Falling Into Your Arms

What Happened to the Girls ?

- Up in the tree where Sunny and Sooyoung were hiding in -

'' Soo ! I'm slipping from this branch ! '' , Sunny said . ''  I can't reach you in time to catch you .'' Sooyoung replied . In her mind , an idea lit up . '' Look at the boy over there . '' , Sooyoung said . About 400 feet away , there was a boy that seemed to be playing tag . '' I will yell for him to come here and catch you . Alright ? '' , she said . '' Well , it is the only way to save me from falling , '' Sunny replied . '' WELL ? Quickly '' , she said . 

'' Hey ! You there ! '' Sooyoung shouted as loud as she could . The boy turned around and saw Sunny going to fall . He rushed forward as quickly as he could and as Sunny falling , he caught her in his arms . '' OH GOD ! That was so scary ! '' Sunny shouted out . She looked at the boys's face and said , '' Thanks , I guess you are my hero . '' . '' Oh ! '' No problem . Are you hurt ? '' , the boy said . '' It's okay , I'm fine .'' Sunny replied . '' By the way , I'm Sungmin . What's your name ? '' Sungmin said . '' I'm Sunkyu but please call me Sunny .'' , she replied . '' Well , who is your friend up there ? '' , he pointed at Sooyoung . '' Her name is Sooyoung . '' Sunny said . '' Psst , I like you better . You are pretty . '' Sungmin whispered . Sunny smiled and said , '' Thanks . '' . 

'' Well see you later . '' Sungmin said . '' Bye ! '' Sunny replied and he walked away . '' Ooh , you have a crush . '' Sooyoung shouted from on top of the tree . '' Oh , shut up . '' Sunny said .

- End of Chapter -

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Yeah , I know short chapter . I reply to comments now .

@she_ab_taeteuk5 : I love shipping TaeTeuk so of course I am gonna include them . 

@khrean03 : Yup , I ship them all to . So I'll include them .

@yulhae : sorry not including them 

@icefishy : Okay , I'll include them .

@siska_snowers : Sorry , I don't ship them .

@dinofish76 : LOL , I love that part too !

@Kpoplover_123 : Sure ! I'll update the meeting of DongHae and Sica soon !

@khrean03 : More coming up !

@flupyjinx : Okay but please don't rush me .

GreenT : I'm paring Yuri with Yesung 

Finally replied all the comments ! So do you guys like the idea ? If nobody comment , I'm gonna stop writing . Just kidding , but please comment .

- snsdtaeteuk

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BlueCupcake
#1
Chapter 5: Noooo! Please don't go on hiatus too long! I want to read more!!
exotaeng9 #2
Chapter 5: Update soon
YooniqueDJ
#3
Yeah snsdtaeteuk ! :)
What is your name btw ? What shall I call you ?

I'll be fixing the chapter / idea request you are requesting for at the moment; sorry, so sorry for the delay ! My school and life is so jam-packed of busy-ness >.<

The chapter (I think it should be called a chapter because I'm better at giving a start of chapters than ideas xD) is written by lychee68 & me so yeah :)

Also, just like what lychee said, everyone makes mistakes now and then, and there is always room for improvement ! :)

Hopefully I can help you edit or fix up some future chapters :)

And hopefully I'll be a good co-author !

I'm excited yet a bit anxious ^_^
lychee68
#4
Ahh I see now! ^_^
That's okay everyone makes mistakes and everyone improves so don't feel bad! :)
Take it as a positive thing and hopefully I'll be able to finish your idea request with MidnightSapphire soon!! :D
snsdtaeteuk
#5
@lychee68 Well , actually , said is like the only thing my teacher taught me to write .... so I'll take note of your advice and improve myself ! It is also okay to be strict although it sometimes make me feel like a bad author ......
lychee68
#6
Also, try using some other words rather than just using "said" all the time~

For example:
"Look at my new Keroro cap Kyuhyun oppa!" Seohyun waved the cap around excitedly.
Kyuhyun beamed at the other. "It's cute!"

This will make your writing richer and more interesting for readers :)

(Sorry I'm not supposed to be reviewing ^_^" Hope you don't mind!)
lychee68
#7
Annyeong!
I'm doing your idea request with MidnightSapphire (Because she's quite busy at the moment)! Is that okay? :)
Just finished reading the chapters~ ^_^
Although we're helping with the next chapter, I think you should write chapters in more detail.
Also, put each speaker on a new line- that way the reader will understand the story more clearly.

Haha sorry for saying all that- I just wanted to give some constructive criticism! Hope you don't mind! :)
YooniqueDJ
#8
Go check your inbox snsdtaeteuk ! :)
I sent you a few messages :)
YooniqueDJ
#9
Chapter four is amazingly short =))
One paragraph ! Anyways, I also have a few questions about your request ~
I'll inbox you.
Heheheh :)
YooniqueDJ
#10
Chapter 3: [Btw the comment below was for chapter 2] Yeah your chapters are very short >.< LOL ! And once again new speaker = new line ^^
Remember that snsdtaeteuk ~
Hehe sorry about my comments, just like to help you improve ^^ My reviewer side [I'm not a reviewer though] is getting the best of me at the moment >.<