Chapter Four

The Queen's Dragon
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He is greeted by the cool of the tavern inside, the much desired dim light and the undesired musty air. He doesn’t blame Minjun for the last one, as only hot and sticky air would swamp in if he opened the windows. This and well loud unpleasing noises.
It takes him a minute to adjust to the different brightness and only once the temporary blindness disappears before he can spot the wide grinning man with the waggling eyebrows behind his counter. Polishing spotless glasses, just out of boredom.
“Congratulation, you escaped the Siren,” his grins grows wider as Jiyong only exasperates a sigh, sitting on one of the many empty bar stools. Shoving a couple of coins, pre-counted over the desk mumbling, “As always, please.”

Though he has to add that despite the shabbiness of the inn and furthermore the room, the food and the disgrace of alcohol. The Innkeeper and self-declared bartender – yes he does blame him for the abuse of the rum – is a really fine guy, and he can’t nag about him at all.
They have a great relationship as far as a relationship with Jiyong can be great, and he is aware that the fault is with himself. He tends to distrust people, but that just something life has thought him so far. Minjun is a chatty fellow, especially when he is drunk. Fortunately, he isn’t as cheerful as a particular fisher, and mostly Jiyong is at least tipsy too, which makes everything but especially socializing a lot more enjoyable. Also, this guy has excellent values, and he appreciates it a lot that Minjun often drinks a glass or two with him. It portrays Minjun’s noble character or just an exceptional sense of profit making. Since he mostly comes back in the early morning hours, there aren’t any other guest around. Or barely, and surely not to get drunk but to enjoy some shabby brunch with hard boiled eggs and overcooked beans. Honestly, he isn’t sure if he perhaps is the only guest staying here anyway. It won’t surprise him, because who else would settle here? Not that it is that bad, but they just were no other ships at the port anymore.
So it’s entirely possible that Minjun’s intention isn't altruistic nor purely out of friendliness. Whatever the reason is, he surely won’t complain. They’re some others around, usually coming in the evening, using the tavern as their pub to meet and catch up. Mostly fishers, like him, which isn’t reassuring as it means that everyone struggles, and it surely wouldn’t get any better if the merchant doesn't come back soon. It also implies that people will be more depending on fish. The need for more fish doesn’t guarantee their loan to become better. It leads to more people will be out there fishing, more people fishing doesn’t mean plenty of fish, but eventually less fish available. Ultimately, it will be even harder to make a living let alone keep some savings.
Commonly he leaves when they gather, and for a change that has nothing to do with him avoiding people. Unlike Sungyu’s remarks, he does prefer to be punctual. Start his work as early as possible to get out with the first waves to get a little further and have more time to fish. Always with the mild hope in the back of his mind to not be on the brick again of getting floated out. His resolution apparently hasn't worked out so far, but there is always a tomorrow. One reason for his failure is a brunette obstacles that occasionally makes leaving early harder as it should be. The woman in question is a bit older than him and pins her long silky hair up when she works. She is the main and now the only waitress of the inn. Sandara is her name, though the regulars call her Dara, and so does he now. Her voice is gentle this makes her a pleasant company even when dealing with a massive hangover. She is always cheery, slightly clumsy but willing to work hard and her best. The only bad thing he could say about her is that she is almost too overly worried about everyone’s wellbeing and a tiny bit nosy. This means that he almost has to sneak out to get away without ending up with an uncalled early supper. Apparently, he isn’t very good in doing so. She catches him to often to his liking and won’t let him go before she has seen him eat at least a piece of bread. He absolutely hates this trait in her as he feels patronized and controlled. But it’s hard to shout her off, not when she steals or splits her ration with him. Obnoxious that he often skips it to avoid any extra cost or because it’s too pricey for him. Yes, she is, unfortunately, a very sweet and lovely lady.

