The ending is open for interpretation. I'm guessing Byul was trying to save herself when she said that the previous targets fall under one of the categories she mentioned (abusive/alcoholic/people that misused various things)? Seems like Yongsun's really evil, because right from the start Hyejin was telling Byul to kill her and about her intentions getting exposed when she dies...
X-ZERB_areia
#2
Chapter 4: I dont get the end a little. So yongkong is bad?
lovechoco #3
Chapter 4: would there be more updates?
kidshark
#4
Chapter 4: So like, Yongsun is a bipolar or something?
_quietmoo_
#5
Chapter 4: ....thats it? :/