Deceptive Beauty

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Description

People saw her as the innocent one while I was known as the antagonist.
What they don't know is my side of the story.

Foreword

Hi 

I really wanted to write a story from an antagonist's perspective. Because no evil is truly evil (unless they're psychopaths). My aim is to make you so frustrated with the main character you'd wanna jump in the story to kill her off yourself. But we'll see whether that shall work or not~ It shall also be my first time posting a story using first POV, because it's important for this story. Thank you for giving this story a chance, and I hope you shall enjoy it!

Warning
If you want to read a fluffy, typical, romcom story, then click away right now. This won't be for you.
This is a cynical and tragic story that critically represents the flaws of today's society.
It may leave you bitter and fill you with frustration, but hopefully, offer you a new perspective.

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An entry for What's Your Number Contest
Prompt 79 - The ones who notice the storms in your eyes, the silence in you voice and the heaviness in your heart are the ones you need to let in.

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Author's Thoughts
Blu3Wind
Thank you everyone for reading! Would you like to read a one shot from a different character's POV? Find the poll at the A/N in Chapter 23 :D
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KCpoplover #1
Wow! This is a nice story! Thank you, author-nim.
mygenie #2
Chapter 23: One of the best stories I've ever read
DGNA_Forever #3
Chapter 23: I really like how you wrapped this up, still keeping it realistic and not having a totally happy ending. There were lots of lessons learned throughout the story, and I'm glad she finally might accept herself for who she is. Thank you for writing this. It was nice.
DGNA_Forever #4
Chapter 19: I knew that was coming. With everyone abandoning her, she got what she deserved. You don't get someone to love you back by force, and I hope she'll finally realize that Myungsoo will never be hers.
DGNA_Forever #5
Chapter 13: Chapter 13: She's so devious! I liked the moment with Krystal and Myungsoo getting ice cream, though. And poor, poor Suzy is going to be so broken. I feel so terrible for her! As for Krystal's scars, I'm really curious about them...
DGNA_Forever #6
Chapter 8: Krystal the twisted biach. Ugh. She's horrid! I feel so bad for Suzy and Myungsoo.
DGNA_Forever #7
Chapter 6: First of all, I want to let you know that I absolutely love baseball, so this chapter was very nice with it at the center. It cracked me up when Krystal called the bat the "baseball stick". Poor, naive girl!
I wish she would realize that Myungsoo nay not love her how she wants him to, but that doesn't mean that he doesn't love her as a friend. Just get over yourself already!
DGNA_Forever #8
Chapter 3: Oh goodness. This story reminds me of Mean Girls...which I watch every time I see that it's on lol.
I feel bad for Krystal, and wish she would just accept herself and move on with her life. There's no need to try to draw the attention of someone who will always only see you as a friend.
Natocuty #9
Chapter 23: I'm happy with how things turned out.
Suzy was always the one who stuck by Soojung's side despite all the she put her through. That shows you that there is some "good" left in this cruel world. I'm glad Soojung finally opened her eyes. Yes, Myungsoo is not perfect.
She was too in love with him that she put him on a high pedestal when in fact he made a lot of mistakes. Both she and Suzy deserve better.
I believe that Suzy, Soojung and Kai helped each other, they helped each other change for the better, after many, many, hardships of course.
But Suzy is indeed too kind, Soojung did some unforgivable things yet she found it in her heart to forgive her, that's commendable. I wonder if there are people like her in real life...I believe she is too "good", too "nice" and yes, stupid, hehe.
But I believe the world needs more people like her.
Natocuty #10
Chapter 17: That's low. Even for her. I can't believe it. She let a guy ing her. How could she even do that? She has gone way too far. Her past does not excuse her current actions. She thinks Myungsoo would want her? She ruined a person's life. She's vile. Even Kai refused to take any part of this. She no longer has any humanity left in her. I don't think she can be saved. Not anymore. She's lost. It's sad. She was corrupted by this world.
But Myungsoo would not want to be with her. Not because of what she did (he does not know) but simply because he has never felt anything towards her and he won't now.
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