It’s also the time and place where he gets his nautical yarn from. As much as he prefers the company of solely an attractive woman or a good ol’ bottle, shared with none other but himself, and occasionally maybe a friend. It’s not the worst idea to get along with the others. Even when that means to grab deep into his pocket and pay for a round. Just the little things to be accepted and earn the privilege to be seen as a mate. Most sea stories are more poppycock than anything else, but in every humbug, there is a spark reality. Which might be at some point crucial or come in handy and even if not it’s always nice to not j

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-Tigress-
#1
Chapter 5: Ah this chapter still affects me. The ending part about Jay and the story shared, ugh it's so bitter and sad without being bitter, you know? I am so so so so curious though as to what that letter says and so really, honey, get to writing haha ;)
but honestly, I don't think I say it enough but I am so very much enjoying how you're building this world. It's enticing and fun and rounded and I am so very curious how it will play out! Especially since SOMEONE isn't giving me spoilers lol. But the way that you take the time to describe the surroundings and really set the scene, while adding emotional connections to places and people, it really does remind me of a published novel. Wel done my dear ♡
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#2
Chapter 4: LMAO Bomi's inrush soll makes me laugh. Okay though, I really like the additions made to this chapter and how you cut it. Channie was perfect in his role and the idea of a gentle giant baking is just adorable ♡.♡ I tried to guess who the unclothed man was but there are so many idols that I gave up! I guess I'll wait and see haha.
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#3
Ooooooh I see you mention VIXX as characters.... that makes me think your little revenge is coming for my Ken Ken haha. =D
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#4
Chapter 4: Awww gosh well that was ended on a sad note. I actually loved how natural that conversation between the tow of them felt. It really did flow so well and lead one topic to the next... great job! And Minjun, despite only having a bit if "screen time" really shines as a character. Bomi's appearance made me laugh, and Minjun's comment about her. And then of course Jiyong's ungenerous opinion of baby Sohee at the moment. He'll change his mind when he reads the note and sees her! Thank you so much for the update darlidadarling, it really made my day better ♡♡♡
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#5
Chapter 3: OMO first off I have to say that your mention of "puppy of a human" made me giggle, that very much sounds so much like Baekho ♡.♡ And then Sunggyu is in perfect casting, he is definitely the stingy and pompous dockmaster!!! So I really liked seeing those two even with their small roles and how well they fit them!!! Oh and i see why you wondered about the petri-heil haha. =) It works!
I really love how Jiyong's chapter is so different from Sohee's pov, like you see how he is very much tired and grumpy at having to work and very much desires to leave Afohnies! The opening made me laugh, I can picture him being too stubborn to give Sunggyu the satisfaction of seeing him fail haha. But I did pause at the Moby reference because I wasn't expecting to see a literary work references in a a fantasy world haha. It worked, though, and I like how you talk about his education here without yet absolutely having to.. it sets who he is and how he came to be himself in really nice tones. My only other question is if everyone will speak with the same accent sunggyu has? or is he from somewhere else that gives him that way of speech?
The dolphins bit made me laugh. I was not expecting Jiyong to be a fisherman and so it was a small shock to me, but it makes so much sense and yes, I think he is like a lion in dress... ill-suited to this and wanting to be back where he is king! So I look forward to more!!! FIGHTING!!!
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#6
Chapter 2: OH MY GOSH this is a beautiful intro!!!
I love the way it starts off, talking about the hymn of Afohnies, and then shifting into about how it's all just not happening right then. That made a drastic comparison that was really striking! I loved picturing the banners over the windows and the red roses in the waters, I have to ask, it is for her Crowning that they throw the flowers?
I love how you explaind the setup of the city through using her memories. Thaat sibling scene was especially great, it showed the joy and closeness that they shared while also explaining how things work. And then you go and rip the heart out by telling of his death! T.T But that was a really great depiction, too. The way that you spoke of the hungry and broken families, and then shifted it in to speak of greed and the effects of it. I like the way you were like, "even the fairest man" and then shifted to tell that you meant her father, that was so cleverly done!And really sad too.
The explanation of the festival is probably my favorite part of the chapter: I love the part you wrote about the lanterns and how she pictures them as souls. Her wishes afterward really made it feel striking and it lingered in my heart!
And then you end with that sentence. Goodness that was really good! I really liked how you don't actually tell that she has become the Queen, but well I mean it's implied in the title so it is obvious haha, but I like that you didn't state it outright. And the adjucting the burdensome crown... Perfect.
I am so looking forward to reading more!!!
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#7
OMG you updated!!!! ♡♡♡♡ I will read as soon as I'm out of a moving vehicle hahaha
DGNA_Forever
#8
This looks so cool! I love kingdom stories, so I look forward to seeing what you do with it♡. Good luck!
-Tigress-
#9
Chapter 1: OMO honey is this advert supposed to be in here? =)
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#10
ASFGHJKL THAT DESCRIPTION! OH I got tingles!